My first story!!!!!!!!!!!

Please be gentel with your flames my freinds

I don't own Yu Gi Oh GX or any of the characters.. I wish I did!

"I really don't know about this" Started Jesse. He was nervous about fighting a demon, even a low ranking one without the whole gang backing him up.

"You have me and Axel; we're not enough for you?" asked Jim sarcastically. But deep down he knew where Jesse was feeling. He wasn't worried but would have felt a hell of a lot more confident with Alexis, Hassleberry, Chazz, Syrus, and Atticus with him. There was always power in numbers right?

"Jim has a point; we are only going to the F ranked layer, the really bad monsters don't hang 'round those parts" stated Axel calmly.

"But what if they move around?" asked Jesse

"Are you Syrus now? Only he is allowed to be extra paranoid"

"But-"

"But nothing man, you need to calm down. Big time"

"Ok…" Jesse said weakly.

The crew of three got off of the 'demon train' that is, where all the demon hunters got of the 'stations' to go clean a place of demon so people could inhabit them.

The stations where organized into 6 levels A for the strongest demons and F for the weakest. Bu even a weak demon could kill a human, that is, one who never fought a demon. But Jesse and his crew where more experienced… they all knew who the where dealing with.

"Jesse, earth to Jess! Can you read me?" asked Jim playfully

"I'm here man; let's go kick some demon butt."

They walked into a 'Layer' a place where demons took their kill and… ate them. Jesses' stomach flip flopped in unpleasant ways just thinking about it. Yuck. They proceeded to the layer and looked around. No one home, how nice, or so Jesse thought. Because a demon then appeared right before his eyes, an ugly one too he thought.

"Look out!" Yelled Axel, "This isn't an F ranked demon, but an A!"

"I thought only F ranks where here! What on earth!" Yelled Jim just as loudly.

Funny Jesse thought I really didn't think I was going to die this morning. The said demon slashed out one of his scary arms scratching Axel on his left arm.

"Damned demon" He mumbled but in a more audible voice he said "Your gonna pay for that" He then started shooting at the demon with his machine gun. The bullets went right though it not, not even a drop of blood from it was spilled.

"It's not use mate." Stated Jim "You don't have the right weapon for it. And it's not like this one can duel…"

The demon extended am arm and grabbed Jesse with it, it then grabbed Axel and Jim with some more arms. Suddenly it started talking.

"Be gone demon of higher rank, wait to be fed" It said.

"Another one?" Asked Axel "Jesse, can you sense it?" Jesse could sense it. And it was close, very close.

"Show yourself, now!" Commanded Jesse. And it did the demon had a human form. It was a two toned brunette, a lean figure, chocolate eyes and a lustful look.

"Don't tell me what to do, foolish demon."

The demon in a human form then slashed the other monster in the face. It let go of Jesse. It slashed again and the other demon let go of Jim, then Axel.

"How dear you…" the other demon started "I know you hunger but wait until I find. The demon in the human form then released a devastating attack on the other demon which died instantly. It then looked at the three dumbfounded boys.

"I will see you all later" It (or should I say he?) said. The said demon vanished without a trace.

"We should leave now." Stated Axel.

I hope i did ok on that. Tell me how to improve and i promise i'll try!