Ok... I don't usually write stories, but a long time ago (in real time about 3-4 months ago) I had a dream of one half of a story about a box. Just today I had another dream on the other half and now I'm not really sure what to write for the beginning. Well i guess il go on before i forget what happened. By the way this is my first story so critism is appreciated...
Chapter 1: Remember me?
Marco, fifthteen years and coming home from high school. Walking up to his house he spots a car he doesn't recognize. "Huh?" Marco shoots a questioning look at the car as he walks towards his house. He soon shrugs off the thought and enters the house.
Upon entering Marco is greeted with silence and Darkness. Normally this wouldn't be a big deal as his parents are usually working, but Marcos parents are home as there are two cars in the driveway. Turning on the lights Marco is greeted with the shouting of his parents and the unrecognizable guests. "SUPRISE!!! HAPPY SIXTEENTH BIRTHDAY MARCO!!!" They all shouted in unison.
"AHHH!!!" Marco screamed as he sank to the floor holding his chest breathing heavily. "Oh Marco don't be such a baby." A girl with blond hair brighter than any sun said as she held out her hand. Marco took the girls hand and pulled himself up to get a better look at her face. "You look familiar, I just can't seem to remember." Her smile turned into a frown at his struggling.
"Remember me? It's Star your best friend we've known each other since we were kids. Come on Marco don't tell me you've forgotten me." Her voice seemed to sadden the more she spoke.
"I think I remember I'm not completely sure. I do remember that name from somewhere though." Stars eyes brightend at his words. "Come on its impossible for you of all people to have forgotten me! After all we made a promise." Stars voice pitched higher as she spoke. "Don't worry you will remember in time, it won't take long."
With a twinkle in her eye she pulled Marco towards his cake. "Marco make a wish!" Star said with an intoxicating amount glee. Marco aproached the table closer, inspecting the mouth watering rich vanilla cherry cake. Blowing the candles out, Marco made his wish.
Star came up behind Marco almost screaming. "What did you wish for tell me well well!?" Marco turned around and put a hand on her shoulder and smiled. "I can't say, if i do it won't come true." Star frowned at this but soon shrugged it off as she went to go grab his present.
Yes yes I know short chapter but you gotta give me some credit first story plus this entire story is based of a dream I had. Anyway I always appreciate critisim on my story and seeya in the next one. Happy Reading...
P.S: Im might not update tomorrow because of school so yeah thanks for reading so far.
P.P.S: Ok definitely not updating for a while, just noticed i have testing this week. Thanks again and keep reading.