Hey readers! Here is another Maximum Ride Fan Fiction story, and I am going to try to make it super long and stick with it, so I hope you like it! Please read and review and tell me if I should continue it! Enjoy! ~Dark Love 17

Max's POV

I was sitting on my bed, reading my book, when I heard a soft knock on my bedroom door.

"Come in," I said.

The door creaked open and standing there was a tall, dark figure and I immediately knew it was Fang. Fang was my true love, and I was his.

"Hey, let's go for a walk." He said quietly.

"But it's pouring rain, Fang!" I replied.

"You'll live." He answered dragging me down the hall, dropping by the coat closet to get our family umbrella.

Once we were outside, Fang led me to the path that led to our favorite spot, a beautiful grassy meadow that had a sparkling stream next to it. I loved to go down there with Fang alone. That was where we had our first, amazing kiss.

We flew in silence, me snuggling in Fang's arms.

When we reached the meadow, we landed and Fang motioned for me to sit down on a rock next to the stream. I could hear the stream water dribbling and rushing.

I heard Fang take a deep breath, like he was going to tell me something. He reached in his back pocket of his shorts and pulled out a little black box. I gasped as he got down on one knee.

"Max Ride, I love you so much and you are my world. I want to spend the rest of my life with you. Would you marry me, Max?" he said slowly said, looking carefully into my eyes.

He sat down next to me, allowing me time to think, patiently waiting.

"Yes." I said calmly, looking into his dark swirling eyes. I bent down and passionately kissed him. Our lips moved in perfect synch, as if they were meant to be connected. We kissed each other, and it just seemed so perfect here in the meadow, by the bubbling stream. Fang enclosed his wings around us, giving us more privacy. Our kiss grew more intense, and I found my self on top of Fang, gasping for breath.

We finally broke apart, and started flying back toward the house to tell the flock the good news.

I know, it was a really short chapter, but please review and tell me if you love it, like it or even hate it! I need a few ideas for this story, as I don't have it fully planned out. Please, please review! If we hit 5 reviews, I'll update in the next 2-4 days! Have a great end of summer and feel free to PM me if you need anything or have any ideas. ~Dark Love 17