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A green eyed girl with raven hair sighed as she uninterestedly looked out the car window of her bodyguard's navy blue Bentley. She, her parents, as well as her bodyguard were going to stay at the Fowl Manor for her school term at the newly mixed St. Bartleby's.

"Rhodes, are we there yet?" The girl asked the man driving with chocolate brown eyes and dark chocolate hair.

"Not yet, Lady D. Soon." She smiled when Rhodes used his pet name for her. She insisted on calling her that instead of Lady Diana, her 12 year old self of course. Her phone rang a few minutes after.

"Hello?"

"Dee Dee? It's your mother. Are you here yet?"

"Almost Mama, I think we're pulling up in the driveway now. Bye."

Rhodes went outside of Diana's door to open it for her. And he walked her to the elegant manor, so he could get their luggage. She knocked three times and not long after a woman not much older than her own mother answered the door.

"Are you Bella's daughter?"

"Yes ma'am, I am. Are you Mrs. Fowl?"

"Oh, yes I am, now come in! Come in! No need to stand outside!" And Mrs. Fowl ushered Diana inside.

She led her to what she assumed was the living room and noticed that including her parents and Mrs. Fowl, there was a total of six people in there waiting to meet her.

"Everyone," Mrs. Fowl chimed, "this is Robert and Bella's daughter, Diana."

When she introduced her she made a shy, little wave. And at the sound of her name her parents rose up to sit her down on the seat her father took next to her mother while he stood.

He turned to his daughter, "Diana, this is Artemis Fowl Sr., my old and very close friend." He gave a very friendly and warm smile to her. Robert Chase spoke again, "This is his son, Artemis Fowl II." He looked ather and gave a curt nod. Mr. Chase continued, "This is his bodyguard, Butler and his sister Juliet." They both nodded but Juliet gave Diana a wink which made her smile.

"Robert," Diana noticed that it was the older Artemis, "doesn't your daughter have a bodyguard?"

She answered for her father, "Yes I do Mr. Fowl. He's just retrieving my luggage for me."

"Well now, why don't you help him out, Butler?" Mr. Fowl suggested.

"I would be happy to sir." Butler answered back.

So he made his way outside where he would find a very special surprise. When he got to the driveway he saw a man at the trunk of a blue Bentley that looked oddly familiar to him.

"Can I help you with those?" He addressed the man at the back. He looked up at the Eurasian man.

"Dom, is that you?" In the light of the porch lights, Butler could clearly see the dark chocolate colored hair and chocolate brown eyes.

"Ricky?" he went up to what he believed was his old friend as he continued, "Yeah, it's me."

Ricky Rhodes smirked at his old friend and did their "guy" handshake.

"It really is you Dom. So this is where you've been all this time."

"Yeah, come on, let me help you." Butler offered.

"Cool, here, take this." and Rhodes handed him a very large rose colored bag.

Butler laughed, "I'm guessing this is Diana's?"

Rhodes countered back, "No this is mine smart guy." And he laughed right along with him and together they strode inside.

How is it so far? I really hope my OCs aren't Sues (or Stus) so far! Tell me what you think!