Hi, this is my first time writing a fanfict, so please do criticize my work
This is the prologue to a series that I hope to finish soon =)
Dawn
It was dark. The whole room around me was black. The only light came from me. I had a faint reddish glow around me. Further ahead, a faint green glow caught my attention which told me that I was not alone. I could see a figure that was emitting the light as it came closer and grew brighter.
"Dawn?" A male's voice said from the green light. He quickened his pace and now stood a few feet away from me. He was around my age and a few inches taller than me. He had blond hair that was a mix of mostly gold colored hair and a few brown hairs in the mix. His baby blue eyes were the one that caught my attention. They somehow seemed familiar, but I couldn't place where I've seen them before.
"Who are you, and how do you know my name?" Alert, I took two steps back to further the distance between the two of us.
"You don't remember me?" His voice was full of confusion, shock and a little bit of hurt. His baby blue eyes held mines. "It's Chris, remember?"
"I don't know you, but I can't knock off the feeling that I know you." I looked away. "I felt like I've seen you before somewhere." I tried to remember where I've seen him, but it was impossible.
Suddenly the floor began to shake. I heard the earth crack as if it were an earthquake. I tried to see what was going on, but it was too dark to see, and the light coming from the both of us was not enough.
"Dawn, grab hold of my hand!" Chris reached his hand out towards me. I began to reach for it, but the floor underneath me began to crumble and I fell into the darkness away from the Chris' light.
Chris
"No!" I tried to grab her hands before she fell, but by then she had already fell into the darkness. Her familiar red light disappeared. The floor underneath me began to crack and I fell into the fissure. A familiar evil laugh of triumph echoed in the dark as I blacked out.