Battle of the OCs (Dead story, not being updated anymore)

by Fight-for-Bronies

OCs of all kinds get put against each other in fights to the death. The fighters and their equipment are described beforehand, then afterwards the reason for the outcome is explained. This is a joint endeavour with another author me quazzy. This story is dead, read the final chapter for info on my plans for a new one.

1. Chapter 1

Hey guys. While chatting with me quazzy, another author here on , I checked out his profile and found an interesting kind of story. I have joined with him in this venture. We are doing OC battles.

We take two random OCs, evaluate stats and power beforehand, and have them duke it out in a battle to the death, explaining afterwards the reason for the outcome.

OCs allowed are any race except Alicorns, Dragonesquous (can't spell that), Adult Dragons and god like powers. If a pony is OP I will mention that and put them up against a fair match. If you want your oc in a fight we have a forum for applications called OC my little pony fights.

To start for me I am going to put the focus of my current story, GreatHeart, against another of my OCs.

Name: GreatHeart

Human age: 19

Gender: Stallion

Species: Unicorn

Personality: Wary of strangers, but friendly to people he trusts. Has anger issues

Appearance: Red with golden mane, eyes and tail, sometimes golden and fiery eyes tail and mane

Cutie Mark: a golden heart with a sword behind it

Strengths: Magic, intelligence, determination

Weaknesses: Anger issues, often rushes into things

Likes the pony: Rainbow Dash

Important things/parts of life: family and friends are dear to him, and if one of them is hurt or killed, the heart on his cutie mark breaks and he unleashes his power in a fury of anger, turning to the second set of colours said in Appearence

Attributes:

Endurance/ Very High

Speed/High

Strength/High

Intelligence/High

Skill/Very High

Defense/High

Will/Very High

*Magic Power/Very High

Equipment/Clothes: a golden cape that can block just about anything, from missiles to fire to a spell from Celestia, but he has to move it to protect his front and head.

Overall Rating: 80-95 out of 100

GreatHeart is a bit OP

Name: Dark Shadows

Human age: 21

Gender: Stallion

Species: Unicorn

Personality: Always confident of victory, cruel and cunning

Appearance: Black all over, apart from his eyes which blaze red

Cutie Mark: A skull

Strengths: Magic, Instilling fear into foes, cunning, speed, stealth

Weaknesses: Over confident, can get distracted

Like the pony: No one

Important things/parts of life: beating ponies who rival him

Attributes:

Endurance/Average

Speed/Very High

Strength/Above Average

Intelligence/very high

Skill/very high

Defense/above average

Will/average, but goes to high when fighting a rival

*Magic Power/Very High

Equipment/Clothes: a skull mask which he can amplify magical attacks through

Overall Rating: 75-85 out of 100

He is fairly OP

Okay, so now we have our two contestants, what happens now?

They will be fighting outside the Town Hall in Ponyville, at dusk. I will always say where and when the fight is.

So here we go...!

THE FIGHT

The rising moon shone over the top of the Town hall as GreatHeart was walking home. Up on the Town Hall a dark figure crept along and down the side, the used magic to teleport behind GreatHeart.

GreatHeart, however, heard the sound and spun around to face his foe, only to be greeted by a skull inches from his face.

He jumped back in fright then realised that it was a mask.

"What do you want?" he yelled angrily.

"Oh, nothing much, just your head to mount onto my wall of conquered rivals in magic!" The unicorn fired a spell.

GreatHeart blocked it and got ready to fight.

The black pony laughed. "Oh, this is going to be good."

They charged at each other, horns glowing, GreatHearts gold, Dark Shadows red.

As they neared each other the eyes on Shadows mask lit up and a red beam shot out at GreatHeart. He quickly flung up his cape, deflecting the beam.

"Impossible! Nothing can withstand that attack!" Dark Shadows said in astonishment.

"Oh, really? It was pretty weak actually. Here's how you do it." GreatHeart fired a spell onto the mask, making it glow gold and crackle with magic. Dark Shadows flung it off as it exploded into a thousand pieces.

