okay, i took this off to revise it a bit, but after reading it several times, i realized that there basically nothing wrong with it.
all I changed was the title.
sorry about that!
Don't hurt me!
I do not own beyblade.
Sometimes things would get pretty weird when we were beyblading in the stadium against a really strong new opponent, but we would just pass it off as special effects. But when something majorly freaky occurred during practice? That's when we finally realized it was all too real.
It all started at a normal practice. Max, Tyson, Kai and I were going head to head at the exact same time, to see who was the strongest out of the four of us (thanks to Tyson). After we all released our blades into the dish and they all collided, we didn't think to expect what happened. When they all hit with full force, a giant surge of energy generated out of nowhere and engulfed us.
We had no idea how the next event came to be.
I found myself in some sort of forest. I was in a tree, so that's how I knew. I hung on for dear life, hoping I wouldn't fall. Then I heard some sort of trumpeting sound. I looked up at the sky to see not your everyday blue bird, but a giant blue dragon. It trumpeted again and then disappeared from view. I knew only one thing.
We weren't in Japan anymore.
I looked down to see if I could spot any of the others, then saw that I was higher up then I thought. I panicked and gripped tighter to the branch I was placed on. I called out to see if anyone was around to help me, but when no answer came, I knew I was stuck. I sighed and loosened my grip, doubting that I would fall if I just stayed put. But then I thought about it. I was raised in the mountains and climbed up trees all the time, why was I scared? I sat up on the branch and looked around. All the trees looked about the same size and stature, so if the tree I was on was sturdy, I could probably get around by going from tree to tree. I held on to the trunk of the tree to keep my balance and stood up. I saw that a branch from the tree to the left had itself tangled with a branch from the tree I was on. I checked for the same on my right and figured that that would be how I would take a look around.
I hopped to the tangled branches and found the binding was sturdy enough to hold me up, so it was easy from there to continue on through the trees.
After a while of going from tree to tree, I saw the blue dragon flying overhead again. It looked familiar, but I couldn't remember from where. Ignoring my thought, I continued on.
Looking on, I noticed that the forest was much larger than I anticipated. I looked down, no longer afraid and finally found Kenny and Max! I jumped down from branch to branch to meet up with them.
When I was just a few branches away, I heard an unfamiliar voice and saw that there was someone else with Kenny and Max.
"Unknown entity approaching!" the squeaky voice said. Then a stream of digital numbers flew right past me, scaring me out of my skin. I hung onto the nearest branch for dear life and called down.
"Don't fire!" I said. "It's me, Ray!"
"Ray?" Max called up. "Is it really you?"
"Who else would it be?!" I called. "Now please call off whoever that is so they don't fry me alive!!!"
"Oh, sorry about that, Dizzy must've gotten carried away." Kenny called up.
I jumped down from the branch and came face to face with a small, purple and green puppy.
"Ray, meet Dizzy." Kenny said.
"Dizzy" and I had a little staring contest before she spoke up.
"Sorry for nearly blasting you to oblivion." She said.
"Just don't do it again; you scared me half to death." I said.
We all had a laugh, then things got a bit serious.
"So where are we exactly?" I asked.
"According to Dizzy," Kenny answered, "we have landed in the world of the bit-beasts."
"The world of the Bit-Beasts… like where they originate or something?" I asked.
"Precisely, this is the place where all Bit-Beasts are born." Dizzy said. "We are born of two parents, as you humans are. After we mature, we go off on our own to get stronger. Once that is completed, we have the choice to stay with our birth parents, start a family of our own or go out and contribute to the side of good as bit-beasts in the human world."
"I see now." I said. "Did you decide to come to the human world?"
Dizzy nodded.
"I was to be Kenny's bit-beast." She said. "But there was an electrical storm when I had to come to him, so that's how I was locked inside his laptop."
"Wow, so that's how it happened." I muttered. "Then does that mean that Driger and Dranzer and the others were meant to come to us too?"
"That is correct." Dizzy said. "Every Bit-Beast has a purpose and an element or force of nature that communes with it. I used to have some sort of earthern fire that communed with me, but that power has weakened since I was locked in Kenny's computer. Now I find that I have a new power that communes with data. I shoot a large electrical data stream from my mouth and it paralyzes my enemy. It really is quite useful."
"Uhm, do you think we could keep moving?" Max asked. "I wanna find Draciel."
"Oh right, let's go." Dizzy said, and she led the way. "Draciel doesn't really live specifically anywhere. With that shell of his, he can live anywhere at all."
