Forward
This story really doesn't contain TP spoilers, because it deviates severely from the plot of the game. When I beat it, I found the climax to be fairly anticlimactic. So, what started as merely a parallel plotline I found cool evolved into a complete alternate ending. Remember, this is my first attempt at writing, so any reviews would be strongly appreciated. Personally, I think it turned out pretty damn good. It's not for the weak-hearted though. I rated it M for a reason. (No lemons, so you perverts that actually like those will have to go somewhere else) Those reasons include: Intense graphic violence, including some truly brutal executions, coarse language and all that shit, and use of alcohol, blah blah blah. There's also some character death that you may or may not object to (No, I'm not telling you who I kill off. That would kinda defeat the purpose) and some tearjerker scenes during and after said character death. (I think my mother may have forced me to watch one too many chick flicks)
So, if you haven't been intimidated by all that, read on. Enjoy. And please review.
Seriously. I need to know what people think about this.
Disclaimer: Regrettably, I own a copy of the game, but not the rights to the game itself. Those go to Nintendo.
Any resemblances to other stories on this site are unintentional and entirely coincidental. It just means we think alike.
Oh, yeah, and by the way, when you review, please be vague regarding spoilers. If you want to say something about one of those, send me a private message. I just don't want you guys to inadvertently spoil it for anybody.
By the way, last time I checked this story had over ten thousand hits. And only eleven reviews. That's 0.1%. I think you guys can do a little better than that.