Disclaimer: I own Kristy and thats all unfortunately,
Yu Yu Hakusho is not owned by me.(crying)::::
For Your Info-
Sure we all know how the Dark Tournament Ended or did we. What if there was a fifth fight and a mysterious fighter took care of it but then disappeared. See what happens if this is the mystery the guys have to solve. 1 year later- Currently -
Yu Yu Hakusho Point of View-
"So who was that mystery fighter, Qoenma?, Yusuke asked." "Well, that is quite simple Yusuke, replied Qoenma. You see, I am the prince of the Makai. I know everything including who she was." "Hn.. So basically you have no idea." " That's not true Hiei, like I said... uuuummm I do know who she was......" " Oh you do Qoenma, sir. Then please do tell, Botan pleaded."
"Yes, but first, Kurama, I need Yoko's help. Do you think he could do me a favor." "What kind of favor?" "Well, I need him to kidnap somebody. Nothing serious. A female warrior...... She's uhh ....that will be all. I'll discuss the details with Yoko if he agrees to this."(Suichii transforms) "YOKO: " all I need to know is the purpose of her kidnap. No, all you need to know is that she won't give in easily. In fact, her kidnap might be difficult. I have everything planned, however, I don't mind you hurting her. Treat as harshly as you want. She deserves it. Just keep that in mind. Actually, you can treat her rough but I want her unharmed. Therefore, you will not fight her. You will simply attack her, allow her to attack back and act as if she's won. Then capture her with this spell card which will make sure she can't attack you. She has to be close enought though." "Consider this simple task taken care of." "yes, I know I can trust you Yoko. (Qoenma thinking: I can't trust that thief with my dog, I f I had one.) Very well, then you best be on your way. I have the location and spell card at the front desk. Everyone else meanwhile, go to Genkai's temple and get some training or whatever you need to do. I will meet you there shortly.
Kristy's Point of View-
" Nothing seemed out of the usual. I was walking back to my dorm. RoseAnne Boarding High School was pretty harsh but better than the place I spent the last year of my life. I don't know what's wrong with me. I can't seem to forget that horrible night 1 year ago. I seem to be having many flashbacks even in my dream.
Flashback-
( running down the hall in that dark night)-(for anyone who is confused, the first chapter was part of the night from her past. Now, she has a flashback to remember some more of that night)-
"I can't keep going. I have to go back for Misty and Chelsea. I ran back down that hall knwing I'm going to regret it. Then I saw it, the most terrifying sight. There, Chelsea's body was lying there. She was stripped of all her cloths and there was a carving on her naket body. There was blood everywhere. As I got closer, I saw her arm muscles in pieces. I held back a sorrowful cry. She was my best friend. Then I heard another terrifying scream from Misty. She was still alive. I had to save her even if it kills me, however, when I entered the room a desperate cry of emotional and physical pain escsaped my lips.......
End Flashback-
My flashback suddenly got interrupted and I snapped back into reality by a rose. Huh, a rose. I was alone in my room. How did this sharp rose come in flying?, I wondered. Then from behind the shadow of my bookshelf. He appeared. Long silver, white hair. Frightening, cold and emotionless golden eyes. He had fox ears and a tail. His nicely toned chest was mostly covered but his muscles' structure was visible. A chill ran down my spine. I suddenly pushed away all his gorgeous features from my thoughts and got in a fighting position." "Is all of that truly necessary. It can all be over without any struggle or fight if you wish." "His voice left my mind blank. I drew my sword and asked him what he wanted from me. He simply pulled out a seed from his hair and it transformed into a mess of vines. Then it came to me. This was Yoko Kurama but why would he attack .... my thoughts were interrupted as many vines wrapped around my body. I tried to cut them with my sword but it was useless. I called out my "DARK ASSASSIN VIPERS". Dark snakes slithered down my arms and tangled with his vines to free me. I then shot my dark energy at him in an arrow form and he took a direct hit. He looked as if he had been pinned to the wall so I approached. "Surely, you don't think you can defeat me that easily, he mocked as he jumped down and pinned me to the floor. Then he took out a spell card and instantly I was dry of all my dark energy. With that, he slashed me with a vine and it wrapped around my waist to ease my struggling.
Well, I hope everyone reading liked it. I appreciate anyone who will take the time to tell me what I did wrong and how I can improve my next chapter. I don't mind reasonable flames.
