This is a story I thought up of, you might like you might not. First of all it is bleach but I'm adding a new character. And the pairing will be Hallibel x Tamashii (Ookami no Tamashii) which translates into soul of wolf. And I'll tell you this now his Bankai is ichigos with a little variation and ichigos will be different. And also Hallibel probably won't appear till later on.

Tamashii= soul

Speech "I'll put you down!"

Thoughts 'just you wait'

(Disclaimer I don't own bleach)

Now to the story!

(Unknown location

Eleven years in the past)

"How weak, you wish to protect but you lay there in your own pool of blood" said the man as he took several steps forward " now watch as I take the life of the one person who loves an cares about you" the said ."Tamashii no Ookami" he said with a smirk "how ironic because of your Tamashii(soul) Ill be taking hers."

( Karakura Town present time)

Tamashii woke up in a cold sweat, he thought to himself, ' that dream... how pitiful I was.' As he got up he took a quick look around his single room apartment it wasn't much to look at no real furniture or decorations other than his bed and nightstand. "man I hate having to get up and go to school." He stood and got ready for school anyways.

(Side Street)

"Hi I'm Ookami no Tamashii I'm 16 I stand at 5ft 11in and I have white scraggly hair and a scar that reaches from my right eye brow down through my right eye and ends about an inch or two under my eye, although I still have both my eyes I keep my right closed at all times and why, is my business only... And i have special spiritual powers, in this world there are 2 basic types of beings those who are whole which are in turn good soul who haven't passed on or have transformed into soul reapers, and those who are hollows, beings who have been said to be corrupt and feed on the souls of not only humans and soul reapers but also other hollows, and I can see these spiritual beings and...I can fight these spiritual beings ." Tamashii was walking down the road as he saw his friend stomping some yankees(delinquents) into the pavement. "Now are one of you shits going to replace the flowers" Ichigo said with a devious smirk. "Aaahhh he's going to kill us... We will" the yankees said while running away at great speeds. 'Damn shity people' Ichigo thought as he picked up the broken flower vase" they're gone now" as he said that a small transparent girl appeared "thank you" she said. Ichigo had his usual glare on, he turned and looked away "your welcome, and be careful" he said while walking off. Tamashii upon seeing the girl disappear started to gain on Ichigo "Oi Ichigo who were you talking too?" he said in a monotone acting like he couldn't see spiritual beings (Tamashii is hiding the fact he has spiritual pressure). As Ichigo turned to face him "O it's nothing really" he said while scratching the back of his head. "Then let hurry and get to school" Tamashii said. "Fine" Ichigo replied.

End of first chapter

Sorry it's short but I don't feel like writing anymore tonight and there will be a time skip