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Bella
"I AM SICK AND TIRED OF YOU" "I AM SICK AND TIRED OF YOU!" came my mom's voice from the living room. Another night, another argument. Is there going to be any night that my parents don't get into an argument? I mean, why can't they just get along and we all live in peace? Why did they even get married in the first place?
I sighed as I took my earphones off my ears. Long showers usually help at times like this. I got off my bed and started heading towards the bathroom. But I heard a not-so-loud sound come from the room right next to mine. Right after the sound came a curse. I sighed, then exit my room. I turned the handle of the next door and it turned. I quietly entered the room and closed the door behind me. Inside the room I saw my older sister Crystal struggling to put on her boots.
"You're not going anywhere Crystal" I said, startling her. "Come on. Please?" she asked pleadingly. "No" I said. "I can't stand their argument Bella. I have to get outta here" Crstal said. "WHY DON'T YOU JUST BE QUIET AND THINK SOMETIMES RACHEL!" my dad's voice rang out. There was silence for some time. "This will be good for them" my dad said. What does he mean by it will be good for them? Who's them? I shook my head and focused on the situation in front of me. "Crstal, I can't stand their argument either. But you don't see me sneeking out every night do you?" I said.
"Bella, please" Crstal said in a low voice. I just stared at her for a while, then sighed. "Go ahead. I'm not telling mom and dad" I said, then turned around to leave the room. Outside her room, and sprinted into my room and ran straight for the window. I saw Crstal going down the ladder on the outside of her room. Oh no you don't sister. I quickly put on my sneakers and ran back to Crystal's room.
I went down the ladder through her window and ran a little so I was closer to her. She didn't go into her car which was right in front of her. Strange. Instead, she continued walking. I stalked her for a long time until she went into this ally. I waited till she was far enough for me to continue following her. I decided it was time to continue following her when I saw her go into this building. I quickly walked to the door of the building and before I could do anything, the door opened. I thought of turning around and running away, but I was stopped short. In front of me was a tall, built man. He had a stern face. "Age?" he asked. Without thinking, I answered.
"Seventeen" I said. "You're not old enouugh. You have to be 18 and over" the man said, thenshut the door on my face. My mouth hung open. I gave myself a mental shake. "Asshole" I muttered, then turned to leave. Perhaps another time. I got out of the ally and went home. Inside my room, I spent some time thinking about how messed up today, or rather my life was.
30 minutes went by and Crystal still wasn't home. I took a long shower and put on shorts and a tanktop. I climed on my bed and was about to start listening to music when my sister opened the door. "Mom and dad wants up downstairs" she said. I nodded and got off the bed.
"Thanks for not telling on me" Crystal said, on our way downstairs. I simply nodded. We went into the living room to see our parents sitting on the couch. "Um, girls, I don't know how to tell you this but...uh..." my dad stated to say. My mom shook her head. "We're moving" my mom said. "What!" both my sister and I said at the same time. "When exactly are we moving?" I asked. "A day after tomorrow" my dad said. "And you chose today to tell us? Are you serious!" I said. "Watch your tone Bella" my mom said. I just shook my head and stomped up to my room and slammed the door shut.
A couple of minutes later I heard Crystal's door shut. I decided to call my best friend Joanna to tell her about the sudden news. I picked up the phone and dialed her number. On the third ring she picked up. Joanna: Hey Bella. Me: Hey Anna. Guess what? Joanna: You broke a leg? Me: I'm moving. Joanna: What! Where? Me: I don't know yet. But I'm moving two days away from now.
Joanna: How come? What happened? Me: My parents just called Crystal and I and told us that we were moving. I am so angry right now. Joanna: We'll talk about this more tomorrow okay? I have to go now. Mom wants me. Me: Okay. Bye. Joanna: Bye. I hung up the phone and sighed.
