SO originally I had planned this story as a one shot song fic but now I'm not so sure. I guess that I'll see how big of a response I get and then I'll go from there. Normally I am against FAXness and all the same junk that pops up on FF, but I thought what the heck.

Disclaimer: I do not, nor will I ever own Maximum Ride, but I might one day Own the world. Watch out for Flying Ninjas and Cute evil bunnies that are pink.

Heartless

I Lay against the wall of the hotel room, all the others had gone out for the night. A single tear flowed down my cheek, and I quickly wiped it away, only to have more follow. Why? The single word echoed through my mind over and over again.

"Your so full of it!" I could hear him yelling at me. It hurt even more and I put my head between my knees letting the tears flow freely down my cheeks, wasn't going to try and hold them back, not now, not after all that I had been through.

"Am I ? or is it just your not willing to admit anything. You're the one full of it, standing there so silent like you know everything in the world!" I creed out

"Look I just wanted to ask you something and you have to turn it into a big thing, but that's not good enough for you, now you have to start putting all the blame on me! If that's the way it's going to be then I'm not sure that I want to have anything to do with you."

I stood there shocked at the words that had slipped out of his tongue like poisonous vipers.

"Fang please! just try to understand where I come from at least."

He was silent, and for a few seconds I thought he understood

"No Max, It's done."

The words went through my mind, I could almost see him standing in front of me that stoic look plastered across his face.

"But…" Fang just shook his head. "Fine! If you're going to be that way then I don't want to hear another word about it! I swear it's done for good if your ending it now!" I said trying to keep my cool, trying not to lose it in front of him.

He just turned and walked away, taking my heart and soul with him as he left.

I gave him my heart, for once I let my guard down and let him take me away to a place where only the two of us existed for the moment. When he walked away he crushed my heart and my trust. to How could he be so heartless?

I put my head against the wall and though I could almost hear his voice in my ear, whispering in his soft tone, the way he did when we were on the pier, the way he talked when we were in that cave alone…

"Wait!" I called as he took the kids out for the night, probably to go see a movie and grab a bite to eat. He didn't look back but kept on walking with a laughing Gazzy and nudge and a frowning Angel. She turned to me and shook her head. I just stood there shell shocked watching as he walked off, knowing he would come back a different person, knowing I had lost the Fang I loved.

Please. I thought Angel turned one more time and I could hear her voice rig out loud and clear in her mind.

I think its done.

Outside the window I could see the moon shinning through, I could picture him now smiling having the time of his life while my heart was ripped out and torn into a million pieces. How could he be so heartless? Why did I even dare to give my heart away to a man who would just take it wind throw it away like a crumbled piece of paper. I know we had once had likes for other people, we each had our secrets, but that was in the past now. Wasn't it?

"This is all wrong! We should never have been together in the first place. I was all just a mistake." He yelled

"IS that it! It was all a mistake, you mean to say that on the pier you didn't mean anything you said!? What about the cave!? Huh? Was that all a big joke! Did you do that just to pull my leg, just to see how much it took to finally see the Great Max fall!?" I yelled, hoping the kids wouldn't hear. "Is this what you wanted, too se me break into a million pieces?"

I closed my eyes and though back to the day we were on the pier before the Erasers had come to ruin my day. I thought of when he had asked me too just run away to some deserted Island with the rest of the flock, to just live the rest of our days there carefree while the world crashed and burned. I thought of the night in the cave, the way his lips felt as they touched mine, the weightlessness I felt as he slowly pulled me closer to him, the way his hand held me. It seemed all perfect, but that was then, and this is now.

I stared into the dark room, wishing I could be with him right now ,but I knew that it would never be the same, never again. He had made his decision, and now I had to make mine. I had to let him go.

"…It's done." His voice resounded with clarity against the dark walls and through the black shadows.

"Fang please!"

"Please fang…" I called out into the night as more tears poured down my cheeks like two hot rivers releasing the pain and hurt I had kept inside of me for years. The Max everyone else knew never cried, never backed down and never gave up, but the real me was broken beyond repair, or so I thought.

"…don't leave me." I whispered and then lay my head in my knees and cried like I had never cried before. I gave my heart to a guy who just threw it away. Why I did, I would never know, It just seemed so right when it was just the two of us, but now I knew I was wrong.

"How could you be so heartless?" I whispered as I closed my eyes, momentarily shutting out the world around me.

Like I said I will continue this story if I get a good response, it's snowing cats and dogs right now so I won't be going anywhere for a while. Respond quickly and I shall post quickly, youu shall decide the fate of the supposed to be one shot. If anyone can tell me what song this story id based off I'll give you a sneak preview of the next chapter.

-Mo