*~*~*~first lil bit, i have about 9 0r 10 pages i need to re-write and make sense of, i wanted to post : their will be errors in the story, im tying too weed through them all, the editor messed with what i orignally fixx it.

let me know what you think(flamers can suck my-)

Beautiful notes hung in the air with the chatter of people that filled the fall garden, a small lake held the reflection of the dim candles that danced across the surface, 17 of them for hinata's spent the last few hours doing as her father requested by greeting the of them.
'anymore of this i think i might kill someone'

Hinata smiled brightly " Hello, thanks for coming"

she was greeted by that same "yes dear, your welcome" or "happy birthday" or her newest favorite "17 eh? how about you and me celebrate later"? .hell no.

her father was making his way through the crowd towards her.'hn. its sad, these are more of his friends then mine'

her father approached her and hugged her lightly, more of a way you hug someone you don't want to touch.
"my precious daughter, i have a special surprise for you, we will have much to celebrate" he chucked, she gave him a puzzled look

"if i may ask, what about father?"
"you will find out in a moment, i wish to make the announcement to our guests, you will accompany me."
"yes father"
"that's my girl, lets go"

he lead the way through the crowd again, towards a makeshift stage tapped on the mic drawing attention to the drunken guests.
"hello our my guests, thank you for being her for my hinatas 17th birthday!" the people now were crowing around the stage, and clapping gracefully with a few drunkin "woots"

"i have a big announcement, my Daughter hinata is to be wed!"

complete shock washed over hianta,anger quickly following she knew better then to cross her father or to speak out, she just lowered her head.

"she will be wed in two weeks to Gaara of the sand"

every cheer, every person clapping stopped leaving the yard completely silent, hinata could not believe her ears, her own father was giving her over to a murder. ."B-But Father why?" she stood strong, if he was marrying her off to a monster then she didn't have much too loose."Because, he is a strong leader and he knows how to take care of his village. a aliance with his village and ours is greatly needed" he looked angerly upon her

"HE IS A MONSTER! he killed sasuke-"
"ENOUGH!"he said cutting her off

" i will hear no more on this subject! you will be leaving for the sand village tomorrow, as for the wedding... you will be wed in 2 weeks."he was fuming now, people we staring at their seen.' great...this is just great' hinata blinked back tears and gave her usual answer

"yes father" 'damn you too hell'.

ohhhhhh the suspence. heehee

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