Okay, this is my first fanfic, but don't refrain from constructive critisism.
Edward Watching Bella Sleep
Edward's POV
This girl was strange. I couldn't hear her mind, but while she slept she spoke it. I could hear her while sitting on the tree outside the window. I came here last night, and I knew that if I waited just a few more minutes she would start talking.+
"Mmmm...." she mumbled in her sleep.+
I listened closely to hear her.+
"Edward..."+
Wait. What? My immediate reaction was to hide. Did she know I was there? I looked in the window. She was asleep. She rolled over, but she was still sleeping. I listened again.+
"Beautiful....Edward......"+
I restrained from laughing. She was dreaming about me! Weird.+
The next hour or so went on like that words like, "Edward" and "Gorgeous" and "Edward" and "Magnificent" and "Edward". Okay, that was.... odd.+
Wait. That was bad. She can't get too involved with me. That would be horrible. I'd have to...+
Well, what would I do? I decided to think about that later. She had stopped talking, but it was nice to watch. She lay there so peaceful. It must be nice to escape from reality once and a while.+
So I sat there watching her sleep until I saw the faint hint of a sunrise beyond the clouds. Then I left.+
But I'll be back tomorrow, Bella.