I decided to re-write this story.. Not really much reason for it to be a MLP crossover.. Saten, his cousin Derpy, girlfriend Trixie, and their childhood friend Glaze.. Those 4 still have the same names, and the same personalities.. But decided they should be human in this story. And the backstory is slightly different. Though not by much.. These are good characters, others might wanna use them.. So, changing things up a little.. Only a little.
Sorry that people probably have to read this story all over.. But I'll try to give fun changes.. Most notably. More time at the that town in Philadelphia.. Make it fun again for the re-read.
FLASHBACK:
"I'm sorry about your mom putting you into adoption and all." Said Glaze as a little kid, her and Trixie being Saten's ONLY friends at the time. Saten has the same black hair, dark red/Burgundy eyes, and often wears black GAP hoodie. Glaze also hair and eye designs as her pony form.. She's still the stories avatar. So just picture someone with those same features. But a actual human.. A arguably attractive one two.. It's easy to have her pretty as a pony. She'll be cute no matter what.. But as a human. The gothic styled green hair is very unusal, and kinda weird.. But I'm sure it can work, I seen girls do it before.
"Can't say I'm too serprised, though Maddy wasn't the evil one, but I can understand why she feels like I'll be better off.. At least I was adopted by Derpy's mom. Now Derpy really IS my sister, instead of 'like' one" Saten said, also a little kid.
"Oh yes, Derpy's mom.. Is it weird being adopted by your aunt?" Glaze asked.
"Kinda cool actually" Saten insisted.
"Speaking of Derpy.. I owe her money, mind if we head to a bank?" Glaze said, being old enough to have her own bank card.
"Sure Glaze" Child Saten replied.
SHORTLY AFTER:
"(goes to bank, but it's closed) NO! NO! ARE YOU KIDDING ME!?" Glaze cried angrily.
"It's okay, we can just check back tomorrow." Saten said, trying to calm her down, she was beginning to scare him.
"(sighs) Guess your right." Glaze said.
"Good.. Now come on" Saten said, starting to head back, but from behind him Glaze pickes up a trash can and breaks the bank window, triggering the alarm, horrifying Saten. But Glaze calmly walks in, like it's nothing.
"WHAT ARE YOU DOING, WE GOTTA GET OUT HERE!" Saten screamed, as he ran over to her, as she was looking though the bank, ignoring the alarm. And went to a BMB, typing her password.
"Relax.. Derpy and I do this all the time.. Average response time is nine minutes" Glaze said, still trying to remember her password.
"NINE MINUTES!? Sense when.. HOW LONG HAS IT BEEN!?" Saten cried paranoidly.
"Finally, I'm in" Glaze said happily.
Sirons are heard.
"Well, uhh.. Have a fun robbery Glaze.. I'm gonna go, before I get busted" Saten said, somewhat cowardly.
"Okay, bye" Glaze said, not even listening.
Saten ran off, as the sirons got louder.
It's unknown if Glaze was caught or not, but it's assumed that she wasn't.
PRESENT TIME:
"Here's your money." Saten said, Glaze being his weed dealer now, easiest way for them to still keep in touch after all those years. Glaze has a neck tatoo, of a random word in chinese, she dosen't speak it or know what it means. But she thought it looked cool. She also has several arm tatoos. She'd the main one who has tatoos at all. Saten has a small one on his chest, but nothing else. It fits Glaze's gothic style.
"(takes the bag) Thank you old friend.. But I'm STILL mad at you" Glaze said.
"Oh come on, I said I was sorry." Saten said, having gotten Glaze fired from her current job, probably wasn't the first time he did so either. Glaze implies Saten got her fired from a 'number' of jobs. She has a bit of trouble trusting him, despite deeply caring for him. How she became a drug dealer is actually Derpy's fault though. Derpy is the one that got Saten hooked on weed. while Glaze ironically made him a thief, though he's not very professionaly, assumably. Derpy and Glaze are more professional, and are the brains of the jobs.
Like the orginal. Trixie is the only one not involved in crime, and only one that was able to find HONEST work.. Like Roman, she simply tells them to be careful.
"Sometimes, sorry isn't enough." Glaze admits.
"Fair enough.. But funny how it goes.. As kids you were the one always getting ME in trouble." Saten chuckles.
"True.. But after being arrested a few years ago.. Guess I matured." Glaze admits.
"Hey, I get arrested twice now, it's no big deal.. But whatever.. (flirtingly) Your still hotter now." Saten replies.
"(blushes) Your sweet.. But I still don't fully forgive you for losing me my job."
"Didn't think so.. You never change do you?" Saten teased.
"(giggles) Guess not." Glaze replied.