Chapter one: Misunderstood.
Jim was a reble. He hated pretty much everything except solar surfing, which made him kewl. He hated school because nobody understood him. He usually just slouched in the very back of the class and took a nap while the boring teacher talked alot about math or science or whatever. But Jim never got caught not paying attention, becase he was kewl.
One day he was solar-surfing. Doing all of this dangerous stuff, like cool tricks that some times got him in trouble with the cops. But today the cops were all off eating doughnuts or whatever, so Jim could do whatever he wanted.
"WHHOOOOO-HOO!!!" Jim yelled as he did a dangerous trick, "WHOOOO- HOOO!!!!!"
Then he flew really high, like up above the clouds high, and dived down all a sudden, making his brown hair flap like crazy in front of his deep-blue eyes. They were really mysterious eyes the kind that made you wonder maybe if he didn't want people to get to know him too good.
Aftre a lot more dangerous stunts, the cool boy zipped home on his awesome sollar-surfer that he made himself when he was eight with his father, and so he could sneak in through his windonw and so that his mom wouldn't get on his back.
But his mom was totally on to him. She was waiting in his room to tell him off. "JAMES PLEIADIES HAWKINS!" she screamed with angry eyes. "Didn't almost getting blown up on Treasure Planet teach you anything, young man?"
"Mo-OMM," said Jim.
"You know you haven't been the same since your father left. You need a good influence in your life."
"And you need to GET a life," Jim thought. He knew he would be totally busted if he said taht, so he only said "whatever." He almost wished that he had said yes back when Silver was telling him to come with him and sail away and be a pirate or something. "Yeah, that would've been wicked aweosome," Jim thought.
"Are you listening to me, young man?" Sarah yelled with a look of pure haitred. While Jim had been thinking stuff to himself, she had been saying about a zillion things he didn't heard. But he didn't need to hear more rules anyways.
"What is all this hubbub about?" said Captain Amelia. She had suddenly burst into the room all a sudden when Jim and Sarah didn't see her. "Since I have been living at the BenBow for the last three months with my husband, Doctor Doppler, after we got married once we were back from Treasure Planet, I feel I have the total right to know all the goings-on of this household," she said bossily. She sometimes was the captain even when she wasn't. She was kind of a cat too, and British with red hair that was short. Her eyes right now sparkeled like green, angry emeralds under her pretty eyelashes.
Then with out warning at all all of a sudden Doppler fell thru the door. "Whoops!" he said. He was clumsy and a dog/human with glasses and a nose that made you laugh.
"Oh, Doppy, that's what I love about you," Amelia laughed. She helped him up to his feet by him holding onto her arm. He was blushing a whole lot, though.
"I'm glad you too are here," said Sarah, putting her hands on her hips like always and Jim rolled his eyes. "I was just telling Jim that he needs a good roll model because he is a trouble-making teen. Don't you think so too?"
All the adults nodded at each other and all looked at Jim all at the same time.
"Why are you all gaining up on me?!?" Jim yelled at the top of his lungs. He was sooo angry right now, you wouldn't even believe. "Just go away," he said angrily. They just didn't understand. He wanted to cry. But rebels don't cry. He hadn't cried since his dad had left him when he was a little boy not too old, but old enough to remember his dad walking out on him and never coming back.
Authors note: I hope you like my chapter. I spent just about forever on it. This is actually my first fanfic, so I need a lot of reviews and enouragemnt and stuff. THANX 4 READING! :) :) :)
Jim was a reble. He hated pretty much everything except solar surfing, which made him kewl. He hated school because nobody understood him. He usually just slouched in the very back of the class and took a nap while the boring teacher talked alot about math or science or whatever. But Jim never got caught not paying attention, becase he was kewl.
One day he was solar-surfing. Doing all of this dangerous stuff, like cool tricks that some times got him in trouble with the cops. But today the cops were all off eating doughnuts or whatever, so Jim could do whatever he wanted.
"WHHOOOOO-HOO!!!" Jim yelled as he did a dangerous trick, "WHOOOO- HOOO!!!!!"
Then he flew really high, like up above the clouds high, and dived down all a sudden, making his brown hair flap like crazy in front of his deep-blue eyes. They were really mysterious eyes the kind that made you wonder maybe if he didn't want people to get to know him too good.
Aftre a lot more dangerous stunts, the cool boy zipped home on his awesome sollar-surfer that he made himself when he was eight with his father, and so he could sneak in through his windonw and so that his mom wouldn't get on his back.
But his mom was totally on to him. She was waiting in his room to tell him off. "JAMES PLEIADIES HAWKINS!" she screamed with angry eyes. "Didn't almost getting blown up on Treasure Planet teach you anything, young man?"
"Mo-OMM," said Jim.
"You know you haven't been the same since your father left. You need a good influence in your life."
"And you need to GET a life," Jim thought. He knew he would be totally busted if he said taht, so he only said "whatever." He almost wished that he had said yes back when Silver was telling him to come with him and sail away and be a pirate or something. "Yeah, that would've been wicked aweosome," Jim thought.
"Are you listening to me, young man?" Sarah yelled with a look of pure haitred. While Jim had been thinking stuff to himself, she had been saying about a zillion things he didn't heard. But he didn't need to hear more rules anyways.
"What is all this hubbub about?" said Captain Amelia. She had suddenly burst into the room all a sudden when Jim and Sarah didn't see her. "Since I have been living at the BenBow for the last three months with my husband, Doctor Doppler, after we got married once we were back from Treasure Planet, I feel I have the total right to know all the goings-on of this household," she said bossily. She sometimes was the captain even when she wasn't. She was kind of a cat too, and British with red hair that was short. Her eyes right now sparkeled like green, angry emeralds under her pretty eyelashes.
Then with out warning at all all of a sudden Doppler fell thru the door. "Whoops!" he said. He was clumsy and a dog/human with glasses and a nose that made you laugh.
"Oh, Doppy, that's what I love about you," Amelia laughed. She helped him up to his feet by him holding onto her arm. He was blushing a whole lot, though.
"I'm glad you too are here," said Sarah, putting her hands on her hips like always and Jim rolled his eyes. "I was just telling Jim that he needs a good roll model because he is a trouble-making teen. Don't you think so too?"
All the adults nodded at each other and all looked at Jim all at the same time.
"Why are you all gaining up on me?!?" Jim yelled at the top of his lungs. He was sooo angry right now, you wouldn't even believe. "Just go away," he said angrily. They just didn't understand. He wanted to cry. But rebels don't cry. He hadn't cried since his dad had left him when he was a little boy not too old, but old enough to remember his dad walking out on him and never coming back.
Authors note: I hope you like my chapter. I spent just about forever on it. This is actually my first fanfic, so I need a lot of reviews and enouragemnt and stuff. THANX 4 READING! :) :) :)