So this is my first try writing a fanfiction. Don't be to hard on me, okay :c?
English fails and weird first chapter.
Disclaimer: I don't own hetalia nor the characters! Buti can dream, right?...
Pairings: Germany/Fem!Italy
Too late. Felicia was too late. „No, no, no, no,no...", she muttered. She was getting out of breath and slowly her legs gave out from all the running. „C'mon Feli! You can do it!", she said to herself to manage the last few metres.
After a few minutes more of the running she finally saw it. The kindergarten. „Thank pasta!" she yelled, earning a few odd looks from the people on the street.
Once she came near the small building she cold already see a little boy sitting on a stone. „Marcello!" she called her boy. The little kid with the chubby cheeks looked up and smiled. „Mama!" he ran towards her and hugged her. „Why are you so late? All my friends are already gone." „I'm sorry cutie, Mama had to work longer today." „Mama I'm hungry!", the little kid said as he was picked up by his breathless mother. „Let's go home marcello, then we'll eat some pasta." „The one from yesterday?" „Yes." „But I don't want to!Not again." „Marcello, it'd be a waste if we thew it out, right? And you know we can't afford that." „...okay", the small boy was pouting now and reminding her of her big brother. How much she missed him, she wish she could visit him, but she couldn't afford a ticket to Italy, let alone two.
As she started to walk home with her precious boy, she thought about how her life managed to turn out like this.
Ludwig was getting tired. He has been working on the same sheet of paper for hours now. He looked at the clock. 8pm. Verdammt! He's been working too much again much to his big brothers dismay who just happened to walk into his office „West! Kleiner Bruder! Was hab ich dir gesagt? Du sollst nicht so viel arbeiten!" „Bruder, lass es. Ich hab die Zeit vergessen, auserdem wollte ich jetzt sowieso gehen." „Hey! Wir wär's mit nem Bier kleiner Bruder? Ich geb dir einen aus!" Ludwig though about his brothers offer but decided it was best to go home. He was close to falling asleep on his desk. „Nein danke, ich bin todmüde. Nächstes Mal?" „Naja, okay, dein Pech. Bis morgen West!" „Bis morgen."
With a heavy sigh the big german stood up and stretched his arms. Beein the owner of a law firm sure was exhausting.
So what do you think? Shall I continue? Or just delete it? It's my first try writing a fanfiction, not ot mention in english.
Sorry if there a any mistakes, unfortunately I don't have a Beta...*cries*
So all Mistakes are my entire fault.
Translation:
„West! Kleiner Bruder! Was hab ich dir gesagt? Du sollst nicht so viel arbeiten!" - „West! Little Brother! What did I tell you? Don't work so long!"
„Bruder, lass es. Ich hab die Zeit vergessen, auserdem wollte ich jetzt sowieso gehen." - „Brother stop it. I forgot the time and wanted to leave now anyway."
„Hey! Wir wär's mit nem Bier kleiner Bruder? Ich geb dir einen aus!"- „Hey what about a beer little brother? Drink's on me!"
„Nein danke, ich bin todmüde. Nächstes Mal?" - „No thanks, I'm dead tired. Next Time, okay?"
„Naja, okay, dein Pech. Bis morgen West!" - „Well, okay, your loss. See ya tomorrow West!
„Bis morgen."- „See you tomorrow"