Ok so this is my first fanfic but this is only a sample of chapter 1 its not complete yet I just want to know if this is a good start to my story so far if I get GOOD reviews I continue the story and ill upload it on a different file thing :D so here goes
-Where am I? Why do I smell blood!? I keep my eyes closed scared to open them and reveal the horrifying scene that lays before me....slowly I open my eyes and Im in a room it has lots of toys and bright coulors a twisted version of a childs playroom I look down below me and see myself dead.
I wake up panting and covered in sweat yuckits still pretty dark out I wonder what time it is... a soft knock interuptted my thoughts panicking I hide under the covers and pretend to be asleep I hear the door open and footsteps walking to my bed who the hell is in my room?!!! ''Alice... I know your not really asleep'' Its the stupid clown what does he want? I sit up in my bed ''Whataya want you stupid clown?'' ''Did you have that dream again?'' I pause for a moment ever since being in Cheshires deminsion the clowns been more protective of me its kinda annoying but at the same time warm like meat is when its fresh and fuzzy like the outside of a peach,.. ''Alice'' The stupid clown interuppts my thoughts again I nod my head letting my bangs cover my eyes he looks at me with an odd expression then leans forward and gets in my bed I jump out ''Eh?! what the hell clown?!?!'' what the hell does he think hes doing?!?! ''Shhh... You'll wake the others maybe if I sleep here tonight the bad dreams will go away'' he smiles at me and pulls my wrist and fall forward onto his chest I can feel the heat radiating off his chest (OMG!!!! KAWAII!!! XD Sorry I needed a moment) I want to get off him but at the same time I don't im confused silence fills the room ''hey clown?'' I ask breaking the silence I feel him move he was probably drifting off to sleep already stupid clown...''Yes Alice?'' ''Am I like her?'' He stops breathing for a moment and sighs.
Breaks POV
''Am I like her?'' I hear Alice's voice ask I sigh ''No'' Thats all that came out of my mouth I wanted to tell her that she was nothing like Alyss how she was full of energy and happiness while her twin was full of hate and regret I wanted to tell her how I would never compare her to Alyss but I didn't I could tell she wasn't ready for all that...
I could feel her sit up and put each leg on one side of my body IF only she knew how extremley wrong this would look if someone like...Master Oz were to walk in.
''I want more then a simple no stupid clown'' she said to me obviously irratated
The chapters not done obviously so if you want me to continue the story REVIEW:D and as I said at the top ill upload it on a different file on fanfiction so this is basically a sample lol
Well Bye peoples XD