Wrote by my partner who has no account and is merely hoping for some feedback about her dabble into fanfiction. The poem, as seen in the italics is an original poem based upon Carol Ann Duffy's 'hathaway'. Enjoy.

Liar. My beloved. How my heart beats just for you.

Do you care? I trusted you, my beloved. I gave you the key:

Unguarded and unchained. Be careful,

Two hands you take me in, cradling me in as I live. Crush!

Your hands destroy my sail. Dead; unbreathing, unfeeling.

Why?

You bastard, my beloved.

Repetition doesn't mean its true; there is no love between me and you.

My angel. Yeah, right! My baby? Ofcourse I am!

Sweep, sweep! Im just a doormat, your umbrella on a rainy day.

You don't like to hear that do you? Just cry me a river and ill wash my hands with you.

Come back. The rope tightens around my neck, your hands around my throat. Come back! Its louder now.

This is love? Ha!

Love makes the world go around, well my world is sinking.

Thank you baby; I guess I owe you

Tears stream down her cheeks, her knees tucked up under her chin; the image of a fallen angel. To her left lies her keeper, her lover, her everything! In sleep she looks so innocent, milk white skin and a halo of ebony curls. Her breath cascades from her lips as if nothing troubles her, unbeknown that the girl sharing the same bed is breaking from the inside. Breaking from her love.

My beloved