"How dare you!" Shadows cried in rage, then a smile crept onto his face.

"You are certainly more powerful than I thought. Wonderful, I love a good challenger" He fired off more spells, GreatHeart blocking them and firing some back.

They darted all over Ponyville, the spells which they deflected smashing into things and setting a couple houses on fire. Ponies, hearing the noise, started peering out of windows and opening doors.

Twilight opened the library door only to duck as a spell flew overhead. She spotted the two fighting and called the others, who were inside, out.

As GreatHeart ducked under another spell and fired at his opponent again, he realised that they were reaching a stalemate. Shadows realised this too, and at the same moment they stopped.

"Look, I don't know who you are, but we are clearly a match for each other. Why don't you just leave and go back to wherever you came from, and let me go on with my life?" GreatHeart asked.

Shadows thought for a moment, and then smiled. "Very well, I will." he turned away. GreatHeart shook his head and turned around, then walked towards the library, where he spotted Rainbow Dash. He smiled and sped up slightly.

Behind him, Shadows smiled and spun around, firing a spell straight at the back of GreatHearts head.

GreatHeart heard the spell and jumped to the side, watching as it passed by his shoulder. Then he heard a scream and he spun round to see the spell hit Rainbow Dash and send her flying across the library and hitting the floor, unconscious. He gasped and turned to face his foe.

"You do not hurt my friend and get away with it. You DON'T!" He screamed the last word and sent out a pulse of magic, his coat blazing gold and his eyes, mane and tail bursting into flames. Shadows took a step back and GreatHeart looked at him, eyes flashing with fire.

"What has happened to you? How is this-" He broke off. This opponent was proving to be very interesting. He enjoyed that.

"Come on then, let's see what you've got!" he shouted to GreatHeart.

GreatHeart let out a growl and said in a low, threatening tone, "I give you about ten seconds before you die."

Shadows laughed and fired a spell at GreatHeart. GreatHeart lifted a hoop and deflected it, sending it flying into the sky. Then he rushed at Dark Shadows, going so quickly he reached him before his opponent had realised he was moving. In a fury or rage he fired spell after spell right onto Shadows face, blasting him over and over again. He then charged into his side, stabbing him with his then sent a wave of magic right through the body if his enemy, sending him into a spasm and collapsing.

GreatHeart towered over the fallen Dark Shadows, and places a hoof on his head.

"Wait, stop, I can make you rich, I'm sorry for hurting your friend, Im sorry for trying to kill you, I'll help rebuild, I'll be your slave, just let me go!" he said in an attempt to get back on his feet and keep fighting.

"I've met your kind before, they always claim to be sorry and make offers, only to turn on their foe when they turned, as you have already done tonight. You will die, and there's nothing you can do about it."

"Wait, i-" realising there was nothing left to say, he charged up a spell and fired it upwards at GreatHearts face. GreatHeart flicked up his cloak and the spell bounced back at Dark Shadows face.

"No! Not like this!" he screamed as his own spell blasted through his skull, disintegrating his brain and killing him instantly.

GreatHeart took his hoof off the body and fired a powerful spell at it, turning it to ash. He turned back to normal and watched as the wind blew the ashes of his unknown foe away. Then he turned away, and walked onwards to the library to his friends.

So there's the format of the fights. Now, why did GreatHeart win?

Both were excellent magic users, and we're equal. Dark Shadows intelligence helped him trick GreatHeart once, but GreatHeart is no fool, and saw through his next ploy easily. GreatHeart has higher overall endurance, and his cape helped him immensely, being able to block most of his opponents attacks. Dark Shadows mask was not strong enough to hold together after a powerful impact, so was not much use.

In the end, it was the extra will GreatHeart got after seeing one of his friends hurt that won the fight, as it made him lose his temper and unleash his hidden power. Dark Shadows was completely overpowered by the new onslaught and fell quickly after that.

Now you know how the fights will work. Put any OCs you would like me or me quazzy to put in a a fight into our forum, and I will do my best.