Okay so I am making a rise of the guardians story and I'm new at this so don't flame only correct me don't be a jerk about it... I was bored and had nothing else better to do to I wanted to take action after reading some of the other rotg fanfics. I do not own any of the rotg characters or any part of the movie as if I did it would have been a bit different... IF you know what I mean... and without further ado lets the story begin
chapter 1 The return of the guardian
It had been a year and a half since Jamie had seen jack now 12 he had just turned twelve as a matter of a fact today. He was now twelve and had missed Jack and had wished for him to come back when he blown the candles on the cake. "Jamie make a wish and blow on the candles" Ms Bennet said. He blew the candles and he ate a piece of cake and then waited for everyone to get done eating. It was a while before they got done eating he became daydreaming about the time Jack had said we will always be here and asked himself why.. why didn't he come and visit on his birthday? it wasn't too long before he came back to reality. "Jamie! hullo earth to Jamie" Ms Bennet said "O sorry mom just got caught up in a day dream" Said Jamie "about what" Ms Bennet said "O umm school sum thing funny happened today" replied Jamie "O okay well get over here and open your presents" Ms Bennet said, Jamie replied "okay I'm coming'.(jeesh a lot of talking back and forth from now on when they talk Jamie's voice will be presented like this:: and:: and Ms Bennet is ((okay)) and jack's he hasn't came in yet will be like this *hey buddy* them are just examples it helps me and u know who is talking... now back to the story). Jamie began opening his presents he soonly became happy again and forgot about the daydream about Jack. soon he got all of his presents and it was time to go to bed. ((Hey Jamie time to go to bed)). ::Aww come on let me stay up for a little while longer:: ((No Jamie you have already stayed up past you're bedtime now you're sleepy and you need to go to bed)) ::No I'm not:: (( Yes you are now go to bed)) ::but-:: (No buts now go to bed)). ::Fine:: He yawned and realized how tired he really was. ((See I told you was sleepy)) ::I know mom u don't haft to tell me twice:: ((Good night)) ::Good night:: He went to bed and started day dreaming again It was my birthday didn't he know that ...As he went on and on about his daydream he noticed that it was getting rather chilly in his room so he went to check the thermostat it read 74 degrease it was normal he went back in his room he layed back down again it felt chilly again he felt it coming from the window he asked himself did I forget to shut the window? so he walked to the window and saw Jack :: Aah Jack:: He fainted a few minutes passed he heard Jack's voice trying to wake him up *Jamie wake up wake up Jamie wake up buddy wake up* ::Jack is that you:: *Yeah it's me buddy* ::What happened:: *You fainted remember, you okay buddy* ::Yeah, I'm fine:: ::What are you doing here:: *It's your birthday remember?* ::Yeah but why are you so late my birthday was like an hour ago::? *Guardian duties* ::Oh that's explains it but what were you doing::? *Making sure all of the kids were still believing in us*. ::Oh:: ::Jack:: *Yes Jamie* ::Um uhum uhmm **Clearing his throat** Can y-y-you spend the night::? Jack chuckled * Jamie why are you blushing you're not embarrassed asking that are you*? Jamie responded in a fainted voice "Maybe" Jack chuckled some more ::Stop laughing at me, it's not funny:: *Sorry I'm just astonished that you find it embarrassing to ask me to spend the night* *Why did you find it embarrassing asking me to spend the night*? ::I-I-I don't know I just did:: Jack just sat there looking at the pale white boy. ::Well::? *Well what... Oh right sure I'll spend the night anything for my favorite friend* :: Thank you:: * Of course anything for you my friend* and with that they fell asleep.
well that's it that's chapter one review and comment please I want reviews to see how I did on my first time if I have more than 10 reviews by 5am I will have another chapter done first thing tomorrow! yay so please review now
