Fight Planet

Manic the hedgehog has been separated from his siblings and was wondering around a strange town. Manic sighed. The town was deserted. Manic's mouth was as dry as dirt. Manic sighed again and coughed. He hadn't eaten in days and you could see his ribs sticking out of his body. Manic coughed again and fell down face first. Manic got up to his hands and knees and continued coughing. I wonder what Sonic and Sonia are eating right now…probably something really delicious. Manic thought, as his stomach growled hungrily. Manic got up slowly and held his stomach. He stopped and touched his medallion. Manic started walking again but slower this time. Suddenly Manic tripped over some rope and something sharp scrapped his stomach. Manic fell, face first to the ground again and cried out in sheer pain. There was a long bloody cut across his stomach. Manic rolled over on his back moaning in pain. It's over…all over…goodbye Sonia, goodbye Sonic. Manic thought and closed his eyes. Suddenly he heard a big black rusty truck driving past him slowly. Manic's eyes shot open and he sat up on his bottom. Manic lifted his arm tiredly and waved it. His arm felt like tons of bricks. "H…he…hey," Waved Manic. "Over here," The rusty truck stopped making some horrible squeaking sound. Manic closed his eyes tight then opened them. There was a rusty orange cat standing in front of him wearing a black bandana, a black t-shirt, a black vest, black pants, and black boots. He had an earring on one ear and a skeleton necklace hung from his neck. Manic stared into cold sapphire eyes. Manic swallowed but nothing went down his throat. Manic suddenly felt dizzy and fell limp on the ground. Everything went totally black for Manic.

Manic woke up in a dim room. It smelled like dead animal in the room also urine. Manic vomited a little and wiped his mouth with the back of his gloved hand. There were no windows, just one door right in front of him. Manic coughed. He was very hungry and thirsty. Suddenly a snow white cat with sea blue eyes and sky blue tail walked into the room shutting the door behind her. She had red freckles on her cheeks and sky blue bangs on her forehead. She was wearing a black tank top that showed her belly button, some light blue jean shorts, a sky blue wrist band on each of her wrists, a sky blue bandana around her head, a golden tail ring around her tail, and some knee high boots. She was sucking on a red sucker. She took it out of her mouth and put it into her pocket. She wiped her nose with the back of her hand and spit to the side. Manic stared at her breathing very slowly.

"I suppose you're hungry?" Asked the cat. Manic nodded very slowly and weakly.

"Please………………I'm dying," Choked Manic then coughed.

"You got a name?" She asked.

"Manic," Manic whispered.

"Manic hmmm, you'll need a nickname for fighting," Said the cat. "My name is Julia but you can call me Whitesnow," She said coldly. Manic didn't know what to think all he wanted was some food, and fast. Whitesnow tossed some raw meat onto the floor. "Your nickname will be Greenfear," Said Whitesnow. "Oh, and your food is on the ground, enjoy the new life," Said Whitesnow then left shutting the door behind her. Manic got onto the ground hungrily, and started grubbing on the raw pinkish meat. It tasted horrible but he didn't care. Manic finish, his stomach satisfied. Manic looked for water and eyed a nasty looking sink. Manic walked over to it slowly. He turned it on and orange water came out nastily. Manic put his hand under it and drank some of it. Suddenly Manic spit it out disgustedly. I guess I have to wait until the fresh water comes out…maybe not fresh…but nasty. Manic thought about to vomit but stopped himself from doing so. After what seemed like an hour real water came out, real water but not clean. Manic drank and sat down on his bed. The cut still stung like hell but he didn't moan or anything. Where am I? This place stinks like death and urine! That girl…Julia or Whitesnow, whatever. She was nice enough to give me food and she gave me a nickname. What was it? Greenstripe? Greenland? Greenfind? No, no, it was Greenfear. Manic pondered. Manic then stood up and walked towards the door. He put his hand on the knob and pulled, it opened right up. I guess I'm not a prisoner in this place then. Manic thought. Manic walked out of the room and walked up to a metal railing, from outside the room still smelled the same. Manic looked down there were two levels underneath him and in the center he could see a black hedgehog with red and white streaks on his quills and that same rusty orange cat, they were fighting in a small little caged up boxing ring. It was dirty looking too. The rusty orange cat did a quick side kick to the hedgehog's head but the hedgehog dipped under it and came with a powerful left hook to the cat's head. Manic watched amazed at how powerful and fast they were going. The cat fell to the ground then got up quickly. The hedgehog was doing some fast footwork then he feinted with a jab. The cat thought he was going to throw it and he slipped to the side and got side kicked by the hedgehog. The cat fell to the ground then got back up quickly. The hedgehog bounced and shuffled around the cat to make him confused, but the cat wasn't falling for another one of his tricks again. The cat did a quick front snap kick then rushed the hedgehog with punches. The hedgehog backed up to the cage getting punched by the cat. The hedgehog was now on the ground. The cat punched with a straight right in the hedgehog's face and knocked the hedgehog out. K.O.! A lot of mobians cheered from outside the small boxing ring and a purple male hedgehog walked into the ring and held up the cat's arm in the air.

"We have a winner, Quickcut!" Exclaimed the purple hedgehog. The cat roared joyfully and jumped on the cages, that made everyone cheer even louder. "Boxerstrike lost to Quickcut and is now going back to the minors, Quickcut is going to the Majors," Said the purple hedgehog then walked out of the boxing ring followed by the cat. Manic did a small smile.

"That guy's good," Whispered Manic then suddenly someone tapped him on the shoulder. Manic stood stiff now and turned around to come face to face with Whitesnow. "Julia," Said Manic surprised. She frowned and did an uppercut to Manic's stomach real hard. Manic fell to the ground gasping for air.

