Faded Destiny
This first chapter just has to do with the arrival of the OC Meiko, there is really nothing about Sora or Riku just something about there appetites ^_^ I posted this to get some critiquing on my writing so any reviews EVEN Flames are appreciated ^_^ (if they are not to ego crushing that is he he) in this chapter they are al young but that will only last for about 2 chapters and i promise MUCH more Riku and Sora to come
Rating: PG-13 for some blood and violence
Disclaimer: NO I do not own the extremely sexy Riku or the utterly adorable Sora although I really wish I did and Jade belongs to my friend but i do own Meiko that's right folks she is a concoction of my creative brain *coughity cough cough*
A young blonde haired, green eyed, seven year old girl came bouncing down from the island tree house, a basket hung over her arm. She was on the way back to her foster mother's house to get cookies for her tea party with the silvery haired Riku and the spiky haired Sora. Riku and Sora, in the beginning, being boys, refused to have the tea party with Jade because, in their eyes, "tea party's are for icky girls." But they quickly agreed to Jade's demands when they found food would be involved. So that was what sent Jade happily skipping down that beaten dirt path that ran along the beach, that's how jade ended up standing her watching this unfamiliar new site on the beach.
A lone child stood on the sand as Jade watched her. She was young, the same age as Sora, maybe 5. Her dark, black, knotted hair was pulled into two uneven pigtails that hung limply framing her pale innocent face. She wore a ragged jean jumper faded and worn from what must have been years of use for it was a little to short for her. The thumb of her left hand was shoved stubbornly in her mouth while her right arm hugged an old teddy bear with matted fur to her chest. The poor little girl looked lost and alone, Jade knew only to well how that felt. She had never seen this sad girl and, even though she was afraid, she wanted to say hi, give her a friend so she might be happy, like she was when she meet Sora and Riku for the first time.
But as she contemplated this thought something horrible happened and Jade was forced to see something no child should ever have to see.
Out of no where another girl appeared beside the lost looking child. She was of the age 14 or 15 with the same raven wing colored hair as the small one, and it was just as tangled and knotted. She clutched her side as she staggered toward the adolescent, blood seeping through the fingers of her left hand. The young one didn't understand what was going on, but Jade most certainly did. She closed her eyes and flinched, this teenager didn't have much longer to live, and she would soon be gone. She opened her eyes again too see the 14 year old still struggling to reach the 5 year old.Sshe wanted to scream or to run or to do anything that would stop this all, but she couldn't, her feet were glued to the ground as were her eyes to this horrible scene unfolding before her.
The teenager fell to her knees with a cry of pain. "MEIKO," she called out "STAY HERE, THE PEOPLE OF THE ISLAND ARE KIND THEY WILL PROTECT YOU" She coughed harshly as blood dribbled out from the corners of her mouth. Her body heaved into a ground shaking convulsion and the girl screamed with the agonizing white-hot searing pain that again flooded her dying body. The child known as Meiko moved closer to the girl. "Big sister what do you mean? " she asked quietly removing the thumb from her mouth. The older girl winced and replied, " Meiko I have to leave you. The next world is calling me my time here is done." Meiko shook her head violently and held out her stuffed animal. "NO NO NO NO!! Here hug teddy he will make you all better right big sister?" she whined anxiously as she shoved the matted bear towards her , "RIGHT? Hug teddy and you will be better, no more boo boo's he will make you happy!" She shoved the bear at her harder, a triumphant smile on her face for she believed she could save her sister. The older girl smiled and took the bear and with her last bits of strength gave it a little hug. Then she looked up at Meiko and with her last breath she whispered "I love you baby sister." With that her body gave way to another convulsion and she coughed her last cough.
Blood poured from her mouth onto the ground, splattering the sand with little droplets of red. She drew her last shaky breath, and went limp. Meiko looked over the body of her dead sister and then to the blood stained teddy bear lying next to her, and realized the truth of it all. Her sister really was dead, she had failed to save her, it was her fault, and now she was alone. Alone in a place she did not recognize, in a place where she might end up the same way, dead. The young girl had seen something that made her grow up all to fast, and as if she could feel the pain of child hood innocence leaving her body, she screamed, screamed like she would never see another day.
