ZeroFox: Here's the revised edition. I've decided to rewrite the entire first chapter and breaking it down to separate parts so it'll be easier to read. Mirai, cue the disclaimer for the story
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It was a peaceful evening in the wilderness as Piccolo was calmly meditating with his eyes closed on top of a high bluff. "Concentrate your energy, focus your mind on your objective," he coached himself while his whole body began to give off a white aura. Just then the Namekian felt a chilling breeze blow by him, causing him to open his eyes. He then detected a dark energy coming from behind him, causing him to stop his meditation. "I can sense that you are there, whoever you are," he said in a calm, yet gruff tone while getting to his feet; "State your business here with me now and I just might let you go off easy." As if on cue, a cloaked figure rose up from behind the bluff and landed just a few feet from Piccolo. "I apologize for causing you to fret so much," stated the cloaked figure. the Namekian let out a huff, recognizing that his speaker was a woman from the tone of her voice.
"It's been a while since I last saw you Ma Junior," continued the cloaked figure, causing a shocked look to for on Piccolo's face; "So have you taken over the world yet Ma Junior?" Piccolo spun around to look at the cloaked figure, a mixed look of shock and curiosity on his face. "Only a handful of people know me by that name," he stated, trying to regain his composure; "I have a few questions I want to ask you. How do you know who I am, why are you here, and who are you?"
The cloaked figure then let out a small chuckle, angering the Namekian fighter. "Stop laughing and answer me!" he snapped as the cloaked figure merely looked at him. "I know anything and everything about you Ma Junior, or would you rather have me call you Piccolo. Or rather yet, how about I call you Kamicollo since you and Kami are now fused together again," she replied. Piccolo froze with shock when he heard the cloaked figure say that as he then became even angrier.
"Only two people in the entire planet know that about me!" he shouted; "How do you know these things about me? And what do you want with me?" The cloaked finger then lifted her right hand up, extending her index finger out to point at Piccolo. "I want you Piccolo!" exclaimed the cloaked figure; "I'm here to claim you as my own!" "What do you mean?" growled the Namekian fighter; "You better explain yourself now or else I'll blast you to hell!" "If it will entertain you before I capture you, I guess I can tell," chuckled the cloaked figure; "First off, you are the reincarnation of the Demon King Piccolo Damioah, thus making you the devil. Now, you are fused with the former Guardian of the Earth Kami, making you God as well." Piccolo continued to listen on, stunned as to how the cloaked figure knew these things about him. The cloaked figure then got out in her left hand a glowing dark green talisman before looking down at it. "Hmm…it started to emit dark green glow," she noted before smirking; "That means you are the Key I am looking for!" "What the hell are you talking about?" snapped Piccolo, ready to power up his ki for a battle.
"Since the talisman is emitting a dark green glow, it means you are the Half God-Half Devil Key, one of the seven keys of Pyron," stated the cloak figure, shocking Piccolo; "And to answer why I am here, it's because I'm here to collect you along with the other six keys so that I may open the gateway and release the dreaded mighty god of destruction, Pyron, back into this plane." Piccolo's eyes widened with shock as soon as he heard the name Pyron. "NO, YOU DAMN FOOL!" he shouted; "IF YOU RELEASE PYRON BACK HERE, HE'LL DESTROY US ALL!" "He'll only do that to his enemies," said the cloaked figure, chuckling; "Not to his allies."
After the cloaked figure said that, two bat wings sprung out from behind her as her right hand began to glow a dark greenish color. "And to answer your question of who am I? Well, let's just say I'm an old friend of yours from your past," said the cloaked figure, getting into a fighting stance, "Now prepare yourself Piccolo because I'm coming for you! You shall be the first of the seven keys to be collected!" "The hell I will!" shouted Piccolo, powering up his ki; "I'm going to stop your madness here and now before anything starts!" In a split second both fighters let out a battle cry before then charging at each other.
