Hi
Im really new to this, my first ever story, so sorry if its a bit...boring or whatever. I am hoping on taking it further, exploring the feelings between them.
so yeh! any comments or help would be appreciated! Thanks
Chapter 1: Doug Presents....
*Door Bell Rings profusely*
'Eff.....Eff, let me in, I've forgot my key'
'Naomi..... when have you ever remembered you key' Effy shouts through the door as she lets her in.
'Shut up!!' they both giggle.
'Where have you been so early......or are you just late getting in?' she asked smirking
'I stayed at Leas Last night, I realised I left my keys late and it made sense to stay'
'Mmmm....How is Leanne these days' Effy grunts
'Not like you actually care, but yeh she's ok'.
It's not like effy doesn't care it's just, the whole friends with benefits thing annoys her, after her own experiences always seemed to haunt her.
They hear the letter box and its breaks the slight awkwardness of the situation.
'I'll go' Effy announces
'OH MY GOD, your never gonna believe this', she yells
She passes the postcard poster to Naomi, She reads it aloud,
'Doug Presents.....
Round views 10 year school reunion
Class of 2009
Friday 21st July 2019
School hall
....be there or be square'
'Jesus, since when did we live in a high school movie' Naomi mutters
'Don't be so cynical, it will be a laugh. You can bring Leanne!'
'Oh you can't be serious, why the hell would you want to go to back to that dump.'
Effy ignores her, knowing Naomi will go with anyway.
Naomi's not actually that bothered, she still see's Cook, Freddie and Pandora. It was mainly because of Effy she stayed friends with them, but through the years they've become friends in their own right.
Naomi's Mobile ring,
'It's cook.'
'Hey cook.'
'Naomiii, how's it goin babes, you seen the school reunion letter'
'Yeh, you gonna go' she asks
'Fuck yeah; i wanna show all those fuckers that I did something with my life'.
Naomi lets out a small laugh –
'...and what exactly is that then cook'
'Well, I've got a bird, and a flat, and a job.....'
'Cook, you work for Keith......your his bitch' Naomi interrupts
'Shut it Blondie!!' he laughs
'....anyways it's only in 2 weeks...il see you and Effs there, laterz'.
Effy only caught half the conversation; they both look at each other and laugh.
After a while, Naomi looks up at effy. Effy's always been one step ahead and can already tell what Naomi is thinking.
'....No i don't think she'l be there'.
'I didn't say anything' Naomi stares
'you don't have to, she doesn't live here no more, she probably wont even hear about it, she don't speak to Katie, neither has she got anything to travel from London for.'
Naomi goes quite. She's glad, that she won't need to see her, its been 6 years since they last spoke, and it wasn't on the best grounds they broke up on. Although apart of her was intrigued, thinking of going back there, too round view, and all those memory they made with each other, knowing how much had changed between them.
At the end of the day Emily broke her heart, Naomi hasn't got anything to feel guilty about, had she?
Naomi wasn't angry anymore, she wasn't bitter, she didn't even think she cared. But thinking about things she hadn't thought about in a long time, might just have stirred something deep within her, something that maybe she wasn't prepared for......