Before I knew it, I was fast asleep. My eyes fluttered open to meet the early morning light. I immmediately got off my bed and went into the bathroom to do my morning routine. When I was done I went into my closet and picked out what to wear, which was a pair of black pants with silver chains on it and a black tee shirt. I grabbed my bookbag and headed downstairs. I went into the kitchen, where I saw my mom.
"Morning" she said. "Good morning" I replied. I made myself some toast and quickly ate. "Gotta go now. Bye mom" I said, then went out the door. I decided to walk to school. "Hey Bella" I heard Joanna's voice from behind me when I was opening my locker. "Hey. What's up?" I replied. "Nothing much. So you're really moving tomorrow?" Joanna said. "Sadly, yes. I know, it sucks. And I'm still surprised that I don't even know where I'm moving to" I said. "If my parents did that to me I would really freak out" Joanna said.
Just then the bell rang. Joanna and I walked to homeroom and then later the bell rang for first period class. "Can anyone tell me what they know about vampires?" Ms. James asked. Justin, a class clown, raised his house. "Anybody else?" Ms. James asked. Nobody else raised their hand. "Go ahead Justin" she said. "They're pale and they drink blood. Right man?" he said. He directed the last sentence to his partner in clowning who was right next to him.
"Yeah. And you forgot the fangs. You never forget the fangs" Zeke, Justin's friend said. Ms. James shook her head. "What about you Bella?" she asked me. I quit tapping my nails on the desk and looked up with a straight face. "Simple. Vampires are non-existent creatures, so I can't tell you anything about them" I said. Joanna, who was next to me, lightly hit my arm.
"What? It's the truth" I said. "And why are you so sure that they do not exist, Ms. Williams" Ms. James asked. "Because no one has ever seen one, and no one will ever see one. And those of you who believe that they're real and wants to keep believing that they're real, then keep watching Underworld and Buffy. It will lead you nowhere" I said.
At the end of the day, I walked home. I walked into the house to see both my parents packing things. "Welcome back honey. Go start packing your stuff. I already called your school and told them that you won't be coming back" my mom said. I nodded and went up to my room. There was a lot to pack. By the time I was done packing, it was late night. I stripped off my clothes and put on a nightwear. I plopped down on my bed and closed my eyes.
The next time I opened my eyes, it was day. I slowly rubbed my eyes and got off the bed to take a shower. After that I put on myclothes and started to carry my belongings downstairs. Finally, we were all ready, and it was time to go. I quickly called Joanna and told her that I was leaving, then after that I got in the car. I sat on the back seat at the end. I stared out the window as the car started to move. I was leaving where I lived in for years. It was sad, yes. But I wasn't going to cry. For what? After a long car ride we stopped in front of a large house.
There were a few people walking down the street. So everything was unloaded,and I was laying down on my bed in my new house. It was a huge coincidence that there was a ladder from my sister's room and down. Too big a concidence. Oh yeah and my parents weren't arguing today. That's a start. All of a sudden I had the strong urge to look out my window.
I got off the bed and walked over to the window. I looked out and saw Crystal climbing down. What was wrong with this girl? We just moved here and she already has somewhere to go. Well, not today Crystal. I quickly changed into jeans and put on my sneakers, of course, and went after Crystal. Unfortunately, I was too late. Crystal had already went into a building. A building inside an ally. Her fascination with allys was started to freak me out.
I decided to just give and go back home...again. I turned on my heels and took about ten steps before a voice rang out behind me. "What is a beauty like you doing out here this late?" the voice said. I didn't bother turning around, I just kept on walking. "Hey" the voice said and grabbed my hand. The moment he did that I spen around and hit him on the nose with my free hand, making him let go of my other hand.
The man let out a line of curses. Before I could run for it he grabbed both my hands this time. I kicked him where it hurt and he let go. I started to run again. "Why does my life have to be so messed up? Someone please end this misery" I muttered as I was running. All of a sudden I ran straight into a hard chest. In the blink of an eye I was held tightly against the wall with my head tilted to the side. I struggled to get free but the person was juat too strong. I looked up to glare at whoever it was that was that strong. It was a guy that looked about 22-25. But then again I could be wrong.
