Hey, back again. Hope people get satisfied with this. First and probably only male OC for the Organization stories.
Me: Okay, sorry about the wait. I'm still alive in case anyone was wondering.
Karrimo: No matter how much we wish you were dead.
Me: Oh, shut up. Without me, there would be no you. I created you.
Karrimo: You forget that I don't worship gods. I'm an atheist. Just creating me doesn't make you my god.
Me: I'm not saying that I'm a god. There is only one God and I'm not Him. I'm just basically saying that you are my child, in a sense.
Karrimo: Great, does that mean I'm gonna turn into a video game/ fantasy geek who frequently loses grip on reality?
Me: I do not. I can separate reality from fiction.
Koxra: Can we get started? People are waiting.
Me: Oh, sorry for the delay. Karrimo's a bastard.
Pairings for this fic: Axel/Koxra, Roxas/Xion, Demyx/Vilx, and Zexion/Risox (sorry, no new pairings since this OC is male and I have no one to put him with currently, but he will be paired up in the future)
Warning: What my stories will NEVER contain yaoi or yuri, so if you came here looking for that, I suggest you look elsewhere. If you don't like het pairings, you were fairly warned.
Disclaimer: I don't own Kingdom Hearts or any of its characters. If I did, Axel, Roxas, Xion, and Demyx would be alive and have their own hearts and bodies and Sora would be just fine without merging with Xion and Roxas. I only own Koxra, Vilx, Risox, Kira, and Koxra and Demyx's cats (Nikki and Pocket).
"Hey, I'm just running this errand for Mom," said Dyme. "I'll be back before you have a chance to miss me."
"I don't know, Dyme," said his brother. "I have a really bad feeling that something terrible's gonna happen."
"Kira, you're such a worry-wart," said Dyme. "I'll be back in about an hour or two. Stop worrying." He ruffled Kira's hair. "I'll see ya later." He started walking away.
"Be careful!" Kira yelled. Dyme waved to show he heard and kept walking while thinking his brother worried too much. He eventually arrived in a clearing with a bunch of cat-sized ants.
"Demyx."
Dyme ran and several jumped on him.
"Demyx!"
One of them got on his chest…
"DEMYX!" Demyx woke up.
"Axel?" he said. "What are you doing in my room?"
"You were screaming and moaning," said Axel. "I heard you from my room. When I came in to see what was up, you were thrashing around."
"Oh, sorry I woke you up," said Demyx. "I didn't realize what I was doing."
"You were sleeping," said Axel. "You had no control over what you were doing. Now what's wrong?"
"Just a bad dream," said Demyx. "Nothing to be too worried about."
"It was a memory of your past, wasn't it?" asked Axel.
Demyx blinked. "How did—?"
"Everybody gets those every so often," said Axel.
"Oh, I didn't know that," said Demyx. "I guess I still really miss my little brother."
"You never said anything about a brother," said Axel.
"You didn't ask," said Demyx.
"Oh, yeah, I guess I didn't," said Axel.
"I wonder how he's doing," said Demyx. "I just wish I could see him again."
The shortness of the prologue strikes again. Notice anything? I didn't have the prologue be where the OC became a Nobody for once. I just thought that this fic had to be done differently.
Just to discuss some things, I'm aware that a good many of the canon characters are OOC, but frankly, I don't care. Xemnas, Saix, Vexen, Lexaeus, and Larxene are probably the only ones who are pretty much in-character. Xigbar and Zexion are pretty much OOC. Xaldin, well I'm not sure about him since I don't really get what he's like, so he's probably OOC as well. I think Axel, Demyx, Luxord, and Marluxia are pretty close. Roxas and Xion might be a little off, but I think they're pretty close too. I like Xigbar and Zexion, so I made them OOC on purpose, cuz I didn't want them to be well, too cold, for lack of a better phrase.
Okay, due to some advice I have been getting, I have gone back into my other stories and changed some things. They aren't really big changes that affect the story, so you don't necessarily HAVE to look. I fixed some grammatical errors and added a couple extra lines. I'm also trying really hard to get a handle on body language so I'm not writing so-and-so said such-and-such every time someone talks. However, I do make it clear who's talking. Like the above line, "Demyx blinked". Demyx is obviously the one talking after that statement. If anyone gets confused, ask me.
Man, it took way too long to finish this and I haven't even written a word of my next story yet. I hope it doesn't take as long to finish.
Well, three reviews please.