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My Sacrifice

Forver...

My eyes snapped open, the memory still playing in my mind as if it just happened. A low growl emitted from my chest as I stood. Darkness consumed the roof top I had slept on, my dark clothes making me seem invisible. My crimson eyes glowed as a sudden noise in the alley way caught my attention.

I crept along the edge of the roof, slowly blending in. My hands reached for my sais on my waist, spinning them into my grasp. A gust of wind brought my long black hair blowing high in the air and my black cape blowing behind me.

My eyes slowly scanned the area, people. I snarled, my long fangs showing in the faint light. People, in my territory. Master would not be pleased. Four, shouldn't be too hard. I waited till they left the alley way, they we're being cautious. I jumped down, landing quietly. I followed them closely, inspecting them. They walked down the street, looking for a building, the only light across the street flickering.

"This place is giving me the creeps." He shivered, looking around at all the debree. Street lamps had fallen into the street, on top of houses. Some houses had no roof, rats living in the rotting wood. He was tall, his carrot colored hair all too annoying. He wore a blue uniform and spoke with a irritating voice.

"Yeah. Lets just get this over with. We just have to find some little girl?" This guy took the lead. Obviously the leader as he walked with confident strides. That was till a part of the roof fell from a house making him jump. He was spooked.

The wooden houses creeked as wind blew threw the deserted town. Well, almost deserted. "Kuwabara," A red headed demon spoke, "Can you sense anything?"

They continued to walk, looking around carefully. "Yeah," The carrot top spoke, in other words, Kuwabara, "Theres a energy source in front of us. It's faint."

"That must be our kid. Let's go."

"Not so fast ningen." They stopped and looked around, it sounded as if the wind was speaking to them. "No one is touching that kid."

"The hell we're not! She's coming with us!" Yusuke yelled out.

"You have no clue what you're dealing with." My soft voice spoke sending shivers down there spin. My voice, soft yet deadly, made me sound unpredictable, or so I heard.

"We'll I dont care what we're dealin with! Give us the girl so we can leave." Yusuke nodded his head to the side, Hiei and Kurama getting the idea raced off to get the girl.

I chuckled, "This is my territory. Back down and I won't have to dispose of you." A force field stopping the two youkai from getting away. Black electircity sparked out, attacking Kurama and Hiei, throwing them back.

"Why dont you come out and test that theroy!"Yusuke yelled out.

"I've been here the entire time." He turned around, his eyes wide. My cape was wraped around me, the light above me flickering as my dark black hair covered my face. Two glowing crimson eyes glaring into his own brown eyes.

"Whoa! I didn't even sense her!" Kuwabara back up along with Yusuke who held out his hand as a gun. Kurama and Hiei recovering quickly from the attack.

"Why do you want the girl?" I asked calmly as his spirit energy condensed at his finger in a small blue light.

"Just part of the job, and to illiminate any threat that trys to stop us." The light continued to flicker, I remained unmoving.

"Are you going to shoot me?" The street lamp shattered, electric sparks and glass falling, illuminating my pale skin that hid behind black hair, "Detective."

"Spirit Gun!" A burst of blue light dug into the ground, destroying one of the biggest trees in the park across the street, the lamp falling to it's side, half of it gone-desinigrated.Yusuke was pushed back by the force, yet he held a satisfied smirk on his face. "Take that."

"Wow." He froze as I spoke on his side, "That could of hurt."

"What the hell! You were so, so close!" Yusuke got angered that he had missed at such a close range and jumped back, preparing another attack.

"It's time for you to leave." I grasped my Sais and raced towards the two, Kuwabara and Yusuke.Kuwabara stepped up with a energy sword. I raised an eyebrow before holding him back with ease. I hooked my leg behind his, knocking him on his back. "I have no time for you amatures." I used my right sais to block the fire demon's katana that tried hitting me from the back.

I grasped Kuwabara's shirt as Yusuke ran at me. He raised fist as I pushed back the demon with slight difficulty. He brought his fist down aiming for my head, yet I was gone, with Kuwabara still in my hold.

Growling, I threw the squirming ningen into a wall, the ceiling falling down on top of him, knocking him unconsious.

I crept out from nearby alley way, tilting my head in curiousity as a far off figure, orYusuke, searched around for his friend. "Hn." I threw my cape back and headed off calmly towards the next building.

'Fast' I thought as the fire demon brought down his katana. I used my arm as a shield as I used my other hand to grab a Sais. I braced for impact as he brought his feet up and kicked me back threw a borded up wall.

Something hissed beside me, glowing golden eyes glaring at me. I snarled at her before jumping up and dodging Hiei's next attack that dug into the ground.

I quickly took out my other sais and held them above my head in a X form, holding Hiei back once again. I winced in pain as something wrapped around my waist. I stepped forward, pushing Hiei back as the girl in the corner growled, holding her head and screaming every once in a while.

I was loosing blood but not enough to keep me down. Looking at my waist I saw a vine, it's thorns digging into my stomach, not yet puncturing through my skin. I held in a scream as I was yanked back threw the wooden door. Glaring at Kurama, who held the vine tight in his hand, I sliced threw it, breaking my hold. Running down the next alley way, it was a dead end, yet I was gone once again.

Breathing hard the building came into view as did two figures. I quietly snuck up on the intruder, trying to control my breath. I brought my sais slowly up to his neck from behind him.

"Touch her, and I kill your friend." Blood fell from my arm and on the floor in front of him. I smiled at the little girl in front of Yusuke.

She smiled with an innocent smile. Long blonde locks fell around her face, rosey red cheeks and bright green eyes. I hooked my arm around Yusuke's neck and slowly walked backwards.

"I'll be right back Shina. Just stay put."My voice sounded empty as I blended in with the shadows, Yusuke unwillingly following.

"Okay. Bye-Bye for now." Her delicate voice spoke as she sat back down, playing with the toys around her.

Yusuke stared at his friend under the debree yet could do nothing for him as my sais was still at his neck.

"Now, leave this place." He quickly raced for his friend once my sais was removed, "Kuwabara! How could-" I was gone. Yusuke dug Kuwabara out of the debree and dragged him onto the street. Hiei and Kurama quickly at his side, following his spirit energy.

"He will be fine, just unconsious." Kurama had checked pulse. Yusuke pulled him over his shoulder, "Ahh, he's heavier than I thought."

They all stood and ran towards the little girl, "Let's try this again."

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