He had long pitch black hair and...and he had red eyes. How could anyone have red eyes? Unless it's contacts. That was a definite possibility. Also he was unnaturally pale. He was smirking at me. "Hey guy. Do you mind letting go?" I said. "Why should i? You said you wanted someone to end your misery" he said in a low, unusual voice. "Well I wasn't serious so just let go right now. I need to get home" I said. "Okay then. Let's go" he said. "Let's go? What do you mean by le-" but before I could finish my sentence he interrupted me by whispering "sleep" into my ear.
I had a very dizzy feeling and my head started to hurt excruciatingly. Before I knew it, I blacked out. The next time I woke up, I tried to sit up but was greeted by a sharp pain in my head, making me lay back down. My eyes scanned my surroundings. I know I moved into a new house, but this looks NOTHING like my bedroom. Then it hit me. The guy from the ally. He probably brought me here. Ignoring the sharp pain in my head, I got off the bed and ran to the closest door I saw. I put my hand on the door handle and tried to turn it, but it wouldn't budge. I started to pound on the door. "Hey! Guy! Get me out of here NOW! Open this damn door!" I yelled.
I door to my right in the bedroom opened and stea poured out. The steam cleared out and the guy was standing right there, in nothing but a towel tied securely around his waist, looking quite annoyed. "What is your problem!" he said. "Take me back home NOW!" I said. "You're not going back home. You're staying here. You're going to go back on the bed and quietly wait for me. understand?" he said. I raised an eyebrow. "I don't think you would like it if I forced you. So just make it easy on urself and do as I say" he said.
His voice had a bone chilling tone to it that made me shiver. I reluctantly did as he said and got on the bed to wait for him to come out of the walk-in closet. He came back out dressed in loose black pants and a black button down shirt. He leaned against the wall with his arms crossed across his chest. "My name's Edward" he said. I didn't say anything. I just stared at him. "Well are you going to tell me your name?" he said roughly. He peered at me. "Your real name" he added. There was no point in me lying about my name. "Bella" I said. "Guy" I started to say. "Edward" he corrected. "Yeah. Guy, I would really appreciate it if you take me back home right now. I don't remember ever telling you to bring me here" I said, crossing my arms.
Really, who gave him the permission to just bring me into an unknown house? The nerve! Okay, scrath the last piece out. "Actually, you gave me permission. You asked for someone, which is me, to end your misery" he said. "And you thought that I was serious? Do you get out much? And do you think that you're ending my misery by keeping me here? You know what, just take me home. Now" I said.
"You're not going back home. And if you try to run away, you would be commiting suicide because this is a whole different place. You would just die of starvasion. So just start feeling right at home" Edward said, smirking. What is he smirking about? And what does he mean by I'm not going back home? Funny. I'm getting out of here no matter what it takes. Seriously, no matter what it takes. "RAPE! SOMEBODY HELP! RAPE! RAPE!" I started to scream. I know, what a stupid thing it was. But maybe somebody would here me and really think that I was being raped. "RA-" I started to scream again, but Gabe covered my mouth with his hand.
I still tried to scream, even if the screams were muffled. Just then someone banged on the door from outside. "For goodness sake Edward, what is going on in there!" came a male's voice. Great. There were more people. "Nothing! Everything's under control" Edward said. He waited for a few seconds for the person to leave. "What was that for? That wasn't necessary" Edward said. "Get your hands off my mouth you freak" I tried to say, but Edward's hand was in the way. Instead, I smacked his hand off. Take me back home now or I'll start screaming again" I said.
"Tell me to take you back home one more time and you're done for" edward said. He had a slightly serious face on. I smirked. "Take me back home" I said. Before I could understand what was happening, Edward grabbed both my hands and held them with one had. He marched toward the door and flung it open. He carried me down four flights of stairs and into a dark hallway. I was kicking and screaming all the way to the hallway. He dragged me to the last door in the very end of the hallway, and opened the door. The room was pitch black. "No. You're not taking me in there are you?"
