This is just a cute little love poem i made. I thought i would direct it to sasusaku, i dont know why :) just made me think of them, i guess.
PLEASE PLEASE REVIEW!!!!! i want to see how well i did. Any judging on this is appreciated!! judging on a 1/10 scale is good too! :) reviewwww!!!!!!!
OH! BY THE WAY: My Sasuke story WILL BE UPDATED THIS TUESDAY!! Stay tuned!! Slight SasuSaku moments approaching! :)
Plane In My Coat
You rawred at me
I look at you
you climb in bed
I held your hand
you smile at me
I kiss your hand
You fall asleep
the night has peaked
Should we speak?
Glance around,
Don't make a sound.
Laugh away,
these crazy days.
Please don't frown,
I don't want you down.
Hold you tight,
when your full of fright,
never out of sight,
you're my light.
In the spring picnic for two.
Watching the sky, so blue.
clouds pass by,
let us never die.
See you walking.
Laughing, and talking.
Didn't think it real
Life can make things a wonderful meal.
Sometimes things seem so wrong,
but that doesn't last long.
Just give me a hug
ill give your hand a tug.
its cute when you pout
you put a plane in my coat,
Made my day.
please don't go away.
Ill always be here
just take a peer
here in my hood
feeling pretty good
when your feeling dim
just find me
i hope i can make you grin
by: prosperity-oblivion a.k.a. Niki-chan =)
Once again with my nagging, pleeeeeeaaasssseeee REVIEW!!!!
And ty ty ty for reading! :)
