This story might be skipping the Hogwarts school years or it might be doing short clips from them.
10 Years Ago
Voldemort looked down into the crib. He had just finished off Lily Potter. Now the question was which child should he kill first? Deciding that the boy was a bigger threat he aimed his wand at his forehead. A bright green light flashed it the room and Voldemort was no more as Harry Potter lie on his crib, crying, next to his napping sister.
Present
Harry and Violet Potter woke to a raping sound on the door of their cupboard. Their Aunt Petunia's voice then rang out rousing the two eleven year olds, "Wake up, Go get breakfast ready!". Harry groaned slightly. He turned to look at his twin, she had fiery red hair and rich brown eyes. He had heard from Aunt Petunia that Violet looked just like their mother, but with their father's got up and gently woke Violet by shaking her.
As soon as Violet opened her eyes, Dudley started jumping on the stairs, Shaking sawdust on both of them in the process. Harry knew that if they headed out now Dudley would slam the cupboard door in their faces, but if they stayed in would tell his parents they were refusing to get up. Knowing this Harry would always come out first to protect Violet.
He went to get the mail, because Violet liked cooking better and to be honest no one cared who did what as long as it was done. As Violet came out she flashed him a small smile. Harry looked at the mail, there was 7-8 letters for Dudley's birthday and a business letter for Uncle Vernon.
When Harry walked into the kitchen with the mail and handed it out he could see Dudley starting to wail about the number of gifts he had. Violet put breakfast on the table around the time everyone was coming to the conclusion to bring Harry and Violet to the zoo that day. Both Violet and Harry were happy with the breakfast because they always got a little extra as long as they were good on special occasions. For instance, the usual breakfast was a chunk of bread and some water. Today however they had juice toast and a little bi of bacon, of course they were never allowed to get a refill special day or not.
When they arrived at the zoo Harry and Violet were having a bunch of fun because they got to share not one, bur two ice creams. Also manly to the joy of Violet, there was a petting zoo that they visited and Violet got to pet a piglet, some ducklings, and a goat. Then the reptile house happened, Harry and Violet were still watching the snake after Dudley had left and Harry started to speak to it! On later days Violet told Harry that she could only here a low hissing sound escape from Harry's mouth. When Dudley ran up and the glass vanished both Harry and Violet were frozen in shock. When they got home they both got locked in the cupboard for it. After Harry sneaking some food in for them when the Dursleys were asleep they went to sleep themselves.
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