Hello, any and all readers who decided to read this! firstly, thank you! Secondly, I'm re-writing this story to fix the grammar and plot mistakes! so anyone re-reading this and noticing it's different, this is why! although I don't know why anyone would want to re-read such a poorly plotted story... OK, enjoy the remake and the hopefully continued story!


kk, I figured out that my sister had seven stories and I only had three! so I'm making this new story. Plz enjoy!

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age 14:

"OMG! I'm so tired of you girls!" Buttercup exclaimed, angrily kicking over a pile of clothes by the bed.

"Well, you're the worse!" Blossom retorted. All the while, Bubbles was crying on the bed.

"I don't wanna spend anymore time around you lunatics!" Buttercup shouted turning to leave the room. Bubbles started crying even more.

"Don't say that! Even though you're mad doesn't mean you have to be so dramatic!" Blossom said, making Buttercup stop by the door. She walked up to Bubbles and began wiping away her tears when Bubbles suddenly pulled her face away.

"No! I don't wanna be the baby of the group anymore! I can take care of myself! I wanna grow up!" Bubbles exclaimed, standing up and walking away from her sister.

"Well, what makes you wanna do that?" Blossom asked, slightly taken aback with surprise.

"Why do you think I cry all the time? Cause I know somewhere in my heart, that if I cry, I'll get the attention I need to make my problems- disappear!" Bubbles wiped at her eyes, trying to make herself seem composed. "that has made me helpless and unable to take care of real life problems! I spent my childhood not dealing with problems, and now I can't face them when I'm older!" Buttercup turned her head away and sneered.

"I wanna get outta here!" Buttercup yelled, punching the wall by the door.

"me too!" Bubbles exclaimed suddenly, full of determination.

"No, You guys! You can't leave; what about Townsville?" Blossom asked frantically

"You can handle it, right?" Buttercup said.

"What, you're gonna leave me?" Blossom asked, worried she was seriously considering this.

"What? No!" Buttercup said, looking at her incredulously.

"For the leader girl, you very obviously don't have it in control..." Buttercup teased, somewhat seriously.

"I do!" blossom defended.

"OK, well..."bubbles said, with a more serious tone. Buttercup went and joined her by the bed, picking up on what she was getting at. Blossom turned and looked at the two of them, noticing the atmosphere of the room.

"You girls work out your problems?" professor asked, walking in. Blossom's back was to the professor when he had asked that. The two girls looked at her and sighed.

"Yes... we're gonna split up."

late that night

The three of them were sitting on the bed in a circle.

"OK, I wanna go to France..." Bubbles said.

"I wanna go to California..."buttercup said, with an excited hop.

"why?" blossom asked. She couldn't help but feel discouraged in some way. They've been together for 14 years! And now they were just... breaking up.

"My model career, if that goes wrong there's plenty places to improvise..."

"I'll go to be a sports vendor and designer. They have wicked schools for that kind of stuff..."

"OK, I'll go to Phoenix..." Blossom said lamely. She couldn't help but feel a little useless. She didn't realize how much she expect them to juts kind of... stay in Townsville forever, she never really planned anything else. But that would end...

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at the airport

"I guess this is it...!" Bubbles said, two small suitcases by her said. "bye girls."bubbles said, her voice wavering a little.

"We forgive each other and yet, we are still going through with this?" Blossom asked, still unsure and nervous about this all. She was surprised enough that professor was letting them go through with this.

"Yes I still wanna be a model and grow up." Bubbles said with determination.

"And I still wanna go to sports collage in cali." buttercup said.

"OK..." Blossom replied.

they all boarded their planes and left each other...

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I would've made it longer, but every one kept pushing me off the laptop. Plus its nine and a school night

bye me! plz r&r


Does it look like I tried too hard? I might've over improved? I just want to make a better story for you all, and a better reading experiance (and more reviews for me- cough) who said that? anyway, I couldn't have said it better then back then-

bye me! plz r&r