I asked, with a pang of fear coming over me. "You asked for it. I'll come check on you every now and then. You're staying in there until you stop demanding to go home" Edward said and pushed me into the room. "Oh and one more thing. You're not getting anything to eat" he said before slamming the door shut. "This should be interesting" I heard edward say from the other side of the door. "ASSHOLE!" I screamed. Edward laughed his way to wherever he was going.
He thinks that he can win. Hah. Hilarious. He expects meto stop demanding to go home. That's never going to happen. But then again, I would be in this dark room for a VERY long time. With nothing to eat. I swallowed hard. About 45 minutes later Edward returned. I shielded my eyes from the little light that rushed in with my hands. In Edward's hands was a plate of delicious smelling food. "Are you ready to stay here?" he asked. I pushed my hunger behind me. "Nope" I said. Edward shrugged and closed the door. Aw man. Bye-bye to dinner. I sighed and closed my eyes. The best thing to do now is sleep.
And that was what I did. The next day, or at least I thought it was the next day, edward came back. Still with food in his hands. "Now?" he said. "Good bye" I replied. He shook his head and left again. It continued like this for about three days. That was too much for me. I was STARVING. On the fourth day Edward opened the door again. "You know, all you have to do is say yes. You're starving yourself" he said.
His voice held anger and pity. I lazily looked up at him. I opened my mouth to say something, but passed out at the process. I woke up to find myself in a familiar room. The room I had first found myself in. I looked around the room for the asshole that almost killed me. He was leaning against the wall to my left with his arms crossed across his chest. I was about to say something, but stopped when I noticed someone else to my right out of the corner of my eyes. I looked over to him. He had black hair like edward's, but his didn't cover any eye like Edward's did. Also, his hair was slightly shorter.
He was pale like edward. His eyes were also red. What was up with these guys and red contacts? He had an annoyed look on his face, and he was in the same stance as Edward was, with eyes arms crossed across his chest and all. He looked a lot like edward, except he looked slightly older. "Way to go Edward. You know that she would have died right?" he said. His voice was familiar. He was the guy that was outside of Edward's room the other day. What? She was stubborn. It was her fault" edward said. "She had it coming" he said.
"You know, you're talking about me as if I'm not here. And TAKE ME BACK-" I started. "If you say it, you're going BACK to that room and FOR GOOD. You could die there for all I care" edward said. He looked angry. "I advise you to just drop it" the edward look-alike guy said to me. I sighed. I could take that advise. "I'm going back to Jess. And do not disturb me" edward look-alike said. Before he left the room, he said "By the way, name's Tristan. I'm edward 's older brother". After Tristan left, edward got on the bed next to me. I shifted as far away as I could go. edward laughed. He moved in closer and held my waist, tight. He turned me around so I was looking at him. He was incredibly close. "Get your hands off me and back off' I said. "Isn't this love Bella? You and I, don't you think we are such beautiful lovers?" edward said, grinning.
"What! You're freaking me out here. Let go!" I said, trying to push his hands away, but they wouldn't budge. What was wrong with him? Lovers? Me? Him? Never. "Don't you feel the connection? Now come over here and give me a long, good kiss" he said. When he saw my expression, he started to laugh hysterically. He moved over to the other side of the bed. I let out a sigh of relief. He was just messing with me. My eyes fluttered open. I didn't know what time I fell asleep. Oh no. I bet I slept too late. Great. Late for school. What am I going to do? I have to get up right... wait a minute. I slowly looked to my right to see edward sleeping next to me on the bed. This isn't my house. No school. Remember that Bella. I smirked devilishly and hit edward hard on the head. He didn't move. I moved my mouth very close to his ear. "WAKE UP!" I screamed. He still didn't move. I smacked his arm. He didn't wake up. "edward?" I said, shaking his shoulder. Fear started to come pver me. I put my ear on his chest to listen for a heartbeat. None. I put my index finger on his wrist, looking for a pulse. Nothing. I tried that with his neck. Still no pulse. Oh no. Oh no oh no oh no. I killed him in my sleep. This is bad. Really bad. I must have killed him in my sleep. Yeah. That's probably right. I have to get help. I got off the bed and ran out of the room. I came to the first room I saw. It had Tristan's name in bold letters,and underneath his name was 'and Jess'. But it looked like 'and Jess' was just carved in not too long ago. I pounded on the door with my fist. "Tristan! Help! Edward is dead!" I screamed. No reply. I then saw a staicase leading downstairs, and I dashed for it. I ran down the stairs into another floor. In front of me was a large door.
