Okay, here it goes, my first fanfic! So I'm new to this, so please be kind in the reviews. Here's the summary again and the introduction to my story, hope you like it. Enjoy reading and please review, I definitely need pointers.
Disclaimer: I pray every night to own Twilight, but no luck yet. So until the day it comes true, Stephenie Meyer owns it (so lucky ( , and all I own is this fanfic.
SUMMARY: Girl moves to a new town, meets a gorgeous vampire, falls in love with the vampire, vampire falls in love with her too, saves her countless numbers of times, and they live somewhat happily ever after. We all know the story, right?
So what happens when plain Edward Swan meets mysterious Isabella Cullen.
Alice's P.o.v.
"You can't leave me, not now, you can't! I love you, please don't leave me! Please, just stay with me! Please." I pleaded.
"I had finally found him, human or not, and now he was leaving me. I was going to be alone again, like before. Why God? Wasn't being soulless and tortured good enough for him. Was being a monster still not enough. That didn't matter now, because he was leaving me. Why? Why did this happen to me?" I sobbed as I thought this.
"I love you to, I just wish I could stay with you longer," he whispered to me before he crumpled into my arms, his head going limp in my cold, steel-like hands.
"Why!? WHY!?" I screamed.
I would have given anything to cry right then, but miserably, I couldn't.
But as if the felt my pain, rain started falling, as if the world was crying in place of me.
Crying for my angel and for me.
I sat up in a cold-sweat, gasping. What was that vision and who was that boy in my sister's arms? Either way, like all my other visions, it would probably come true and I would meet him soon enough.
"Jasper, come here!! Someone new is coming, and it has to do with Bella. Something big is happening, I'm sure of it." I yelled, for that was all I could do right now.
As soon as those last syllables left my mouth, there he was, in my doorway. "It's okay Alice, everything's going to be okay. Just tell me what happened." he said as he held me. I was sure he could feel my panic, for almost instantly I felt calm. I savored the calmness, wishing it wasn't artificial, but real and would last longer. When I finally caught my breathe, I told him what I saw. Who else could I tell when everyone else was out hunting.
Bella's P.o.v.
"Jasper I'm scared, where are you? I need you right now." I heard Alice as my head snapped up. The carcass beneath me had small rivers of blood running down its lifeless body, but I couldn't even care. What was happening back home. My crimson eyes smoked with worry.
"Alice don't worry, I'm here now." thought Jasper. After hearing that I could relax, but I was still tense. Things were going to be okay for now, I hoped. My worry died down enough for my eyes to stop smoking and let my return to "feeding". As I continued to feed, I felt calmer and calmer. Sadly though, a nagging voice in the back of my mind told me things weren't going to be okay for long.
Okay, hoped you liked it. So if you do, review and tell me to continue. I won't continue until I have ten reviews telling me too.
Also, if I do keep on writing, the first couple of chapters are going to be a bit slow. They are my lead in to the story. And I'm practically rewriting Twilight, so if the story sounds familiar, you know why. So from here on out it's Edward's and Bella's story, but with switched roles and more P.o.v's. Hoped you liked it, and don't forget to review. Thanx a bunch! ;)
