First fanfiction please review don't hate. Rainbowdash POV

I do not own Divergent or My little pony

How it all began

"Man,I can't believe I just finished the whole entire series of daring do now what am I going to read." I'm at Twilight's library trying to look for a new one but there is nothing here that's just as awesome as Daring Do.

"Don't worry Rainbowdash I'm sure you'll find another one you just have to look harder." Just as she said that I found a mysterious black book with a gold circle and in the center of it was golden flame. Twilight saw me holding it and said "oh that's one of the newest ones I don't know what it is about but feel free to read it." Maybe I will. "I'll take it."

One month later

I continued reading this Divergent book and it's the best thing I ever read. I'm now at the end of chapter thirty-eight oh my gosh what will happen next.

The bullet clicks into the chamber. Maybe it will be as easy to let him shoot me as it was in my fear landscape, as it is in my dreams.

"NOOOOOO don't do it Tobias!" I yelled. He is about to shoot Tris.

Maybe it will just be a bang, and the lights will lift, and I'll find myself in another world. I stand still and wait.

Can I be forgiven for all I've done to get here?

I don't know. I don't know.

Please

I can't read what's next but I have to the suspense is killing me.

THE SHOT DOESN'T come.

Oh thank celestia

He stares at me with the same ferocity but doesn't move. Why doesn't he shoot me? His heart pounds against my palm, and my own heart lifts. He is Divergent. He can fight this simulation. Any simulation.

"Tobias," I say. "it's me."

And that is when Twilight steps in but I pretend she's not there and continue on. Luckily she doesn't speak. Then I finished it.

"So how is it." She asks.

"It is the best thing I ever read in my life!"

"oh come on to the with me tell us everyone is going to be there." Sweet.

We arrive and I tell them the story. Everyone seemed impressed. "By the way," Rarity says "Why did you bring us here?"

"Oh well during my studies I came across a spell that would take somepony into a world they most desire and since Rainbowdash likes that book she got I was going to test it on her." Twilight explained. Oh my gosh this is the best thing that has ever happened to me.

"Alright let's do it!"

"OK." her horn started to light up and the spell lit up around me but it lit around the others too. This can't be good.

"Uh Twilight?" Applejack said "This can't be good" Fluttershy says. " No it can't." I say.

And then the world faded to black.