Just an opening chapter, not sure on it. May make some edits to it,
but suggestions maybe?
+please review, criticism - i enjoy reading.
- erm, do you prefer this version, or the old one?
annabel x
APOV.
God, I hated being human, I mean. Human's are fine, I used to be one, god damn it, I'm still one. Since stupid Stevie Rae burned off my vampire-ness. She sat up gradually, with all these thoughts running through Aphrodite LaFonts' head, and especially just after just having a vision, she felt like crap. She walked into her bathroom, sensing somebody was outside, but not going into it, so she shrugged of the sense. She stepped into her Marble Vichy shower, and smiled, as she felt the warm water trickle down her back. "I love being rich." She said aloud. As she ran her hand across the black diamond tiles, before putting her anti-black head scrub on her face. She smiled as she stepped out of the shower, about 30 minutes later. She could still sense somebody outside. "COME IN GOD DAMN IT!" She called out, thinking that it was Darius, or somebody. But to her surprise – and I mean surprise, It was Zoey Redbird.
"Hey." Zoey murmured.
"Hello." She said back, she could hear her blood pumping through her ears, damn; she though, hoping Z wouldn't notice how nervous she was getting.
"Do you mind if I say in hear tonight?" She said, shaking gently.
"Yeah, sure." She smiled, as she hugged her tightly. She was like her best friend, not that she'd ever admit it though, happily, Zoey hugged her back.
Aphrodite sat on her bed, and Zoey sat next to her. She grinned, kissing her lips gently.. "Sorry, Z. I just wanted to know how it felt, you know. How it felt to kiss you." She felt the blood rush into her face. She smiled, her baby smile...
ZPOV.
I sure did love that smile, It made my heart melt, and well.. DID SHE JUST KISS ME? I don't know. "Hey, It's fine with me." She winked playfully, leaning in for another kiss, as she lay ontop of Aphrodite, running her hand down her chest playfully, as she kissed my half-moon crescent gently. I grinned, as I felt butterflies flutter through my stomach.
"Thanks." She said, as she pulled away, breaking the kiss, not wanting to go into anything to x rated, just yet.
"What for?" Aphrodite said back, seeming confused.
"You know, just being here. Like, letting me stay in her, and stuff." She smiled back, grinning slightly, biting her lip.
"Stuff? That's such a crap word, Zoey." Aphrodite giggled, as she pulled on some joggers, and a vest top; which I noticed, fitted her slim body amazingly, bringing out her breasts, and showing her cleavage. I laughed, shrugging.
"I know, but it's my word, Aphrodite." She grinned, again.
"I love it when you grin, Zoey." Aphrodite looked to the ground. "Have I mentioned that?" Aphrodite grinned, hugging me gently, I inhaled her gorgeous sent.
"No, Aphrodite, I don't think you have, and have you noticed, you're seeming to be melting, since the human-ism's came back." She winked gently. Before kissing her lips gently, - again.
She kissed me back, and I ran my hand up her top, across her belly button, and up her back, trailing her spinal cords, she grinned gently, as she looked into her eyes, then ran her hand over the bra grinning, she looked into Aphrodites eyes. "I gotta go get changed." She smiled nerdishly. "I'll be back." She kissed her cheek, as she walked out of the room, smiling guiltily; as she was looking at the floor, she ran smack bang into Stark.
"Shit Zoey, I didn't see you." He said, as he pulled me close, for a hug.
"Oh, sorry Stark. I didn't see you either.." She sighed, damn, I can't be unfaithful to him... "I gotta go get changed.. bye." She smiled, and walked out into her room, pinching herself, over the scene in the hall with Stark.