"Then how're we going to find him?" Max asked.
"Oh, Draciel knows when someone's looking for him." Dizzy answered. "He can tell when that person's intentions are good or bad, so when a kind person like you is looking for him, he bound to come to you some time or another."
"I get it, so what're we gonna do 'til he shows up?" Max asked.
"Well, we could pay a visit to Dragoon." She said.
"But we can't do that without Tyson." Kenny said. "If we did that, he'd never forgive us."
"Oh, I'm sure Tyson has already found Dragoon." Dizzy said.
"How do you figure that?" Max asked.
"The Dragoon species is one of the largest bit-beasts in creation. He's extremely easy to spot." She said. "Look up."
We all looked up and saw the blue dragon I saw earlier. It made the trumpeting sound and then disappeared from view.
"The Dragoon species use trumpeting sounds to do two things." Dizzy said. "One is to notify other Dragoons that he's around, and two is to signify that he's extremely happy."
"Can you tell what he's trying to say?" Max asked.
Dizzy nodded.
"It can be easy to tell." She said. "When a Dragoon is trying to notify everyone of his presence, the sound sort of sounds formal, and much louder than all other sounds, that's how you tell. When a Dragoon is happy, you can usually tell, since the Dragoon would probably be doing loop-de-loops or figure eights while it trumpets."
"I get it." Max said. "Then the Dragoon that went overhead must be the boss, since he's letting everyone else now that he's coming through."
"That could be possible." Dizzy said. "But no one can really tell unless the Dragoon tells them in person. Anyway, we better keep moving if we want to find the others."
"Right." We all agreed and continued on our way.
After about an hour, we saw a large group of black and blue creatures at the foot of one of the trees.
"I told you that you set it too high!" one of them shouted to another.
"No you didn't!" the other said. "You said it was just fine!"
I looked up into the tree to see what they were arguing about. I couldn't believe it. There was Kai. In the tree and hanging on to a branch for dear life. I saw that one end to a rope was tied to his ankle and the other end was tied to another branch. It was probably a trap set for food, and poor Kai got stuck right in it.
"Those are foolish Batrachoid bit-beasts." Dizzy said. "They take after the poisonous Toadfish with their webbed hands and feet and fat faces. Not very likeable and they're always causing trouble, especially amongst themselves."
"Uh, guys?" I said. "You might wanna see what they're fighting over."
The others looked up into the tree as I did earlier. The in-sync gasp from them told me they saw what I did.
"It's Kai!" Max squeaked. "We gotta get him down!"
"Leave the Batrachoid to me." Dizzy said. "I'll distract them while you guys try to get Kai down."
"Are you sure?" Kenny asked. "There are at least fifteen of them, are you sure you can fight them off?"
"Sure I'm sure." Dizzy said. "I only need to hold them off until you guys get to Kai, and then I'll join you."
"I'm not following." Kenny said, confused.
"Just trust me." Dizzy said. "All you need to do is get into the tree where Kai is and let me do the rest."
"Oh… alright Dizzy, if you insist." Kenny gave in, and we snuck around the tree in order to start climbing. I went on higher than the others because I thought I saw something hiding in the tree, but I found out it was just my imagination.
"Hiya Kai!" Max chimed when they got to where he was hanging on.
Instead of being happy to see them, Kai was serious and very anxious.
"Took you all long enough to find me." He said. "Could you please get me out of here? Now would be nice."
"Don't worry, Dizzy's on it." Kenny said.
Kai looked confused, and then understood. He looked down to the black and blue fish creatures being blasted to oblivion by the little green and purple puppy.
"Hey Dizzy!" Max called down. "We got Kai!"
Dizzy stopped blasting and jumped up into the tree to meet us.
"Dizzy, Kai. Kai, Dizzy." Kenny did a quick introduction and the two simply nodded to each other. Dizzy then hopped over to the branch Kai was tied to.
"Looks like you're in quite a bind, Kai." she said. "This is a special kind of steel rope. I'll try to break it, but I can't guarantee it'll work."
"Just. Try." Kai said, getting aggravated. "But please be careful."
"Right, Kai wouldn't want to end up without a leg!" Max joked.
"That isn't funny, Max." Kai growled.
"Sorry, sorry." Max apologized, and Dizzy aimed for a random spot on the steel rope.
"Let's hold onto Kai so he doesn't lose his grip." Kenny suggested.
"I'll do it." I volunteered. I started to jump down from the branch when I slipped and fell.
"Ray!" Max and Kenny gasped.