I opened the door with great difficulty and went outside. "AHHHHH!" I screamed and ran back inside, shutting the door. I really was in the middle of nowhere. There was just endless grass outside. I ran back upstairs to edward's room. I walked ovre to the heavy curtain covering the window and opened it a little. I needed to get another look of outside. It was frightening. Nothing. Nothing at all but grass. Outside was gold and red from the setting sun. I stood there looking out the window, watching the sun set. I didn't realize it when night came. "What are you doing?" Edward's voice came from behind me. I jumped from surprise. I crossed my index fingers to make cross. "Stay away from me. You're dead. I know you are" I said. I know that I looked insane, but who cares? The guy was dead just now. He raised an eyebrow at me. "You're crazy" he simply said. "What! How dare you call me crazy? You were dead just now. You couldn't have magically come alive" I said. This moronic freak dares to call me crazy. Wait till I get my hands on him. I'll make sure he's REALLY dead this time. And he STAYS dead. "If I look alive,if I'm talking to you, then I must be alive" edward said to me, like he was talking to a child. "But your heart wasn't beating. And you had no pulse" I said in confusion.
"Like I said before, if I'm talking to you right now, then I'm alive" Edward said. "Okay then. Let me listen to your heartbeat and feel your pulse" I said. I wasn't giving up that easily. "Go ahead" edward replied in a tired tone. I carefully walked over to him and paused for a few seconds before putting my ear on his chest to listen for a heartbeat. I heard none. No hearbeat. I gasped. I put my index finger on his neck, and I felt no pulse.
I did the same to his rist and still felt no pulse. I backed away from him. "You have no hearbeat and no pulse. How are you alive?" I asked. "Simple. I'm not alive" he said. "But you just said that you're alive" I siad. This whole thing was really starting to hurt my brain. "I'm alive, but not alive. Undead" Edward said. "But that's impossible" I replied.
What does he mean? You can't be alive and dead at the same time. "It seems you're too slow to understand something as simple as that. I'll just tell you straight up then. I'm a vampire" edward said. He just insulted me! He just called me slow! Oh no you don't you... wait wait wait. Did he just say that he's a vampire? That's the stupidest thing I've ever heard. "I thought that you were crazy before. But now I know you are. Vampires don't exist" I said.
Edward just shook his head. He opened his mouth, and his canines extended to an impossible length. "AHHHHHHHHHH!" I started to scream, but edward ran over to me at an impossible speed and clapped his hand over my mouth. "Shut it" he said, in a weird voice. His voice was low and sounded dangerous. "I...I don't believe this" I barely whispered. "Do you want proof? I'll gladly give you proof" Edward said in his weird voice and lowered his fangs to my neck.
He removed his hand from my mouth and held the back of my neck. His fangs brushed my neck and my heart stopped for a second. "N-no. I don't want proof. I b-believe you" I said. "Really?" Edward whispered tauntingly into my ear as he held my waist and brought me closer to him. My heart skipped a bit. "Edward? Please let go of me" I said, nervously. "Je ne veux pas , mon doux" was his reply. Eh? Since when did he start speaking French? And did he just call me his sweet? I took French in school so I know that he just said 'I don't want to, my sweet'. "edward? You speak French?" I asked. "Occasionally, ma perle" Edward replied, holding me closer to him. "Edward, are you okay?" I asked. He was freaking me out again.
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Bella