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-NightOwl050403
Katie POV
I stood at the side of the dance. Yes, dance. The Aphrodite Cabin thought it would be a great idea to host a dance for Camp Half-Blood. I actually like dances but my half-sister Miranda was flirting with Conner Stoll (though she would deny it) and My closet friend other than her, Amanda Silk daughter of Aphrodite, was a little distracted by all the attention the boys were giving her. Amanda was actually really sweet, she was just also really beautiful. Anyways that left me on the side of the dance by myself. I sighed I loved Amanda I really did but it wasn't fair that she got all the boys. I wanted a boy to notice me, and one boy in particular, a curly haired, blue eyed, trouble making, prankster, who went by the name of Travis Stoll.
After roughly, an hour of watching Amanda get swarmed by boys someone came up to me form the side, I barely noticed them until they spoke. "So you not enjoying yourself?" the stranger asked "No," I said " I'm just a little tired of watching the boys fawn over Amanda. I wish a boy would like me for once instead of Amanda." Once again the stranger spoke " I happen to know a boy who really likes you." As he spoke I slowly realized who was speaking. I turned and Travis smiled at me and held out on hand, "Katie" he said "May I have this dance?" I smiled right back at him "Yes Travis you may" He grinned toke my hand and lend me out into the dance floor.