When I thought I was going to fall and hit the ground hard, someone caught me. Kai had let go of the branch and swung by the rope like a pendulum to catch me. I looked to the ground and saw the Batrachoid bit-beasts trying to grab at us.
"We could use a little help here!" Kai called up.
"Allow me." a different voice said. Then a pair of talons extended down and Kai and I grabbed hold.
"Dranzer! What're you doing here?" Dizzy asked.
Dranzer pulled us back onto the branch Kai had held onto previously and perched himself onto a nearby branch.
"I saw Kai and his teammates fall from the warp." he said. "I found them all unconscious but Kai. Despite my suggestion to stay until they awoke, Kai said we should go on ahead for a look around."
"And then he got stuck." Dizzy finished.
"Precisely." Dranzer replied.
"Then why didn't you just cut the rope with your talons?" Dizzy asked.
"That's the thing." he said. "I can't. Someone put some sort of... spell on my talons that dulls them and prohibits me from using them. The same with my wings. I can't fly long distances as I used to."
"I see." Dizzy said. "But who could've done that? You're one of the most powerful bit-beasts around."
"I am also wondering the same thing." Dranzer said, and then things got quiet.
"SO..." Kai broke the silence. "Are you gonna get me out of here or not?"
"Oh, right." Dizzy said, reaiming her attack.
"Data Blast!" she exclaimed, and the stream of data sliced through the rope easily. "Well, that was easier than I thought."
I helped Kai up onto the branch and we all breathed for a moment.
"So what're we gonna do about those guys down there?" Max asked, motioning to the growing mob of Batrachoid bit-beasts.
"I'll handle them." Dranzer said. "Being a fish kind of beast, they hate fire."
He spread his wings above him and sent dozens of small fire balls raining down on the mob. Frightened, the beasts ran for the hills.
"There." he sighed. "They won't be bothering us for awhile."
"We should probably head to Dragoon's place." Dizzy said. "There, we will be able to reopen the Time Warp and send these guys back home."
"But what about Tyson?" Max asked. "We need to find him before we go home."
"True…" Dizzy muttered. "Then we could probably find Draciel and he'd be able to find him."
"But we have no idea where he is." Kenny said.
"He's near Dragoon's house." Dranzer said. "About two miles south in a lake surrounded by forest. He's staying there temporarily while Sharkrash get a different lake settled for the little one."
"I see." Dizzy said.
"What do you mean by, "Little One"?" Kenny asked.
"...Absolutely nothing." Dranzer said, realizing his little slip-up. "Let's get going. We have to get there before dark."
He glided down to the ground and waited for us.
"Dizzy, do you know what Dranzer meant by "Little One"?" Max asked.
"Maybe I do, maybe I don't." Dizzy said, trying to avoid it. "Anyway, let's get going."
Now we were all curious to what Dranzer meant by "little one". Did it mean a baby? Or a younger bit-beast friend? We had to know.
"C'mon, Dizzy." Kenny said. "Tell us who the "Little One" is."
"I can't do that." Dizzy replied. "It's nothing you have to know."
With that, Dizzy and Dranzer both refused to talk about that subject any longer, so we all kept walking in silence.
After what felt like hours, we came to a cliff.
"Over there." Dranzer said, motioning above the vast forest. "Hidden among the trees is where Dragoon lives. There's a chance that Tyson is already there."
"Then we better keep going." Dizzy said. "Though at this rate, we might not get there before dark."
"Then we'll have to find someplace safe down there to rest for the night." Kenny said. "But while it's still light out, let's go as far as we can."
We all climbed carefully down the cliff and made it into the next giant portion of the forest.
The trees seemed somewhat different in this part of the forest, being slightly taller and thinner. I looked one over and aimed to climb it, but then realized that the branches were much too high, so there was no way I could get up there… unless I fell from a higher place. (sweat drop)
"C'mon Ray!!" Max called.
"Oh, sorry!!" I called back; they were already ahead of me.
"This part of the forest is much more different compared to the forest we just exited." Kenny said.
"Yeah, it's impossible to climb the trees here." I said.
"We're not here to look at the scenery," Kai scolded, "we need to find Tyson then get back."
"Right, right." Max said. "Let's go."
As we continued, I had the strangest feeling that we were just getting into an even bigger problem than we intended to. Hopefully, things would go smoothly. (Good luck with that!!)
and now chapter two is finally in the works.
again, i apologize for removing this (in all truth, i was just sad I was getting no reviews T-T)
please don't hate me.
ciao