Piccolo then brought back both his hands into fists before launching a rapid barrage of punches at the cloaked figure. However, she merely dodged the blows with ease, swaying her body from side to side with little effort. Piccolo then tried to catch his opponent off guard by aiming a kick at her legs. The cloaked figure saw what the Namekian was trying to do as she merely jumped off the ground. The cloaked figure then did a flip over the tall fighter, about to land behind him. Piccolo turned around and flung a ki blast that seemingly hit his target. Much to his dismay, he only saw the cloak his attacker was wearing land on the ground with no body in it.
"Damn it, she's fast whoever she is," growled Piccolo, as he heard a chuckling. "I must say, you've improved quite a bit since the last time we met," said a female's voice behind him; "Unfortunately for you, I've improved just as much and then some more." Piccolo then turned to she who was speaking behind and who he was fighting against. His eyes widened and jaw dropped with shock before letting out a shaken gasp as he saw who he was fighting against. "No…it's you!" he choked in a frightened tone, "It can't be…there's no way! You were defeated a long time ago, Goku killed you with that Chou Kamehameha."
"Ah, he merely assumed I was dead," replied the female figure, "What he didn't know is that I survived his attack and went into hiding all this time, healing and becoming stronger. Now I am back, stronger and better than I was before and this time Son Goku isn't here to stop me!" In the blink of an eye the female figure charged at the surprised Namekian with such speed that he didn't have time to put up a defense. In a split second, Piccolo felt a gut-busting punch connect straight into his stomach that felt like the fist was about to burst through the other side. The force of the blow stunned the Namekian fighter, causing him to collapse onto his knees and eyes go a blank white. "One down, six more to go," chuckled the female figure as she felt Piccolo collapse onto her. She then did a small chuckle, taking her fist out from Piccolo's stomach before grabbing onto the stunned fighter's body so he wouldn't keel over. "There will be 6 others joining your fate," stated the female figure; "And once you 7 come together, I shall unlock the gate and release Pyron back into this domain." However the female figure felt Piccolo shuddering as he struggled to speak.
"I…couldn't…stop…you…" he began, coughing weakly; "but…I know…who can…defeat…you!" "What are you babbling about now?" questioned the female figure, a frown on her face; "If you think Son Goku will stop me with his stupid friends like last time, you're even more idiotic than I thought. I know Goku is dead, he's been dead for over 4 years since Cell took his life at the Cell Games." Piccolo did a small chuckle, causing him to cough violently while he continued to speak. "You're right…Goku has been dead…for quite some time," he began; "But…his son…G-G-G-Gohan…he will… he will stop you! He will…defeat…you…and put…an end t-t-t-to your…evil…ambitions. He…will…defeat…you and…Pyron…like he…did beforeeee…" With that last sentence, Piccolo's body went limb as he fell unconscious. "It was about time he shut up, the pathetic fool," grumbled the female figure, flinging Piccolo her shoulders; "I better get him to the castle now before anybody else shows up and becomes a bother to me." The female figure then looked up at the sky as she saw a full moon, her eyes narrowing into a glare. She could see an image of Son Goku on the face of the moon in a fighting pose, ready to fight her. "You thought you got ride of me before Goku," she began, chuckling evilly; "But now I'm back and stronger than ever. And this time you won't be able to stop me. I will bring back Pyron from his imprisonment in the Negative Void and together we will destroy all those who oppose us." Her eyes then flashed a red shade as a red aura formed around the female figure's body, causing the sky to blacken and a storm to form. "I will make it a personal vow to cause great pain to your son Gohan should he try to interfere," she shouted; "I will make sure he will fall at my hands and I will personally deliver his head and heart to Pyron as a token of honor once he's been released!" The storm grew more and more violent as the female figure let out a loud laughter. "PREPARE YOURSELF WORLD! YOUR DESTRUCTION IS AT HAND!" she screamed, lifting her head back to laugh into the tempest night.
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