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She was a detective.

Her name is Melissa D. Sapphire she had long flowin red straight hair that come down to her hip and sparkled green orbs she had childbaring hip and mile-long leg. you cud only see the half of her cuz the other half was on dark.

She was a detective.

she follows the shadows in the front of her wall sitting in da floor wonderin who killed her dad and mother. She was lonely like dis for long times and it was gettin sad. She cry for long hour like dis all nights she was getting skinny and had been kick out of the cheerleadin team. She was messed up really and she was gettin anoraxic. To top it ff she had a sacret identity nobody know of she was a detective.

Her mom and dad was killed by Kira. They were nice ppl but drug adiccts and now they die of heart attacks. She know it wuz Kira but she had no prove.

She howver had 1 person she know wud help but he wusnt here and she wusnt there and dey werent here or there it was sad. She saw his name in TV everday.

L

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L was at the cumpuker looking for kira websites but there was only more and more porn. (lol i know so annoyin lol)

there was a girl at the window and she was starring inside at L inside but Raito was like freakin the hell out. "whatz the problem dude?" ask Masuda.

"p-p-p-p-p-p-p-p-person i-i-i-i-in t-t-t-t-the w-w-w-w-window!!1" Raito pointe.

"Dont be silly-aaaaaaaaaa" L fall of a chair and spill cakes. The girl knock timdly into the window. "pls let me in the inside" she beg "my parent died of kira i want to revenge that bastar"

secritly Raito thinks who the hell is that girl she is pretty but scary he was sacred but L go upto and open window she climb in "airgatou for saving me and she fall on L and L kiss her accident.

(lol omg dat happened to me 1ce the guy was cute tho not a creep like L lmao)

omg that was my 1 kiss is with L she think but she stands up and pulled her skirt down Raito come and help her and push L out "U creep Ryozaki dont crowded her" Raito kindly.

"thank you what is ur name" she ask Raito and Raito say "Raito Yagami" and Ryozaki say "dont say her ur real name Raitokun she is could be kira" and Raito say "no u dumbass she looks like we trust her" and Melissa say "thank u Rato"

"what is your name? Ryozaki and L ask her "what the hell do you want" sucked the finger annoyinly. "i want to kill a kira" she said detreminedly "i can do it better then you" she say with resulution.

"but u have to understand that people dying of heart attack has increase in the year last year was 230 cases of cardiophobia u can die also if you try" say L still sucking and Raito say "dont discourage her she can hardly try if she wants to plus we need all da ppl we can against kira this is a big one" say Raito and his father look disapprovely. "Raito this is no time to bring more ppl" "but daddy i can take caer of her i promise" "ok"

"i take care of myself" say Melissa angerily but Raito push her "your young" "ok yeah" she say.

L sit on the computer and suck his finger he doubt Melissa is Kira but he has no prove but Melissa has her doubt that L is kira cuz he look like a creep. dis is da man who killed my parents she think she suddenly feel so lonely.

Raito notice tear on her eye and brush it of.

"its ok dun be sad" he say 2 her and Melissa smile this boy was nice her heart beat and really hott. (lol raito is so hott i wanna kiddnap him lol)

Her name is Melissa D. Sapphire.

She is a detective.

She is in danger.

And she is in love with Kira.

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ok lol dis is mah first deathnote ficc i luv it myself tell me what u think! - xoxoxoxox gracey