this was my very first story i ever wrote so please enjoy and also i'll take any criticism as long as you please don't say you hated this or didn't like it
call me John Smith ch.1 I do not own pokemon or doctor who
We find our heros in the Hoenn region heading for lilycove city until Ash is challenged to a battle.I will be the referee said the oldest one of ash's group he was wearing a dark brown zip up shirt with pockets on both sides of the zipper,brown long pants,and always had his eyes shut. My name is john smith but you can call me the doctor. The doctor was wearing a brown jacket that went down to his feet,
brown long pants,and a purple shirt under his jacket. He had a friend that looked alot like him except he had a black jacket.
Let the match begin the referee also known as brock called. Pikachu lets go. Ash called. Alright then come on out Lucario. The Doctor called. Just before the battle they heard a twig snap. Everyone turned around and Ash and brock were surprised to see who it was. Hey Ash. He said. Pika his partner called running over to Ash's Pikachu. Hey Sparky. Brock said. Hey Ritchie what are you doing here?Ash asked.I was going to Lilycove city when I heard you so I thought it would be great to see you. Ritchie said. Hey we're going there too. Ash said. Um you two know each other? May said confused. Oh i'm sorry I forgot to introduce you Ritchie this is May shes traveling with me through Hoenn May this is Richie he's also from the Kanto Region we met in the Indigo Plateu.I also battled him there but I lost because charizard chose to take a nap we also met in Johto. Are we ready to battle yet?The Doctor said. Oh I completely forgot about the battle. Ok let the match begin. Brock said. Ok Pikachu iron tail. Ash called. Bone rush Lucario. The Doctor called as lucario closed his hands and put them right by each other then pulled them apart from each other as a blue light illuminated between his hands in the shape of a large bone and pikachu ran towards lucario as his thunderbolt shaped tail turned from yellow to white and turned as hard as steel when both attacks collided an explosion occured and both pokemon were sent fliing hitting the ground hard and both pokemon were unable to battle. Both pokemon are unable to battle its a tie. Said Brock. Return The Doctor called as he pulled out a pokeball.A red light came out of it and Lucario disapeared.
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