~TBC~
That' s only the begging of the fic, I decided to post it to see if any one would review I want to know what I can improve on and what you guys like *crickets chirp*?...... Well if anyone reads it what they like and don't like he he please review ^_^ I know it kind of ended abruptly but the next chapter should answer any questions PLEASE REVIEW
~*Meiko*~
This first chapter just has to do with the arrival of the OC Meiko, there is really nothing about Sora or Riku just something about there appetites ^_^ I posted this to get some critiquing on my writing so any reviews EVEN Flames are appreciated ^_^ (if they are not to ego crushing that is he he) in this chapter they are al young but that will only last for about 2 chapters and i promise MUCH more Riku and Sora to come
Rating: PG-13 for some blood and violence
Disclaimer: NO I do not own the extremely sexy Riku or the utterly adorable Sora although I really wish I did and Jade belongs to my friend but i do own Meiko that's right folks she is a concoction of my creative brain *coughity cough cough*
A young blonde haired, green eyed, seven year old girl came bouncing down from the island tree house, a basket hung over her arm. She was on the way back to her foster mother's house to get cookies for her tea party with the silvery haired Riku and the spiky haired Sora. Riku and Sora, in the beginning, being boys, refused to have the tea party with Jade because, in their eyes, "tea party's are for icky girls." But they quickly agreed to Jade's demands when they found food would be involved. So that was what sent Jade happily skipping down that beaten dirt path that ran along the beach, that's how jade ended up standing her watching this unfamiliar new site on the beach.
A lone child stood on the sand as Jade watched her. She was young, the same age as Sora, maybe 5. Her dark, black, knotted hair was pulled into two uneven pigtails that hung limply framing her pale innocent face. She wore a ragged jean jumper faded and worn from what must have been years of use for it was a little to short for her. The thumb of her left hand was shoved stubbornly in her mouth while her right arm hugged an old teddy bear with matted fur to her chest. The poor little girl looked lost and alone, Jade knew only to well how that felt. She had never seen this sad girl and, even though she was afraid, she wanted to say hi, give her a friend so she might be happy, like she was when she meet Sora and Riku for the first time.
But as she contemplated this thought something horrible happened and Jade was forced to see something no child should ever have to see.
Out of no where another girl appeared beside the lost looking child. She was of the age 14 or 15 with the same raven wing colored hair as the small one, and it was just as tangled and knotted. She clutched her side as she staggered toward the adolescent, blood seeping through the fingers of her left hand. The young one didn't understand what was going on, but Jade most certainly did. She closed her eyes and flinched, this teenager didn't have much longer to live, and she would soon be gone. She opened her eyes again too see the 14 year old still struggling to reach the 5 year old.Sshe wanted to scream or to run or to do anything that would stop this all, but she couldn't, her feet were glued to the ground as were her eyes to this horrible scene unfolding before her.
The teenager fell to her knees with a cry of pain. "MEIKO," she called out "STAY HERE, THE PEOPLE OF THE ISLAND ARE KIND THEY WILL PROTECT YOU" She coughed harshly as blood dribbled out from the corners of her mouth. Her body heaved into a ground shaking convulsion and the girl screamed with the agonizing white-hot searing pain that again flooded her dying body. The child known as Meiko moved closer to the girl. "Big sister what do you mean? " she asked quietly removing the thumb from her mouth. The older girl winced and replied, " Meiko I have to leave you. The next world is calling me my time here is done." Meiko shook her head violently and held out her stuffed animal. "NO NO NO NO!! Here hug teddy he will make you all better right big sister?" she whined anxiously as she shoved the matted bear towards her , "RIGHT? Hug teddy and you will be better, no more boo boo's he will make you happy!" She shoved the bear at her harder, a triumphant smile on her face for she believed she could save her sister. The older girl smiled and took the bear and with her last bits of strength gave it a little hug. Then she looked up at Meiko and with her last breath she whispered "I love you baby sister." With that her body gave way to another convulsion and she coughed her last cough.
Blood poured from her mouth onto the ground, splattering the sand with little droplets of red. She drew her last shaky breath, and went limp. Meiko looked over the body of her dead sister and then to the blood stained teddy bear lying next to her, and realized the truth of it all. Her sister really was dead, she had failed to save her, it was her fault, and now she was alone. Alone in a place she did not recognize, in a place where she might end up the same way, dead. The young girl had seen something that made her grow up all to fast, and as if she could feel the pain of child hood innocence leaving her body, she screamed, screamed like she would never see another day.
~TBC~
That' s only the begging of the fic, I decided to post it to see if any one would review I want to know what I can improve on and what you guys like *crickets chirp*?...... Well if anyone reads it what they like and don't like he he please review ^_^ I know it kind of ended abruptly but the next chapter should answer any questions PLEASE REVIEW
~*Meiko*~