Okay so this is The Untold Story remake. Originally I wrote this story way back when and it was my most popular story but as the story continued on I found that I had messed it up a lot and it wasn't very realistic at all. Events that shouldn't have happened actually did and people became gods so fast. After awhile I made the second part of the story but I found that I had no motivation since that story had already gone to hell and also it was some really bad writing and jumped around a lot. So I decided that I would re-write the story. I'm going to try and focus more on character developments and relationships because in the last story I had Naruto paired up with Temari but that went to hell. I couldn't properly pair them together so I made a time skip where I half assed the whole thing. In this story things will be different. For those of you who have actually read the original story you remember that Naruto was… God. He even said so and I know some of you liked that bad ass behavior and shit but I didn't. If you want to go and read the story and find out what I'm talking about then go ahead otherwise I am going to make a list of reasons that slowly lead up to me re-doing the story and things that will be different.
Original story-
-Naruto was a bad guy but was good sometimes and had too much mercy. I never saw an Akatsuki member just have mercy on people.
-Naruto and Temari pairing didn't work because they weren't always directly involved with each other. You rarely saw Temari in the story and when you did Naruto was typically kicking the shit out of Gaara.
-Toad Contract, yeah that was stupid. People told me that Naruto was bad ass with the whole toad thing but really I think it was stupid and for that reason that shit is going to change. I pretty much gave Naruto a Bankai in that story and then made him a god. I'm not sure about the Toad Rasengan yet though because I kind of liked that so I might re-incorporate that into this story.
-Naruto and the Akatsuki cloak, yeah he will actually be wearing it or a different form of it.
-His flash step thing is done. He pretty much had the Hiraishin and so I'm going to get rid of that thing.
-Character Death, yeah Naruto's a bad guy in the story so why should he spare everyone's life? He shouldn't! yet you see Akatsuki members getting killed… that's going to change.
-Naruto being able to kill Orochimaru but not be able to take on people like Sasuke then…
-Minato, yeah probably not going to worry about having him run around town all day after being impurely resurrected.
New story-
-Naruto x Temari Sakura; Don't be bitching about this! If you look in any of my stories if Sakura is going to be paired with Naruto I change her character to make her cool, hot, and bad ass!
-Naruto won't be going on happy fucking strolls to Konoha every other week.
-Yeah anything else I want to change. I don't want to spoil anything.
So I hope everyone will forgive me and enjoy the brand fucking new,
Untold Story: Retold!