"Don't call me Julia, call me Whitesnow and the next time you won't be getting an uppercut to your stomach," She said coldly and walked away. Manic got up slowly holding his stomach.

"What's her problem," Manic asked himself shaking his head. Suddenly the cat he saw fighting walked up to him smiling.

"Hey man, I hear your new nickname is Greenfear," Said the cat. Manic looked at him and did a quick nod. "I'm Rusty but my nickname is Quickcut," Said the cat staring. "Say, you're the one I found on my drive," Said Quickcut. Manic nodded slowly.

"Uh…I guess you could say that," Mumbled Manic.

"I see that you've met Whitesnow," Said Quickcut smiling. Manic nodded rolling his eyes a bit.

"Look…I need answers now, first, where am I?" Asked Manic curiously. Quickcut stopped smiling and wiped his nose with the back of his hand.

"You're in the Fighting Building and you're on the planet called Fight Planet," Explained Quickcut. Manic sat down on the ground and sighed.

So I really am lost and now I'm here with these fighting mobians in a place that smells like dead and urine! Manic thought.

"You can't ever leave this building unless you're a minor, major, super, ultra, super ultra, extreme, ultimate, and master. I'm a major now and you're new so that makes you a…Beginner," Explained Quickcut again. "But you can't leave the planet unless you're a master, I'm going to fight my way to master so I can get off of this planet and go live with my cousins," Said Quickcut. Manic stood up and stared at Quickcut.

"What is Whitesnow?" Asked Manic curiously. Quickcut cocked his head to the side and sighed.

"She's minor, she's been here for over a year now," Quickcut said.

"So I have to fight my way to be master if I ever want to leave this planet?" Asked Manic. Quickcut nodded.

"Pretty much, yeah…so dinner's tonight and they're giving some good food away in the majors' room," Said Quickcut. "Oh and your room is always on the third level and if you loose a fight then you go back down a level, see ya," Said Quickcut and he ran off. Manic's stomach growled and he followed Quickcut to a room. Quickcut walked into the room then the door shut. There were some big words on the door that said "MAJORS' DINING ROOM ONLY" Manic sighed and looked at his shoes. Suddenly someone tapped him on the shoulder. Manic turned around and came face to face with a female red rabbit. She wore a white t-shirt, some jeans, and some black boots. Manic stared into her crystal red eyes.

"Um…the beginners' dining room is next door," She said with a soft voice. Manic nodded.

"Thanks for telling me, I'm Manic but my nickname is Greenfear," Said Manic with a small smile.

"I'm Rebecca but my nickname is Redvenus," Said Redvenus. Manic nodded again.

"Can I ask you something?" Asked Manic. She nodded slowly.

"Yes, but make it fast because I have to go inside to eat," She said.

"Okay, how do I fight someone?" Asked Manic. She smiled a sweet smile.

"Oh, you just go to the Fight Sign Ups room on the first level," Redvenus said and entered the room. Manic sighed and walked over to the next door that had the words "BEGINNERS' DINING ROOM ONLY" on it. Manic opened the door and walked inside. Manic sniffed the air; it smelled like raw animal and dead animal mixed. There was a stage to his left and tables and chairs to the right. Everything was nasty and dirty. Flies were flying around in the air landing on mobians' foods and what not. Manic was about to vomit until a blue male hedgehog with red stars all over him walked up to him. He wore a brown cow boy's hat, some brown boots, and a brown belt hung from around his waist.

"You a beginner?" He asked. Manic frowned at him.

"Yes, I'm new here," Replied Manic. The hedgehog smiled a silly smile and slapped Manic on the back.

"Really, what's your name and nickname son?" He asked.

"It's Manic and my nickname is Greenfear," Replied Manic still frowning.

"Cool, I'm Rover but my nickname is Rivercook," Said the hedgehog. Manic nodded hungrily. "Won't you take a seat next to that fox over there and I'll whip you up some grub," Said Rivercook, as he pointed at a blue fox with pale green circles all over him and walked away. Manic approached the fox slowly then took a seat across the table from the fox.

"Um…hi, I'm Manic but my nickname is Greenfear," Said Manic quietly. The fox didn't say anything and picked up a raw meat and bit it, he started chewing after that. Manic coughed to the side then stared at the fox's eyes. One of his eyes was blue and the other was red. He wore some jeans, some green sneakers, and some black gloves. Manic swallowed hard and sighed.

"The names Jack but my nickname is Tumblefire," Said the fox with a strong and cold voice. Manic nodded slowly then Rivercook came back with a plate of raw ribs and some water in a dirty looking cup. He sat it on the table in front of Manic and then walked away. Manic ate his food and drank his water. After that he left the place and went to his room to find Whitesnow leaning against a wall sucking on her sucker. Manic shut his door and frowned at her.

"What are you doing here Whitesnow?" Asked Manic. She took her sucker out of her mouth and put it into her pocket.

"I'm here to train you for the fights," Said Whitesnow coldly. Manic sat down on his bed.

"Why?" Asked Manic.

"You want to go home right?" Asked Whitesnow frowning.

"Yes," Replied Manic.

"Then okay, get up and fight me," Said Whitesnow getting into a fighting stance. Manic got up and his medallion glowed then it stopped glowing.

"What the," Said Manic, as he touched his medallion. Whitesnow laughed.

"Powers don't work in this building, I tried that once with my tail ring, Quickcut said that powers weren't allowed in this building," Said Whitesnow coldly and frowning. "I learned how to fight myself, got my own style, now I'm going to teach it to you," Said Whitesnow. Manic nodded then got into an awkward fighting stance. Whitesnow shook her head then they began to fight.

Thank you for reading this chapter, if I get three reviews I will continue. Please feel free to review but you do not have to though. I will be accepting flames on this story. Farewell.