Chapter 1: "Pack, pack, KILL, KILL"

((It changed a little! :p))

Swiftpaw's POV

Pain flashed though me, My head hurt and I was flaming mad! A dog chased me up a tree followed by the rest. The amber eyes of the dog that chased me up glared at me, He was all black. Another was white with black spots. And most of the rest were brown. I wouldn't come down, my fur sticked to Starclan and my blue eyes was wide with fear. Everything was black the next moment and I hurt all over.

"Swiftpaw?" A striped she cat mewed. "I'm Star and I've been watching you. And I believe that you should go back, That was barely a life!" I looked at her, She was a silver tabby with stars in her pelt. "Am I dead?" I asked. "Yes, well… For now" She replied. Suddenly a little kit came out of the forest, "Star," She mewed "Can I go back to?" Star turned around and looked at the kit in the eyes. "Sure," Stars voice was warm. "But don't tell anyone else, Mosskit"

There was a bright light. I could barley see the kit beside me and the ground below. Then suddenly I saw dogs, A few dogs chasing me up a tree and grabbing me and pulling me back down. The dogs ripped my skin and tore my fur until I was dead. Brightpaw also got attacked but before me. The dogs ripped out her eye, and then I realized I should have told her to run… poor Brightpaw, lying there, bleeding. I watched in horror as the dogs killed me and hurt Brightpaw. There was nothing I could do but watch.

My eyes shot open, I was alive??? The dogs didn't kill me??? I tried to get up, but fell back down. At the corner of my eye I saw a grey cat… about the same size as me. Who was that? Was that Mosskit? "Mosskit?" I said barley. "Who are you? And how do you know my name?" She asked. "You were dead." I replied. "Are you Swiftpaw?" She asked. "Yes" I mewed. "Do you think we can go back to Thunderclan?" Asked Mosskit. "We can try." I said. Once again I got up, this time I didn't fall. Mosskit and I walked around until I found a scent; it was the middle of the night and that scent seemed familiar.

It was Brightpaw! I couldn't believe it! "Mosskit, I found a scent follow me!" I mewed. We ran until I found her, Brightpaw was sitting in the middle of the forest preying to Starclan. Mosskit and I watched her in the bushes. "I will talk to her, stay her" I said. Mosskit nodded.

Brightpaw's POV

I looked up at Starclan, "Starclan, are you there?" I whispered. "Brightpaw?" I heard a voice. "Who's there!?!" I yelled. I turned around and saw a black and white tom. "Who are you?" I asked. "Swiftpaw" he meowed. "Your dead…. No… You cant be…." I was mewing. "I am" Mewed 'Swiftpaw'. "Believe me". I couldn't trust this cat, could I. "Ok then 'Swiftpaw' Tell me. Tell me, What did this to me? Why do I have one eye?" I mewed. 'Swiftpaw' looked down. "Its all my fault, I could have told you to run. But I didn't, It was to late… the dogs ripped it out. I'm sorry Brightpaw" He said. "Oh my gosh, Swiftpaw! That is you! We have to get back to camp! We have to tell the rest, your ALIVE!" I yelled. "No, not yet." He mewed. "What?" I mewed. "Not without Mosskit." He said. "Mosskit???" I mewed. A grey she-cat stepped out of the bushes. "Mosskit? You're the size of a warrior. Same as you 'Swiftpaw'."