For Your Info-
Sure we all know how the Dark Tournament Ended or did we. What if there was a fifth fight and a mysterious fighter took care of it but then disappeared. See what happens if this is the mystery the guys have to solve. 1 year later- Currently -
Yu Yu Hakusho Point of View-
"So who was that mystery fighter, Qoenma?, Yusuke asked." "Well, that is quite simple Yusuke, replied Qoenma. You see, I am the prince of the Makai. I know everything including who she was." "Hn.. So basically you have no idea." " That's not true Hiei, like I said... uuuummm I do know who she was......" " Oh you do Qoenma, sir. Then please do tell, Botan pleaded."
"Yes, but first, Kurama, I need Yoko's help. Do you think he could do me a favor." "What kind of favor?" "Well, I need him to kidnap somebody. Nothing serious. A female warrior...... She's uhh ....that will be all. I'll discuss the details with Yoko if he agrees to this."(Suichii transforms) "YOKO: " all I need to know is the purpose of her kidnap. No, all you need to know is that she won't give in easily. In fact, her kidnap might be difficult. I have everything planned, however, I don't mind you hurting her. Treat as harshly as you want. She deserves it. Just keep that in mind. Actually, you can treat her rough but I want her unharmed. Therefore, you will not fight her. You will simply attack her, allow her to attack back and act as if she's won. Then capture her with this spell card which will make sure she can't attack you. She has to be close enought though." "Consider this simple task taken care of." "yes, I know I can trust you Yoko. (Qoenma thinking: I can't trust that thief with my dog, I f I had one.) Very well, then you best be on your way. I have the location and spell card at the front desk. Everyone else meanwhile, go to Genkai's temple and get some training or whatever you need to do. I will meet you there shortly.
Kristy's Point of View-
" Nothing seemed out of the usual. I was walking back to my dorm. RoseAnne Boarding High School was pretty harsh but better than the place I spent the last year of my life. I don't know what's wrong with me. I can't seem to forget that horrible night 1 year ago. I seem to be having many flashbacks even in my dream.
Flashback-
( running down the hall in that dark night)-(for anyone who is confused, the first chapter was part of the night from her past. Now, she has a flashback to remember some more of that night)-
"I can't keep going. I have to go back for Misty and Chelsea. I ran back down that hall knwing I'm going to regret it. Then I saw it, the most terrifying sight. There, Chelsea's body was lying there. She was stripped of all her cloths and there was a carving on her naket body. There was blood everywhere. As I got closer, I saw her arm muscles in pieces. I held back a sorrowful cry. She was my best friend. Then I heard another terrifying scream from Misty. She was still alive. I had to save her even if it kills me, however, when I entered the room a desperate cry of emotional and physical pain escsaped my lips.......
End Flashback-
My flashback suddenly got interrupted and I snapped back into reality by a rose. Huh, a rose. I was alone in my room. How did this sharp rose come in flying?, I wondered. Then from behind the shadow of my bookshelf. He appeared. Long silver, white hair. Frightening, cold and emotionless golden eyes. He had fox ears and a tail. His nicely toned chest was mostly covered but his muscles' structure was visible. A chill ran down my spine. I suddenly pushed away all his gorgeous features from my thoughts and got in a fighting position." "Is all of that truly necessary. It can all be over without any struggle or fight if you wish." "His voice left my mind blank. I drew my sword and asked him what he wanted from me. He simply pulled out a seed from his hair and it transformed into a mess of vines. Then it came to me. This was Yoko Kurama but why would he attack .... my thoughts were interrupted as many vines wrapped around my body. I tried to cut them with my sword but it was useless. I called out my "DARK ASSASSIN VIPERS". Dark snakes slithered down my arms and tangled with his vines to free me. I then shot my dark energy at him in an arrow form and he took a direct hit. He looked as if he had been pinned to the wall so I approached. "Surely, you don't think you can defeat me that easily, he mocked as he jumped down and pinned me to the floor. Then he took out a spell card and instantly I was dry of all my dark energy. With that, he slashed me with a vine and it wrapped around my waist to ease my struggling.
Well, I hope everyone reading liked it. I appreciate anyone who will take the time to tell me what I did wrong and how I can improve my next chapter. I don't mind reasonable flames.