Title: The Scarlet Girl

Author: Holly Dane

Rating: PG-13

Summary: Poem about the night that Dracula comes to drink Lucy's blood. About her struggle, her submission, and her fear, as well as his never ending bloodlust. The bloodlust of a doomed soul. Based on Bram Stoker's novel.


Billowy mist lofting lightly through the window,

Creeping into the chamber of his waiting maid

Sweet transformation turning nature into man

He looks upon the face of his lovely, sleeping slave

She inhales lightly as he glides to her bedside

Feet don't touch the ground when you haven't lived in years

Her heart beets rapidly as he kneels in the moonlight

He is the embodiment of all her greatest fears

Watching her bosom rise and fall in the pale glow of midnight,

He can tell she has been waiting for his dominant return

When he places his hand on her flushed scarlet cheek,

Her eyes shoot open and her body starts to burn

His lips twist in rapture as her hand shoots to her throat

A tear streams down her pale cheek, for she knows there is no hope

And when she looks up at him, she sees a twinkle in his eye

To her it is a sign that soon she is to die

He stares are her intently as she bites her bottom lip

Her hand slithers down her porcelain skin,

As her self control begins to slip

This is the point of no return, the end of holy life

She will enter soon the dark caverns of hell,

Never again will she see the light

Her milky flesh exposed as she leans towards his bite

Fangs appear as the sound of breaking flesh is heard

He is ready to make her a child of the night

So he takes a cold dead hand,

Pushing the ginger curls from her throat

As evil leans closer, innocence shuts its eyes

His promises of life after death are nothing but lies

For what is life without light and love

An empty shell of a promise made

A night stalking loneliness

As cold and empty as any grave

Hid deed is finally done

From her he has taken energy and youth

The sad fate of the vampire

Is nothing but a truth

She attempts to lift a hand,

But there is no energy left in her limb,

She finally knows what death feels like,

As her world begins to dim

He lifts himself from her desolate bedside as he smiles,

For he is the Count and he is grand

The girl beneath him will awake in death,

A victim of the King of the Damned


Well, I worked hard on that one and I'm very proud of it. It actually won 1st in a poetry contest, which was really cool. So please, please, please let me know what you thought about it. I would really appreciate it. Thanks so much for reading!