First crack at poetry. Hope it doesn't suck too badly.
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Invisible, But Not To You
I am the quiet one
The one they can forget about
Lost in the constant changing sands of time
I'm forgotten
When I'm invisible
You can see me
I'm hanging back
But you draw me forward
Whether I like it or not
I may complain
But underneath I'm glad
Because you know I want to be seen
You're smart, kind and funny
Everyone loves you
Yet you still notice me
Even when I fall back
You push the others aside and tell me I'm your friend
I thank you for that
You know me better than I know myself
I can forget my barriers with you
The walls no one else can break
You give me the love I've never had
The love I've always needed
I'm invisible
But not to you
When no one else can see me
You do
And I thank you
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