Hello and welcome to the corrected version of 'The Island'! I've tried to find and correct every mistake I made in it, and in the process deleted some words or sentences or added some, but I did nothing, that would change the plot everyone fell in love with.
To everyone, who's new here: please, enjoy!
Sonadow – The Island
When a scientist announces, that every male mobian hedgehog is either an uke or a seme, nobody really cares. But when Eggman of all people reveals, that Sonic is an uke, things... SONIC changes. When Sonic mentally breaks down and is a mess, it seems like a miracle, that people show up, who know how to treat a nervous uke. However, this is far from true. Those people have totally different intentions and they drag poor Sonic in this mess. The only friend he has in this hellhole called "the Island" is a black and red hedgehog, who seems the only one not interested in raping him...
1: Shocking news!?
Ever heard some news and thought: Meh, that doesn't concern me, is probably fake...? That's what most people thought, when they heard of the study of a scientist, whose name was forgotten before he had even started speaking.
What he told, sounded ridiculous. He spoke about male mobian hedgehogs and that they are divided in ukes and semes. The difference could be determined with a few chemicals, that reacted different on the blood: it colored the blood of an uke pink and the blood of a seme blue.
Who didn't switch channels after this boring start, could listen to how the scientist told everyone, that ukes needed to be specially protected as they weren't able to do so themselves, how he offered to test every male hedgehog for free and to bring the ukes among them into a special institution to be safe, until they found a seme to protect them. It was quite nonsense and nobody with dignity even thought about going there. And within a few months, nobody remembered this.
It was a normal day for Sonic the Hedgehog, when he fought in a city against his enemy Dr. Eggman. The oval shaped man sat in the head of his newest robot, a giant monster with claws, that were bigger than the hedgehog.
Sonic spindashed it again, this time slightly touching one of the claws, that cut as a result in his leg. Sonic didn't faze this much, he was used to wounds – and this was literally a scratch compared to his many battle scars hidden under his fur.
He continued to destroy the robot, slightly wondering, why the doctor didn't curse him like always for damaging this invention of his. Meh, maybe he was just bored of those curses or didn't want to get hoarse, or something like that...
In no time, he had destroyed the robot and Eggman was forced to use his hovercraft to not land hard on the floor. Strangely, he didn't curse him still. Sonic furrowed his brow in confusion. Why? His plans were ruined! Why was he still smiling, laughing even?
Suddenly, the giant screen, that was hanging above him at a skyscraper and that normally just showed news and stuff like that, flickered and Eggman's face appeared on it. "You think you won, Sonic, but not this time!," he laughed. His voice was echoing, the whole city or even the whole country got him on every screen, Sonic mused.
"I finally found out something against you, you pesky pincushion!" "And what might that be, Eggy?," Sonic asked, bored. He didn't know, what he could mean. He didn't have anything to hide.
"Remember that scientist from a year ago who found out about male hedgehogs being divided in ukes and semes?"
"Uh...no, not really. Tails told me about it, but I forgot it.," Sonic shrugged.
Eggman facepalmed. "I forgot that you are as clever as a feral hedgehog.," he muttered. "Hey, even a feral hedgehog could beat you, Eggbreath! Now get to the point already!," Sonic growled, tapping his foot impatiently.
"As I was saying, male hedgehogs like you are divided in the weak males, the ukes and in the stronger ones, the semes. With some chemicals, you can test the blood of a hedgehog and it'll change colors – and that's what I did!"
"Huh?" Sonic looked at his still bleeding leg. "That's right, my clawbot stole some blood from you and I did the test while you were busy destroying it. And now, look at that!" He held up a small glass with a light pink fluid, so everybody could see it. "Pink means uke, so the great Sonic the Hedgehog is nothing but a simple, weak uke. How does it feel?," the doctor taunted, letting his camera zoom in on the hedgehog.
To his great surprise, Sonic laughed. "How it feels? Pretty good, thanks for the ego boost!," the hedgehog chuckled.
"W-wha-?," the doctor stammered. "You should be a crying, whimpering mess!," he shouted angrily.
