Hello all thanks for checking this out. First off i would like to say this is my first story, and i just came up with this idea. I wrote this real quick as a kind of lead in to the story. If you guys hate it that's fine. Just let me know if i should continue. Let me know what you all think. I do not own star wars, if i did i would be rich.
Intervention of the Old Order
The young Jedi knight Anakin Skywalker, was a sight to behold. The highest midicholrian count ever recorded, and seemingly endless growth. With every battle he grew stronger, more powerful in the force, and more skilled in battle. He was the shining light and future of the Jedi order, and hero of the republic. This however was but the surface of a man.
Anakin Skywalker however did not like to view himself as the holovids would have him perceived. He was a troubled young man, a man with many secrets and fears. Like all other young Jedi, he sought to be the best Jedi he could possibly be. This was a point of conflict for the young man as he felt emotions, so strong in fact it frustrated him. He found himself time and time again trying to release these emotions into the force, but it seemed like the force would not take them. Anakin often got frustrated with the preaching's of his former master, and friend Obi-Wan Kenobi. He seemingly could not let go of his emotions and fears, which lead him to believe he wasn't a proper Jedi. After all if the Jedi council, and all the other Jedi could let go so easily, there had to be something wrong with him right? There was also the fact that he wasn't sure that the Jedi would do what it took to ultimately end this war, would they kill their enemies to achieve peace?
Then there where the visions Anakin kept having. He kept having visions of pain and death, suffering and grief. Unbeknownst to the young knight these visions were the product of a scheme by the nefarious sith lord Darth Sidious. Sidious was using the dark side to show Anakin a vision of what would happen if he turned to the dark side, knowing that Anakin's fear would make him rationalize that this was in fact the fate of his beloved wife Padme. Sidious sought to use Anakin's growing doubt about the Jedi, and his place among them as well as his fear to make him his new apprentice.
The force however has a will of its own. The force would not allow its chosen one to abide by anyone's will but its own. Disillusioned with how easily the Jedi council was being blinded, and infuriated at the Sith lord Sidious for believing he could defy the will of the force. The force set a plan in motion, a plan that not even Sidious would see coming. The force would remove Anakin from the watchful eyes of the sith and Jedi. The force would send Anakin a vision, one that the dark lord could not interfere with. The force would enlist help from, not a single person but a group of people. Now to get the chosen one away from his inevitable downfall, and to stop the oppression of the sith from returning.
Anakin lay next to his wife, sleeping soundly snuggled next to the woman he loved. Anakin began to shift in his slumber. He was beginning to tense in fear as would, yet again have to watch his beloved wife die. Just as he was beginning to try and fight the vision from his mind, something strange happened. The vision dissipated, leaving him shocked as now he was on his knees in his own mindscape. A soothing voice, at the level of a whisper he could barely hear was speaking to him. "Fear not my chosen one, for I have not forsaken you, I offer you help, and should you take it, it will free you of your nightmares, and all your fears." Anakin hesitated, he could not believe this, it had to be too good to be true. He spoke, "who are you, show yourself, how can you be in my head?" "Foolish child, you are my chosen one, one who I have granted more intimate knowledge of myself than anyone else, search your feeling and you shall find my name." Anakin closed his eyes, sensing all that was around him. Anakin's eyes shot open "the force but how this is possible." "time is in short order, my chosen one heed my words, and later will I explain my reasons. Travel to Tython you shall, there I have prepared a group of my cherished followers, and former Jedi. They will help you, go now chosen one time is short. Get to your star fighter and follow my path to Tython." "I will leave immediately." Replied Anakin, as he could feel the urgency and importance of his leaving. "Anakin tell no one of your departure, mind your wife, make sure she doesn't speak to anyone of this." With that Anakin Skywalker left a holo recording for his beloved, snuck to the Jedi hangar and left.
Anakin was beginning to doubt the message he received as he entered in the coordinates into the hyper drive, he had never heard of this Tython. The hyperdrive kicked in and several hours lated he was amazed at the presence he felt from the planet he saw in front of him, he couldn't explain it he felt home. He felt as if this planet emanated the force. He approached the planet to land his star fighter, in what appeared to be a clearing with some old structures around, he could feel the light side of the force prominent here. As he landed and got out of his star fighter he noticed, what appeared to be a holo recording walking up to him. Even though, this was obviously a force ghost he realized, he had yo admit she was quite stunning. Smiling the woman turned to Anakin and said, "Welcome to Tython ancient home world of the Jedi, I am Nomi Sunrider, and the force has brought us together along with the others, to help guide you, young Skywalker, be at peace I am your ally.
And that's all for now. What do you guys think, did i get you guys interested? Let me know if i should continue, i wouldn't be able to write a story no one wants to read.
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