This is my new story if you think that I have to chance anything in this story just say it and I change it. here is the first chapter of it.
Humphrey p.v
"Humphrey run to the north there you will find a new home the leaders of the pack are Winston and Eve they are very friendly, now run away and never come back they are here and they will kill everyone" my mother said.
"I won't leave without you" I said. Then a complete black wolf with a large scar walked into my den and began to attack my parents.
"Humphrey now is the best time to leave we are right behind you" my dad said.
I started to run to the north but after a few seconds I heard my mother scream I started to run back and saw my parents there dying. "just go and never forget your training you are the only one left of this pack and only you can kill him, we will always watch from above and don't tell anyone about this" my mother said.
"I can't leave you, you are the only family that I have left" I cried.
"find the western pack in Jasper park they are your new family now" my mother said then she died.
I cried over her body for ten and then I left and run north to the western pack. I run for more than five hours before resting. I was searching for a cave to rest in after ten minutes I found one and smelled if someone else lived in here, I couldn't smell anything so I laid down and went to sleep. The whole night I saw the nightmare when my parents died and that black wolf with his scar. I woke up at least four times in the night. I left when the sun came out and started to run farther north, after ten hours running it looked like someone was following me and I was right I saw a wolf jump out of the bush. I started to walk back slowly after I walked back ten feet the wolf began to run to me and I turned around and run as fast as I could away but since I was still a pup he was a lot faster than me. After two minutes running the wolf overtook me. He picked me up and threw me very hard against a tree breaking my back. He picked me up again and bit me in my leg I yelled so hard from the pain that all the birds flew away and eventually he broke my leg.
Winston p.v
I was patrolling with Eve until I heard a yell. "I think someone is in trouble" I said to Eve. "then where are we waiting for let's find him" Eve said. We run to the place where we heard the scream come from when we were there we saw a wolf killing a pup me ad Eve run to the wolf and attacked him until he was dead. When we looked at the pup we saw that he had three broken ribs, his back was broken and he had a broken paw. I took him up and brought him to my cave while Eve was getting the medicines. Half way there the pup passed out from blood loss. After ten minutes we reached the healers den because we didn't want to see our pups to see him.
p.v Eve
I was getting some medicines to heal the pup when I reached the healer cave I started to get all everything I needed after thirty minutes I had everything and was back in the cave. "everyone go out and wait until I'm done with him" I said. Everyone walked outside and waited near the entrance and I started to give him the medicines after ten minutes he woke up and screamed from the pain all the wolfs came to this cave to see what was wrong but I ordered Winston to let everyone wait outside after one hour I was finished and he was for ninth percent covered in leaves. "will he be okay" Winston asked me. "he will but it will take more than a month and when he wakes again we must ask him what a pup is doing out here in the forest alone" I said. "we have to take care of him as long as he can't go back to his parents" Winston said and he picked the pup and brought him to our cave where Kate and Lilly were waiting for us.
Kate p.v
We heard one hour someone scream but we weren't allowed to get out so had to ask it when they returned. Then we saw my parents come inside with a pup that was almost fully covered in leaves. "mom what happened to him" I asked. My mom sighted and said something to my dad but we couldn't hear it. "we will tell it you tomorrow but don't touch that pup he is hurt very bad" I said. "was it him who was screaming the whole time" I asked sad. "yes it was but we will tell you tomorrow we don't know much either" my dad said. "I will go to sleep now" I said and laid down and went to sleep.
