John was walking down route 1 with eevee out of its pokeball so he could have some company. All of a sudden John heard a scream and looked down. He had stepped on a rattata's tail! "All right my first battle!" said john. "Eevee tackle! Now bite! Pokeball go!" "Come on, come on, YES I caught it!" Running towards Viridian City anxious to tell Prof. Oak he caught a pokemon, John found a pidgey lying on the road. "What's wrong" asked john. "Pidg Pidgey Pidge!" said the pidgey. "oh no! it looks like your wing is broken!" "ill get you to the pokecenter immediately. But first get inside the pokeball!" Grabbing a bike from a girl he saw fishing he yelled "ill return it I promise! My pidgeys wing is broken" "Wait! That's my bike! I just got it!" but it was too late. Misty's bike was again taken from her. "just after ash replaced it too." Opon arrival too the pokemon center in Viridian City, misty saw john get his pidgey back. "Here you go john" said nurse joy as she handed back his pokeballs. All your pokemon are all right. "WHERE IS MY BIKE?" "it is out on the bike rack. I am sorry I took it but my pidgey had a broken wing." "oh good you didn't destroy it like ash did." "What's your name?" "john" "you know you remind me of ash. He was a hopeless pokemon trainer. Just like you. "are you planning on challenging the gym leader?" Asked misty "yes I am" said john. Then you may want a water pokemon. Viridian gym is full of rock pokemon. "who do I get one" asked john. "You rent a fishing pole and go fishing." Answered misty. "COOL" John rented a fishing pull and caught a dratini. He fished for 2 more hours but caught nothing. "I Am ready" said john as he stood in front of the gym. "did you catch a water pokemon?" Asked misty. "yep I caught a dratini!" "a Dratini? WOW ive always wanted one of those!" "ive come for a gym match!" said John as he entered the gym. "OK I haven't had a gym battle in awhile because IM substituting for a friend. We will use 2 pokemon each." "BROCK!" said misty. "I found someone that reminds me of ash!" "you mean hopeless?" said brock. "well he seems to be better then ash at this." "I said I want a battle!" said john. "oh yeah I forgot" "OK my first pokemon will be GEODUDE GO!" "Go eevee! "geodude seismic toss now!" "Eevee! Return eevee! Go dratini! Dratini watergun All right!" "geodude. Return! Go onix!" Dratini watergun!" "oooooooooooonnnniiixxxxxx" "onix, shake it off! Use bind!" "dratini use bubble now!" "ONIX!" OK you win here is your badge" YESSSSSSS I GOT IT!" "Hey brock did you give away another badge?" asked brick,the real gym leader since brock left to go with ash. "nah only the third today. All from pallet though." "Darn I'm way behind!" said john thinking of justin and krieger.
I hope you think this is better. Remember if I get enough comments and people wanting to hear more ill make a website for the story.