LittlexWiltedxRose: Hey readers! nervously smiling Well this is my first fic ever and well…
Truth: She's a little nervous
Love: It being her first story and all but I think she did ok smiles reassuringly
Pain: Don't plan for it to be too long
Truth: Cause she doesn't really have the patience
Pain: or brain power
Love: That's not nice!
LittlexWiltedxRose: sweat drops Uh these are my mind helper type voices… um yea...Welcome to my mind I suppose. If you wanna know more check out my bio.Anyway getting to the story, be kind I understand it probably needs a lot of work but it's my first. Hopefully they'll get better.
Disclaimer: I own nothing involved in any story ever created be me. Except Love, Truth, and Pain but they aren't that important.
Promise
Chapter 1: Forever
"First class my ass… When I get my hands on him… grr…" A young girl mumbled from her seat next to the window aboard a plane. Her arms were crossed angrily and she glared at the sleeping man next to her. He was huge! And snoring loud enough to wake up a whole country. She glared again before turning back to her window. Drip. Drip. Drip. She felt something wet on her shoulder and turned to see the obese man currently drooling on her while he snored some more. "EWW! Get off me!" She yelled out pushing the man back over to his side. She peered over his belly her sharp blue eyes overlooking the man. She glared a bit before standing up trying to climb over the huge mountain of a man to make it to the bathroom. After a long climb over the man she made it to the isle and started to the bathrooms.
She freshened herself up and looked up into a large mirror. A young girl around 15 glared bored back at her with sharp blue eyes. Bright blond hair was held back in two pigtails that reached just below her shoulders. She had a few freckles across the bridge of her nose which made her look adorable. Like a teddy bear. She hated teddy bears. She wore a dark blue shirt with a white collar that wasn't skin tight but wasn't loose either. She also wore a white tennis type skirt with pleats. And to top it off dark blue tennis shoes with multiple dark blue thin bangles on each wrist. A soothing voice of a stewardess came over the speaker. "All passengers please return to your seats and prepare for landing." The girl shrugged not exactly wanting to return to her seat next to the huge snoring mountain known as a man. Staring at her some more a thought made its way to her brain.
Flashback
"Maxie?" A little girl called out worriedly. "Maxie! Where are you?" The little girl started to cry. She had bright blond hair held back by a big red ribbon tied in a bow. She had crystal blue eyes and a few freckles across her nose. She wore a white t shirt and a red skirt. She sat down and curled her legs to her chest crying softly. She felt a hand on her shoulder and turned to see a blond boy her age wearing a red shirt and white shorts. "Maxie?" she asked sniffling. "Don't cry Maddie I'm right here." He said with a sweet smile. "I-I t-thought you l-left me al-lone." She cried some more. He gave her a small sad smile and embraced her. "I would never leave you Maddie I promise." He said sweetly giving her a small kiss on her cheek. "You'll always be my friend right? You'll protect me." She said wiping her tears. "Always." He smiled.
End Flashback
"Now entering airport. Welcome to Japan." The pilot said over the loud speaker. "Japan. I'm coming Maxie." She said to herself before exiting the plane carrying her luggage. She looked the airport taking in all that was Japan. He promised. You promised Max. You'd never leave me. A promise is a promise.
LittlexWiltedxRose: Uh… well what do you think? I want honest opinions but don't be too brutal.
Love: Polite comments welcome!
Truth: Criticism too
Pain: Flames will be used to burn me slowly till the pain kills me…
LittlexWiltedxRose: Yes uh… well I hope you enjoyed it and ill get to work on chapter two! BUT PLEASE I STRESS YOU PLEASE! GIVE ME ATLEAST3 REVIEWS I NEED TO KNOW WHAT YOU LIKE OR WANT ME TO FIX! I JUST WANT TO PLEASE YOU!