Hello. This is my first fanfiction ever so please please please review if you like it.
Annabeth
I
Annabeth stepped out onto the hard wooden deck of the Argo II and immediately froze. The roman city was magnificent with well kept cobble stone streets, grand marble columns, with tall, majestic domed buildings everywhere she looked. She walked farther out on to the ship and saw Jason leaning on the rail drinking in the view with a look of deep concentration. He looked so distant just standing there.
But that didn't stop her from thinking for a moment. How are the Romans going to react with us coming, Percy, How are we going to stop Gaea, Percy, who are the 7 people in the prophecy, And most of all Percy. She thought of all the great adventures they had shared, the thoughts made her laugh to herself. Then she noticed People were staring at her. Apparently they weren't used to seeing a daughter of Athena out on the middle of the deck of a giant warship laughing to herself. Annabeth streightened and put a dignified look on her face. If she was one of the leaders of Camp Half Blood then she'd better start acting like one. Everyone stopped styaring and returned to what they were doing.
Annabeth started walking towards the mast of the ship when Piper walked over to her. "Do you think he remembers anything?" Piper asked "Jason I mean". "Maybe" Annabeth said "But it's hard to tell". "Oh" Piper said. Her voice betraying a hint of dissapointment. Annabeth seeing this wanted to boost her spirits so she said, "But he might". That only seemed to make her sadder. "What? Aren't you glad that he is remembering"? "Well, of course its just that...that" Piper stammered. "Oh I, see. You're afraid that he might remember someone that he might have had feelings for" Annabeth stated. "Yeah I guess, just please don't tell anyone" Piper asked. " I don't want to make him feel uncomfortable". "I won't" Annabeth promised " But... it might be nice if you went to talk to him". Apparently Piper wasn't listening.
Annabeth nudged her, "Well". "Well what "Piper asked. Annabeth sighed, exasperated,"Are you going to go talk to him or not"? "Oh okay". And with that she walked over to the rail next to Jason. It made Annabeth happy to see them together.
But with Piper gone she walked over to the mast of the ship and thought about what she wanted to see most in the world. Percy. Annabeth had been so worried about him that she hads been worring the whole trip about how good she looked and biting her nails. She was turning in to some Aphrodite love freak. No offernse Piper. But now finally she was going to see him again. The thought nearly distracted her from the fact that this was a roman camp, and in Camp Jupiter they were enemies. Plus the fact that they were on a mission to find the seven of the prophecy, close doors of death, and stop Gaea from destroying/ taking over the world. But hopefully the romans got the message from Leo saying they meant no harm and just wanted to find the seven of the prophecy. Maybe seaweed brain didn't cause too much trouble. But as soon as she thought about it, she saw some slightly charred and collapsed buildings. I stand corrected. When will he learn. Annabeth looked around her and saw all the faces of her friends, Thalia, Grover, Jason, Piper, Clarisse, Travis and Conner Stoll, and... wait where was Leo?
" INCOMING "! Leo shouted.
Then out of no where a giant boulder nearly took out the mast of the ship which made Annabeth jump to the side and draw her sword, then realizing there was nothing to fight she sheathed her sword, but then she heard shouting.
"I thought you said they wouldn't attack us," Jason shouted to Leo. "Oops" Leo said. "Not now" Piper shouted. "What did I do"? Piper shot him a don't joke right now look. " Okay, okay. I sent them a message and they must not of believed us". "Like I said before, "Oops".
Annabeth silently prayed to her mom for them not to get crumbled to dust. From down in the city below she heard confused shouts and orders being cried. They were starting to descend and Annabeth could see an entire army waiting for them but they looked just as confused as we were about the giant boulder and had no idea what they were doing. We were now about 200 feet off the ground when she saw 2 people in purple robes looking furiously for some one. But there was to much flurry and commotion to see the faces that belonged to the them.
Then the people in the purple robes found who they were looking for. It was a tall skinny boy with blond hair. But just as the 2 people with the purple robes caught up to him he shouted FIRE! And then it happened. That was when one of the people in the purple robes looked up. She stared right in to the eyes of the person she wanted to see most in the world. Percy. Thay shared a smile.
Then it all happened too soon. A boulder came flying towards the ship at 100 miles an hour. The rock coming straight for the mast of the ship again, Annabeth moved away from the mast. It was going to get hit. But a small part of the boulder about the size of Annabeth's head, broke off of the boulder and was heading streight for her. She looked down at the ground to see the horror on Percy's face as the broken off piece of the boulder came down hard on her chest. The wind was knocked out of her as she went sprawling to the deck of the Argo II.
I really hope you liked it. A shout out to my beta crazyswimchick who helped me very much. So thank you.
Please update and I will put the next chapter out. I will not post untill I have atleast 2 reviewers from different people.
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