Author's Note: After reading the prologue a couple of times, I realized it did suck and was a little TOO short for its own good. So I decided to redo it. I also plan to edit the other chapters. Read and see what I did. Well, I hope this prologue is better. Enjoy and tell me how you liked it. Also notice the changes to the other chapters. Well, I should stop talking so you can read. JA!
Disclaimer: Notice my name is not the same as the creator of DBZ. That means that I do not own DBZ or its characters. I am also not stealing from Chelsee's CM story. I got permission to do this sequel from her, so you can't sue me!
Contradicting Mission: Quest to Save Vegeta-sei
Prologue
One year has past since I completed my quest to save Aeesu-sei from the Tahch-jin. I don't know how I managed to succeed, demo I did. I barely managed to survive. I took a tremendous amount of abuse from both the Tahch-jin and the Aeesu-jin. I was kicked, punched, had numerous bones broken or fractured, was zapped by that scepter Henning had, forcefully rendered unconscious, and put through many other kinds of torture. I never wanted to go through that again or have to experience anything like it. I wanted to forget what happened or put it in the furthest reaches of my mind, never to be recovered again.
It was now a time of peace on Chikyuu-sei. It had been ever since I defeated Cell three years ago. Everyone was living in happiness and went on each day with normal lifestyles. Okaasan had a second musuko, Son Goten, who was now san-sai, 3-years-old. Since Otousan had died before Goten-chan was born, I acted as Goten-chan's niisan and tousan. I made sure I set a good example for my ototo because he looked up to me. Okaasan was always proud of the examples I set for Goten-chan. She always told me so.
Demo, whenever I got time to myself, I spent it recovering from the mission. I still had some unhealed wounds: emotional and mental. When I first got home, I realized that I was not quite emotionally or mentally with it. I felt pain in the places where I got hurt and I cried at night. Sometimes I still got pains and sometimes I still cried at night. I hid all of this from Okaasan and Goten-chan, so I wouldn't worry or hurt them. I didn't want to take my pain out on them and still didn't, so I hid in my room whenever I got that funny feeling I got whenever I thought about the mission. Even though I was a lot better than when I first came home, I wasn't sure I would totally be healed in the future.
Little did I know, demo I was going to have to embark on another mission. Demo, I was going to find out that it was to be harder than the first. It was going to take all my wits and powers to complete this one. I may not even survive this mission to complete it. I was going to have to save Vegeta-sei from destruction...
Next CM: Quest to Save Vegeta-sei: Son Gohan once again meets up with Kami Larkas. He receives his instructions for his next quest and finds out that this time, the mission is a lot harder than his last. The stakes are also a lot higher. Will Son Gohan accept the mission? Find out in the next part!
So how was this one? Did it give a little more information needed to make it easier to understand the situation? Please review! Ja!
ssj2songohan
Disclaimer: Notice my name is not the same as the creator of DBZ. That means that I do not own DBZ or its characters. I am also not stealing from Chelsee's CM story. I got permission to do this sequel from her, so you can't sue me!
Contradicting Mission: Quest to Save Vegeta-sei
Prologue
One year has past since I completed my quest to save Aeesu-sei from the Tahch-jin. I don't know how I managed to succeed, demo I did. I barely managed to survive. I took a tremendous amount of abuse from both the Tahch-jin and the Aeesu-jin. I was kicked, punched, had numerous bones broken or fractured, was zapped by that scepter Henning had, forcefully rendered unconscious, and put through many other kinds of torture. I never wanted to go through that again or have to experience anything like it. I wanted to forget what happened or put it in the furthest reaches of my mind, never to be recovered again.
It was now a time of peace on Chikyuu-sei. It had been ever since I defeated Cell three years ago. Everyone was living in happiness and went on each day with normal lifestyles. Okaasan had a second musuko, Son Goten, who was now san-sai, 3-years-old. Since Otousan had died before Goten-chan was born, I acted as Goten-chan's niisan and tousan. I made sure I set a good example for my ototo because he looked up to me. Okaasan was always proud of the examples I set for Goten-chan. She always told me so.
Demo, whenever I got time to myself, I spent it recovering from the mission. I still had some unhealed wounds: emotional and mental. When I first got home, I realized that I was not quite emotionally or mentally with it. I felt pain in the places where I got hurt and I cried at night. Sometimes I still got pains and sometimes I still cried at night. I hid all of this from Okaasan and Goten-chan, so I wouldn't worry or hurt them. I didn't want to take my pain out on them and still didn't, so I hid in my room whenever I got that funny feeling I got whenever I thought about the mission. Even though I was a lot better than when I first came home, I wasn't sure I would totally be healed in the future.
Little did I know, demo I was going to have to embark on another mission. Demo, I was going to find out that it was to be harder than the first. It was going to take all my wits and powers to complete this one. I may not even survive this mission to complete it. I was going to have to save Vegeta-sei from destruction...
Next CM: Quest to Save Vegeta-sei: Son Gohan once again meets up with Kami Larkas. He receives his instructions for his next quest and finds out that this time, the mission is a lot harder than his last. The stakes are also a lot higher. Will Son Gohan accept the mission? Find out in the next part!
So how was this one? Did it give a little more information needed to make it easier to understand the situation? Please review! Ja!
ssj2songohan