"Why? Because you told me I'm supposed to be weak? Maybe this test is right and I am an uke – but I am still strong enough to fight and beat you and protect everyone. So basically, you only showed me, that I can do more than I should be able to and this in front of everyone, including other male hedgehogs who might be this uke-thingy. Great ego boost for everyone, thanks, Egghead!," Sonic grinned.
Eggman pulled his mustache out of pure frustration. "I hate you, I hate you with all my dark non existing heart, hedgehog!," Eggman screamed and flew off, while the screens returned to normal. It was so like him to curse illogically, when he was angry.
Satisfied, Sonic bathed in the crowd's happiness and thanks for a while, before leaving and returning home. There, Sonic was already greeted by his brother, who was ready to treat his wound, so it wouldn't get infected.
"Hi, Tails." Willingly, as Sonic knew, that the young fox would insist on treating him, he plopped on a kitchen chair, so that Tails could clean and bandage his leg. "Got Eggy's message?," Sonic asked.
"Who didn't? Good reaction, by the way. Seriously, as if you would break down because of that.," Tails chuckled and finished his treatment. "Done. Wanna go out and buy some chilidogs?," he asked.
"Su-" Sonic got interrupted by the door, that got slammed open. The brothers heard footsteps and suddenly a crying Amy stood in the frame. "Sonic, I came as soon as I heard it!," she cried.
"Heard? Heard what?," he asked confused, when she practically jumped on him. "You're an uke!," she cried.
"So? Amy, it's no big deal, didn't you hear that?," Sonic tried to soothe her. She looked up at him, suddenly furious. "Of course it is! That means, we can never marry!," she cried.
"Huh?," Sonic said, confused again. "Sonic, ukes don't have female partners, only male ones, the semes!," Tails explained. "Oh."
"Yeah, it's horrible. I always wanted to marry Sonic one day!," Amy sobbed, clutching her arms around his neck. Sonic looked at Tails. "Help me!," he mouthed, as he was literally breathless.
Tails sighed. "Amy, look... Sonic's an uke, that isn't changeable. But I read, that ukes are the best friends of females. You know, always listening to their problems, helping them in any way they can, stuff like that. If you do it right, Sonic and you could be as close as him and me."
"R-really?," Amy asked, hopefully, loosing her grip a little. "Yeah. Just go easy on him. You know, ukes are quite sensitive and easily get upset." "Oh." Quickly, Amy let go of the – slightly bluer than usual looking – Sonic, who gasped for air. "Don't worry, I promise, I'll be the bestest friend you ever had! I have to tell Cream, so bye!," she waved and ran away.
Sonic sighed in relief. "Did you have to tell her this sensitive-stuff?," he asked Tails. "Well, I read it in a book about semes and ukes and thought it would make her go easier on you than normally." "That may be true... did you really read this stuff you told Amy in that book?" "Yeah, I did. After this report last year, I thought it would be good, as you are a male hedgehog. Of course, I never thought you would be an uke. I just thought, if you maybe found an uke yourself and would like to have some advice..."
"That's nice of you, Tails, but I should be the one giving you advice." "Don't worry, I'm far from being in need of one, but thanks." They hugged in a brotherly way. "How about we order a pizza? I rather have a nice relaxing day after the newest Amy-episode." Sonic yawned, stretching. "Sure thing, I'm on it!," Tails smiled, grabbed the phone and started dialing the number of their favorite pizzeria.
Meanwhile, in Eggman's evil lair...
"I hate this hedgehog! I hate it, hate it, hate IT!," Eggman shouted while throwing things through the lab. He turned to the only other person with a heartbeat, who stood in a corner, watching him.
"That's all YOUR fault! You said it would work!," he accused with a pointing finger. "I SAID, that this was the first phase and you completed it. Now it's time for phase two."
"And when will Sonic be my little lab rat!?" "Depends...but, I guess, in a few weeks, if everything works like I thought."
"I hope so, otherwise I'll want my money back!," Eggman growled and marched out of the room.
The other person smirked, once he was gone. "You won't get a lab rat. That uke is my ticket to everything I ever wanted and more.," they chuckled.
It doesn't look like much, yet, but believe me, it'll get better in the next chapters.
Oh, and who does find a mistake, may keep it :)!
