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Summary: A poem describing Thorin's gold madness and the hobbit who had so much more to offer. Slash. Thilbo/Bagginsshield.

AN: Hello. This is my first contribution to the Hobbit fandom, so I wanted to start small but am still a bit hesitant on the matter. However, I am willing to give it a go and see how I'm received. Please enjoy!


The Value Given


Gold fever in his eyes, gold fever in his eyes

Curling a frown upon his lips and a crease upon his brow

Paling the skin about his face, his hands and all other places unbound

Stealing his breaths like heavy wine, heaving, praising, whispering sweet

A fluttering gleam of piercing light brights his eye in mountains deep

Gold cradled in his palms and slipping from his fingers

Vast is the fields of cold beauty that glitters so prettily within the chamber walls

Pouring at the king's feet, laden heavy on his chest, so smugly in his arms

Pushing, pushing the heart of blood and flesh and pulsing life from his breast

Down, down, down the coins slip, stained in the bitter crimson hue of existence

The king crackles, a sound unpleasant to those whose eyes see only a sickened man

And oh how those eyes will watch, with a silent, unwavering gaze

As his king, his friend, his last and forever caresses shining bits of treasure intimately

How the one he longs for gazes upon the mounds of stones as a lover in heated passion

With his voice low and husky was he sings of fortune and glory and a throne reclaimed

Sees how his beloved tosses him aside for a lover whose voice is silent and touch is cold

However, a Baggins will not be likened to a mistress for a pile of rocks

A Took is no obedient dog that awaits his master's call

So he does as any respectable hobbit would do

Gives a Baggins' stiff upper lip and lets his Took do the walking

Straight into the lines of the enemy

With naught but a stone in his hand

And love in his breast

For you see

It is Thorin, who is blinded by the shimmer of riches, who cannot see

The beating heart of gold that lies hidden within warm flesh

And the open hands willing to give it to him

If only he'd drop the pebbles in his hands

And reach for it


AN: So what did you think? I know some of it seems very straight-forward, but in regards to quite a bit of the lines, there is far deeper meaning in them which gave them the form they have. So any non-cannon things (other than the slash) that make an appearance in the poem were probably something meant to give meaning, rather than portray actual events.

Please review…