Humphrey p.v
I wake up in the morning and I see that I'm in a den and that everyone is staring at me I stood up but heard someone say "don't stand up your leg is broken" but it was already too late and I yelped in pain. "you have three broken ribs a broken leg and back" the same wolf said. "but what are you doing here and why did that wolf attack you and do your parents allow you to go to the forest alone" an old wolf said who looked like me. When he said my parents I started to cry again and everyone was shocked. "what happened to your parents, you can tell us" the female wolf said. I sniffed and decided to tell them, "my parents were killed last night by a wolf and they said me to run to the western pack in Jasper park there leaders where Eve and Winston and my parents said that they were very nice and would accept me in their pack". They all looked shocked by what I said. "what is your name" the grey wolf asked. "my name is Humphrey" I said. "and what are your parents name and the pack you come from" he asked again. "I don't know I can't remember them" I lied. "he must have had a blow on his head" the female wolf said. "you can join this pack I'm Winston and this is my wife Eve" the grey wolf said. "so you are the wolfs my parents talked about" I said. "yes we are and these are our daughters Kate and Lilly" Eve said. "hello nice to meet you Humphrey I'm Kate" a she wolf with golden brown fur a white underside and brown eyes. "I'm Lilly" a full white wolf said with purple eyes. "nice to meet you" I said.
Kate p.v
He was so beautiful and his aqua blue eyes are just amazing I was lost in his eyes and when he looked at me he was watching at me. "mom where does he stay" I asked. "he will be healed in a month so for that time he can stay with us" Eve said. "what for rank where you in your pack" Winston asked Humphrey.
Humphrey p.v
I was the pack leaders son so I would be a delta but I don't think they know that rank and I will train on my own so I will just say that I'm a omega. "they never said anything to me about a rank" I lied. "there are two ranks the one who take care of the responsibilities and the one who take care of the peace in the pack" Winston said. "then I will be an omega I always played games in my pack" I lied. I saw Kate look disappointed and I knew why because she would be a alpha. The only thing I did that month was lay down and play with Kate and Lilly and I started to like Kate. When I was fully healed I searched for my own den and decorate it and when I was done with that I made myself a list of what I do every day. The first thing is hunt outside the territory and bring it back to my cave to eat then I would run one hour and then I swim one hour after that I trained my fighting skills and try to sneak on any kind of animal and the rest of the day I would spend with Kate and my three omega buddies: Mooch, Salty and Shakey. I always played something with them but I never played on my best because they would find out then.
One year later Humphrey p.v
I have always been doing the same thing every day until I heard that Kate was going to alpha school and that I can't be with her anymore. I loved her from the beginning I met her there sure where so other nice females like Lilly but Kate was the best one, she was always nice, she was strong and sexy. The only sad thing is that we can't be together, not yet together but that will change. The day she went to alpha school I told all my friends that I would go on a holiday for a few months but the whole time I have been training until the limit. I have broken my legs two times I never had a problem until one day a group of wolfs came to my territory. "this is the perfect time to test how far I have come" I thought. "what are you doing in my territory" I said angry. "do you think that we are afraid of an omega. Kill him" the leader said. They all run to me but they were weak. The first one jumped on me but I grabbed him by the throat killing him direct. "how the hell can you kill one of my wolfs when you are a omega" the leader yelled angry to me. "your length doesn't say anything about your rank" I said. "you just had luck" the leader said annoyed. Then three more begin to attack me but they all where to slow I could kill them very easy, I didn't even have one scratch. "do you still think it was luck" I said smiling. "you can't win against us all" the leader said and then all the six wolfs begin to attack me. After five minutes it was only me against the leader. He ran to me and attacked me as fast as he could but I dodged them all. After five minutes he was beginning to get tired. "I guess you aren't as strong as you look" I said laughing. Then I jumped for his throat and took it out and he fell dead to the ground. I guess training really pays of. I said. I remembered that alpha school would be done tomorrow so I went to a lake and washed myself up and then I walked back home. I combed my fur so that you couldn't see any muscles after half an hour working on my fur you couldn't see my muscles. I started to walk back home after four hours walking I reached the western territory. It was already in the middle of the night so I decided to go to my den and get some sleep. The next day I woke up early to get something to hunt but I saw that Kate was already hunting. Then I heard my omega friends coming, I did if I didn't hear them and just wait what their reaction was when they saw me. "hello Humphrey what are you doing here" shakey said. "WHAT Humphrey when did you arrive" Mooch said. "I arrived yesterday in the night you wouldn't think that I would miss Kate the first day she was a alpha" I said smiling. "guys we have a problem eastern wolfs" Mooch said pointing to the eastern wolfs.
