This is my attempt to write a story with good spelling, grammar, detail, and good fight scenes.
Prologue
He was being followed.
That was the first thought that entered his mind.
Panting, he stumbled through the thick foliage; he knew they would get to him eventually. But he needed to set a trap.
He hid behind a large tree, trying not to pant as it would give him away. But found it impossible, no time to set a trap. He had to fight.
He closed his eyes, his face wet from perspiration, a scar going from his forehead to the top of his lips glistened. He waiting for a sign that they were close enough for him to take action.
His hands, either dark skinned or covered in dirt and mud, reached for the lightsaber in his robe.
He heard several coming loudly, heard Twigs snap and foliage break. It must be droids. The clone troopers were far quieter.
'I can handle a few droids' he thought.
Activating his lightsaber, he called upon the force, briefly breaking his cover to pull a droid towards him using the force, impaling it right through the torso, where the signal receptor was.
'Damn it, they're bloody B2 droids.' He whispered croakily, looking briefly at the camouflage coloured droid before getting prepared to strike again.
Blaster fire erupted, but the tree was hard and thick, they weren't getting through it anytime soon. Strangely, they weren't circling the tree, but he wasn't going to do the same strategy as last time. It was time for plan B.
Calling on the Force he ran rapidly to the side, deflecting all the blaster fire into shrubbery (which caught on fire, but as the forest was damp, the fire quickly died down) and stabbed one of the droids in the torso, before being unable to keep the speed any longer.
The remaining two droids started firing, but he simply used the super battle droid he impaled as a shield.
When the metal started heating up he pushed it with the force, sending it flying into the super battle droid on the left. Unfortunately, for a split second he was vulnerable, and the remaining droid took advantage of it.
The man attempted to scream, but merely gurgled as a shot ripped through his jedi robe into his shoulder and another one glanced near his ribs. He collapsed on the floor.
The droid moved to aim, but the man's hand shot up and the droid froze.
Using the other arm, the man slowly got up, still having his palm facing the droid.
The droid was vibrating, as it tried to fight and break out of the hold.
Unsteadily, the man slowly made his way towards the droid, lightsaber in hand.
The droid could only struggle helplessly as the man walked right up to it and stabbed it in the torso.
The man sighed and kneeled down.
Suddenly another shot was fired at him from, it went above his head and the man felt his black hair get singed.
In disbelief, he looked to the right and saw three clone troopers, wearing camouflaged phase two outfits. The whole thing was just to get him out in the open!
'Looks like I am going to die' he thought.
He held his lightsaber 'But I'll die fighting'
Suddenly, blaster fire erupted from behind them, and all three were hit in the head several times by blaster fire. They all collapsed to the ground with a dull thud. The man deactivated his lightsaber and put it back in its holster.
He saw a figure up the hill.
'You ok?' the figure shouted, waving his arms.
The man smiled weakly.
'Just peachy.' He croaked.
'What's your name?' the figure shouted.
That was a strange second question, wait… did that guy actually hear him or not?
'Names Zosimos' he muttered.
Suddenly, his vision went dark; he greeted darkness like a wary traveller.
I know, its not so good.
I would like constructive criticism to assist me to improve, it would really help
So please R&R
Anyway, hope you have a nice 24 hours.