Hey it's HappyKitty5620 and I'm going to attempt to write a Harry Potter fanfiction. I hope that you can give me the benefit of the doubt and trust that it'll get better (hopefully!)
If you have any suggestions just write a review and I'll be happy to include some of your ideas in my story!
"Remember Harry, no matter what house you get we will always love you." James said to Harry. They were at Kings Cross Station standing right next to the Hogwarts Express. It was finally time. Harry waited ever since he turned five and learned about Hogwarts to go there but now that the moment was finally here he felt nervous. "Even if I get Slytherin?" Harry asked unsure. "Even if." Harry's bond with his father was unmistakably strong but he couldn't help but wonder what would happen if got Slytherin, the house where everyone evil gets placed. "And make sure you tell Professor Snape I said hi," Lily joined the conversation full of excitement, "We were very good friends you know." Harry obviously knew this, she told him every time he mentioned Hogwarts or its professors but he didn't mention that he just said "Sure Mum." "You better get going the train's about to leave. I love you so much Harry never forget that okay? Never forget your family." Lily was afraid her son would leave and come back changed but she trusted him, she trusted Harry. "Bye mum, bye dad. Love you both. Harry said, excitement traceable in every word. They all hugged and then he was off. Harry was going to Hogwarts.
He hopped on the train and looked around for an empty seat. He found one right next to this boy with ginger hair. Harry sat down only to be greeted with some unkind words "What do you think you're doing? That seat is reserved for the Boy Who Lived, Neville Longbottom. You can't sit there. Harry was flabbergasted. Who knew eleven-year-olds could be so mean? "I'm sure there's room for the both of us. and there's almost no other empty seats. So do you think we could all sit together?" Harry was just trying to keep the peace so he had a place to sit, all the empty seats were pretty much gone. He didn't even want to sit across from this jerk or next to "The Boy Who Lived" but he needed a seat. "No, I don't think so. Oh look, here he comes. Ask him." There he was, The Boy Who Lived. When he walked through the aisle everybody's heads turned to face him like he was some kind of god. Harry heard the stories about him but he never thought the scar would be shaped like that. "Neville! Neville! Over here I saved you a seat!" The ginger-haired boy screamed. "Sure thing. Who's this?" After Neville asked who Harry was the ginger-haired boy got really nervous, afraid that Neville wouldn't want to sit with him if Harry was there. "Him? He's a nobody, just some kid looking for a place to sit. He can move if you want." Harry felt really awkward like this so he just decided to make the decision himself, not wanting to risk the humility. So he stood up and reached for his bags before he was stopped by a voice. "What do you think you're doing? It's comfy with the three of us, you don't have to leave," Harry cautiously sat down knowing that Neville could change his mind at any moment and he'd have to leave, "Good. Well since we'll be together for the ride we should at least learn each other's names." That was something Harry could agree with. "I'm the amazing Ronald Weasley but you can just call me Ron and this is my rat Scabbers." The ginger-haired boy said. Harry couldn't fathom why anyone would want a rat but everyone has different preferences "As you probably know I am Neville Longbottom, The Boy Who lived. And You?" Neville asked. Harry didn't realize that they wanted him to participate in their conversations. He thought he was supposed to be silent after what happened earlier with Ron. "I'm Harry. Harry Potter."
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-HappyKitty5620