Kate p.v
I was stalking a caribou with Hutch and Can-do when I saw three eastern wolf. "Hutch, Can-do eastern wolf" I said. When we wanted to go for the kill the eastern wolfs jumped to the caribou making it run away. We all followed the caribou but after a few minutes I saw a stampede coming our way. We could all make it to safety but the eastern wolfs were trapped between the caribou. I had to safe them or they would die. I jumped to them and roll behind a fallen tree after the stampede Hutch and Can-do were angry. When they wanted to start a fight the four silly omegas came down the hill. "hello Humphrey how have you been" I asked. "pretty good but lonely" Humphrey said. Then the eastern wolfs began to fight with Hutch and Can-do. Humphrey jumped in front of them and when the eastern wolfs saw Humphrey they walked a little back. "you are the…" one said but was interrupted by Humphrey. "I think you better can go back to your territory before someone gets angry." They run back to their territory with there tail between their legs. "why were they afraid of you" I asked Humphrey. "I told them a story and ever since then they were afraid of me" Humphrey said. "what did you tell them" I asked. "the story when I was a pup but I told them some things that weren't true" Humphrey said laughing. "Humphrey nice work but I want to speak with you" Winston said. "I'm coming sir" Humphrey said as he walked away.
Humphrey p.v
I followed Winston, after five minutes walking he stopped. "I heard you left the pack the whole time alpha school was" Winston said. "yes why do you want to know" I asked. "where did you go and why didn't you say it to anyone" Winston asked. "I tried to find out where I lived before I came to this pack but I found a smell of my parents but I was almost four months searching for them so I decided to go back and see Kate come back from alpha school" I said a little sad. "thank you Humphrey for your time and to save my wolfs from the eastern wolfs but how did you do that you are just a omega" Winston said. "just ask Kate sir she will answer that question for you. I'm going back to my den to get ready for the moonlight howl" I said and walked away.
Kate p.v
I was back in my den when I heard my dad howl I decided to follow him. I saw him meet with the eastern leader and they talked about a marriage. The two wolfs they would marry where me and Tony's son. I quickly run back to my den but I saw my dad already waiting for me. "Kate where have you been" Winston asked me. "I heard your conversation with Tony" I said and I saw that he had big eyes. "I know it is my responsibility" I said faking a smile. After one hour I walked with Lilly to the howling rock and were searching for Garth.
Humphrey p.v
I was waiting for a girl to come up the hill to ask her if she wanted to howl with me but the first girl that came up the hill was Kate. I knew I was a delta but nobody else knew that. "come on Humphrey I know you love her but you can't you're a omega and she is a alpha" shakey said. "I know it was just a joke" I said fake smiling. "I know how we can cheer you up" shakey said. "how then" I asked. "WOLF PILE" they yelled. We rolled down the mountain but I flew of the mountain and landed in a tree and I heard Lilly and Kate talking. Then I saw a big red wolf come down the mountain and they started to talk but I decided to drop in. "ow my but, my but I said while putting my but in the wolf his face. "who is this coyote" the wolf said. "no one important, Lilly take little coyote Humphrey and run along" Kate said.
Kate p.v
I was walking with Garth to the top and asked him what he does most of his time. when we reached the top of the rock and heard his howl I only wanted to get away from him. "I-I have t-to get a-a drink yes a drink back in five minutes" and I started to run away as fast as I could when I turned around I saw Humphrey's face. I talked with Humphrey about Garth until I felt something in my but until I fell unconscious together with Humphrey.
How was the first chapter of the story, you already know what is going to happen in the next chapter. I try to update one or two chapter tonight. Should I use some p.v's or shouldn't I just say in the reviews.