This is chapter one of my new story. HetaOni: Revisited! This will be following some of the Hetalia characters and some new ones. Such as British Columbia (Called BC) and Ontario. Do you get the hint? xD
Anyway, here's chapter one/prolouge "Turn Back"
Enjoy!
Two girls ran through the halls of a dank old mansion. The smaller, frail, glasses wearing girl with long dirty blonde hair was leading the taller girl by the hand through the halls "Come on! We have to go!" The dirty-blonde haired girl said. The girl with red and black hair nodded "Yes! I think the Thing's behind us!" In the hand that was held by the smaller girl was a key.
The two reached the front door and the girl scrambled to get the key in the lock. With a relieving 'click' the door swung open and it was the taller girl's turn to drag the small girl out.
"If only we got the key sooner…" The smaller said, looking over her shoulder as they ran. The Thing was behind them before the taller girl, called British Columbia stopped and turned to the Thing who had slowed before stopping and watching the two girls.
"You can't touch us now! You lost!" She shouted, tears in her eyes "We won! We got out before you got us!"
The thing growled softly as the smaller girl, called Ontario spoke up "Yeah! We beat you! You can't get us outside of the mansion's boundaries!"
"Now you have to give us back from you took from us!" B.C looked at Ontario in surprise "Wha-" The girl continued
"Give us back who you took! All of them! Heck, if you want, you can eat me and give everyone back!"
B.C got her voice back "No, Ontario….what if…..what if we went back….?" She said quietly, un-sure if her theory was right or not, the uncertainty was evident in her voice.
"Went back?"
B.C looked at the thing "You can do that can't you? You can control this space! Take us back! Let's see if you can actually get us!"
Ontario then understood what B.C was attempting to accomplish, "Yes! I agree! See if you can get the two lost trophies!"
The Thing made a strange noise, it almost sounded like a chuckle. "Y..ou…WO..n't...Es….Cape…" The Thing seemed to be firing it's attack but instead a white light surrounded the duo, blinding them. Their wish had been granted.
You can't easily enter
that mysterious mansion
in your neighborhood
For you might anger
it's former occupants
even if there were none.
In the main conference room a number of individuals sat together. From left to right there was B.C who was dressed in a plaid blue dress shirt with a gray tank top underneath, then A boy with a pipe sat next, with blondish-brown hair with bright blue eyes. He was adorn in a very waiter-like get up. He had a had a dress shirt on, a black tail coat, a black tie, dress shoes, and dress pants too, he sat beside a female in brownish straw hat and blue overalls with a red plaid shirt underneath, she had brown hair in a long braid and blue eyes who was sticking her tongue out at the boy beside her. On the other side of the straw hatted girl sat Ontario who was wearing a dark blue knee-length skirt with a pair of gray track pants underneath, she had a black vest on with a plain white dress shirt.
The straw hat girl was talking excited "-it sounds really cool 'ight? I say we check it out folks!"
"Thaz iz preposterous Saskatchewan! A mansion in the middle of no where? Who in their right mind would live in the woodz?"
"Come on Quebec, lighten up! It might be fun to go find it. Do y'all agree? What about Ontario? Darling, you agree with me don'tcha?"
Ontario's head popped up, she had been staring into her lap with he hands neatly folded "U...uh, I don't think it's a good idea...w...what if we get lost?"
Quebec glanced at Ontario, smirking as he took another puff he said "Well, maybe Saskatchewan is on to something, it might be fun Oui?"
B.C frowned "Still, maybe we should get someone else to come with us. Maybe we can ask Uncle Alfred to come with us?"
Ontario smiled at the thought of their hyperactive uncle. He always had so much energy at vigor. He always managed to make everything a little bit more exciting, even the most boring things could be exciting with him around.
"Or maybe we can ask France to come Oui?"
'"Pfft! Like we would like 'nother frog hangin' around!" Saskatchewan scoffed at the thought "He might wanna trip to the nude in the middle of tryin' to find the mansion! You know what, B.C! What're your thoughts?"
"Maybe...we should just ask Papa and Kumakichi to come?" B.C suggested which caused Saskatchewan to facepalm "Well duh! Eh, why didn't I think of that?" Quebec opened his mouth to comment but with a glare from both B.C and Sasketawan he slowly shut his mouth.
"Alrightz, then let uz go findz un Pere oui?"
"Stop speakin' your damn moon speak 'Bec!"
Quebec scoffed "It is not 'moon speak' you un-cultured sister, it iz the langauge of l'amour."
"...I'm just goin' to ignore you, darn frog."
"Very well. Un-cultured swine."
"Frenchie!"
"Pig!"
"Snail-eater!"
"Mud roller."
"Hey! That's fun!" Saskatchewan huffed.
Ontario sighed softly, a smile as she watch the Frenchman and the farmer girl bicker. She stood up "B.C, d...do you want to come help me find Papa and Mr. Kumajirou?"
B.C nodded "Alright! Let's go find papa!" he two then walked away, with out even being noticed by the two arguing promises who were now poking each other...well it was more Saskatchewan poking Quebec and Quebec sending her sharp looks.
B.C and Ontario headed out of the room "We need to find Papa, right? That's what we need to do."
Ontario nodded "Yes, that's the next step. He should be in...this room." Ontario sopped at a door and knocked. It was a one person bathroom and it was locked from the inside "F...Father. Me and B.C want to talk to you and ..."
The soft voice of a certain Canadian came "Yes Ontario?"
"We'd...like you to come with us somewhere."
"Oh? And where is that?"
"It's a mansion in the woods..."
The door opened slowly, revealing Canada holding Kumajirou and looking concerned "A mansion?"
"Yes, we'd like to go explore it and since we thought we might get lost we'd like someone that's responsible and can coordinate surroundings with us."
Canada shook his head and said with a stern voice. "No."
B.C's eyes widened "Why?"
"That mansion is dangerous. Me and your Uncle along with other nations went there and we were all nearly killed! That's always why your Grandfather Britain is blind!"
Ontario frowned "Dad, please let us go."
"No, that is final." The Canadian turned "The conference will be starting again soon, go back to your brother and sister."
B.C was about to object but Matthew had already started walking away down the hall to the conference room "My decision is final Maria, Tori." the girls flinched as their real names were spoken in that stern tone of the Canadian's.
Once their father was gone they looked at each other "...we've already made a mistake haven't we...?" Ontario mumbled.
"Do not worry, I promise things will go differently. Let's go back to the others." B.C had said that to Ontario many times before but it was just false words to keep the girl from giving up hope.
They started walking back to the conference room to go see Saskatchewan and Quebec and to tell them of their father's word.
And we're done!
Alright, I'd like to say that the OCs are indeed mine but I don't not own Hetalia. I thought I would mention that now so I won't have to repeat it again. Any way, yes Ontario, and BC are the 'Italy' of this story, Ontario's the more prone to giving up and BC is the more confident 'we have to keep trying' side. They balance each other out that way.
Anyway, please read this and review, reviews make me very happy!
Ciao!
